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EP9

With Elija's plan set in stone (or should that be space rock), everybody was assigned a different galaxy to explore. The research teams were as follows:

Starman Fort Galaxy:
Elija, Lemon, Max, Lely

Bluegrass Galaxy:
xrunner, Nudge, Saguantuan, Popplio

Toy Tracks Galaxy:
Ashton, BJ, Dietsoda, Chilli

Melty Magma Galaxy:
Krazey, Paratroopa

Aerial Circus Galaxy:
5072, Jey


At Starman Fort Galaxy...

Lely: Whoa, this place is huge! Makes you wonder why it's so far out...
Elija: Lely, could you stay focused? We can't afford to lose the Power Star somewhere in this place...
Lemon: Jeez, why are there so many enemies here?
Max: My guess is that they're all Dimentio's lackeys. If only there was a way to defeat them all quickly, so nobody got hurt...
Elija: I could sort them out! All I need to do is...
*Elija clears the enemy blockade by slashing with his venomous claws*
Lely: Whaaa...
Lemon: C'mon Max, Lely, let's go explore!

Meanwhile, at Toy Tracks Galaxy...

Ashton: Whoa, a toy train!
*Ashton imitates a train for about 15 minutes*
BJ POV: Why did I agree to this? I've gotta get this Power Star before the others do so I can keep it for myself!
Chilli: Maybe we could enter the train, there could be a Launch Star inside.
BJ: Good plan. Come on Ashton, DS, we're leaving!

Back at Starman Fort Galaxy...

Lely: Hey, there's a set of Pull Stars where the cannon used to be! Let's use it!
Toad: Hi guys! Trying to use those Pull Stars? Go ahead!
Elija: Thanks Toad! Do you want to join our team?
Toad: OK.

With Toad on the team, everyone continued with their missions. But will Elija's plan be efficacious? Is Toad trustworthy? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

EP8

Tension increased when everybody thought that Ralsei had boarded the ship, yet even more so when they learnt it was simply Dimentio's façade. The nihilistic jester also admitted to almost killing Lemon, which did not go off lightly with Elija. What will happen next? Will Elija destroy this megalomaniac? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Dimentio: So, you're so into that Lemon that you forgot entirely about your mission.
Elija: I have no idea what you're on about, but I have a way of eradicating threats that never ends well for the offender.
Lely: Elija! Please calm down!
Elija: No.
Popplio: Please! You must!
xrunner: Leave him be, Popplio. I think we all need him to transform.
Elija: Engage Nathair mode.
Ashton POV: Woo-hoo, finally getting the hang of the Irish language! Nathair means snake!

A mysterious green flare enveloped Elija, turning his bushy, cat-like tail into a fearsome serpent.

Lemon: Elija!
Elija: Lemon!
Max POV: What am I going to tell her when she notices that Elija's part snake again?
Dimentio: Ha! You think that a worm would frighten me?
Venomtail: Who're you callin' a worm? Are you blind? I'm a serpent, for cryin' out loud!
Dimentio: I make no distinction.
Elija: Let me handle this.

Dimentio and Elija clashed, turning the mothership into a flying arena. Lely, Max, xrunner and Popplio screamed at the two of them to stop, but Lemon, Ashton and Paratroopa were so mesmerized by the battle that they couldn't resist the urge to cheer Elija on.

Elija: I've got you pinned, Dimentio. Now what are you going to do?
Dimentio: Grrr... Do you honestly think I'd give up so easily?
Dimentio: Your serpent has no effect on me. I am giving you this Power Star, however you owe me a lot in turn. Ciao! Ahahahahahaha!

Dimentio vanished into thin air, but the force knocked everybody back.

xrunner: I've got a feeling he'll be back.
Dietsoda: Then we can't afford to give up.
Paratroopa: DS? How'd you get here?
Dietsoda: Eh, random space physics.
Elija: We don't have any time for that. For now, we've got to gather the other Power Stars and get revenge on Dimentio. Are you all with me?
Saguantuan: Yes!
Lely and Max: Of course!
Paratroopa, xrunner and Popplio: Yes boss!
5072, Chilli, Ashton and Krazey: Sure thing!
BJ: Gah, fine.
Nudge: I'm in.
Lemon: I'll try my best!
Elija: What about you, DS?
Dietsoda: OK...

With everyone agreeing to Elija's plan, there was no time to waste. They had to quickly gather the other Power Stars and confront Dimentio. To do this quickly, Elija sent each of them to a different galaxy. What will happen next? Will the plan work? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

That... wasn't intended lol

By the way, when I said that there are 10 episodes, that's the number in each part. There will be 3 parts, making a total of 30 episodes.

You're gonna have to wait for the main climax lol
Then your character appears more

You know in this episode there was a deleted part where Ralsei says: 'Double Uno Reverse Card! AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOUGUSAMOGUS!'
Then I say: 'That... basically backfired lol'
Then Ralsei freaked out and screamed 'AMOGUSREVIVE' like 100 times

I just did Go Go bcz I was outta ideas lol
I was thinking of doing Not Today, too non-battle-y for an epic battle against a manic jester. Gangnam Style, dead and not BTS. IDOL and/or FAKE LOVE, just couldn't be asked lol
Also, the other characters are just there as bosses or anti-heroes aside from BJ and Dietsoda.

EDIT: I might include FAKE LOVE/IDOL as a reference in the first phase of the final boss fight lol

EP7

Last time on Super MKPC Galaxy, the temporarily-joined forces were hit by a freak attack at the hands of the Coconator! In a last-ditch attempt to save everyone, Lemon kept on firing at the robotic monstrosity, albeit it had no effect, only angering the robot and making it go haywire. Lemon sustained serious injuries from the attack, knocking her unconscious. Will she recover or succumb to her injuries? Either way, what will the others do? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Elija: L-Lemon... D-Don't go...
Lely: Jeez, this is sure hitting Elija hard.
Popplio: Of course, they've known each other much longer than we have.
BJ: Bruh, when the heck am I getting that second Power Star?
???: Hey guys!
Elija: What the...
Max and Lely POV: Oh no...
Paratroopa POV: Who on MKPC earth is this?
Chilli POV: Why? Just why? I could have sworn he was banned.
???: Looks like you lot need a little help! AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
BJ: Give up the act, Ralsei. We know it's you.
Ralsei: Well done, Einstein. So I got banned for a long time. Does it look like I give a damn? AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
Ashton POV: Hey, spamming's against the rules! So is reviving dead memes!
Ralsei: Well, guess you could say... AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
Max: Should we just kick this guy off the ship altogether?
Ralsei: AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOG-
Elija: You... do realize how annoying you are?
Ralsei: But- AMOGUS, here- AMOGUS- is the catch- AMOGUS. I- AMOGUS- am not Ralsei- AMOGUS.
Elija: Well, if you're not Ralsei, could you please quit speaking like that?
Ralsei(?): Ahahahahaha. Foolish serpent. You do not remember me?
Elija: No...
Ralsei(?): Well, allow me to make my grand debut.
Max: Whoever you are, just get this over with.
Ralsei(?): I... am DIMENTIO! Master of chaos, pleaser of crowds-
Elija: Dumb psychopathic megalomaniac...
Dimentio: Yeah, you get the gist of this, don't you?
5072: What are you even doing here?
Dimentio: Your beloved Power Star and Dietsoda? Mine. Your entire reputation? Also mine! The Coconator, however? Me!
Elija: So you're the one who almost killed-
Dimentio: Your best friend? Ahahahahaha. Nay, Elija, I would not do anything so cruel.
Elija: That doesn't give you any motive for what you tried to do in Super Paper Mario.
Max: Hey Elija, I think it's best if we stay outta this.
Elija: No. I will not back down. Anyone who tries to kill Lemon has to go through me first.
Lely: What are you talking about?
Elija: You heard me.
Nudge: This means bad... It's not usually like this when Elija's just... being calm.
Lely: I'm scared!
Chilli: If you DARE play BTS aloud on your iPod...
*Lely blasts Go Go, much to Chilli's annoyance*
Chilli (barely audible over the music): I HATE YOU, LELY!!!
Elija: Hey Lely, thanks for the BGM! Anois scriosaimis an rud seo!
Ashton POV: And again with the Irish! I've never been more confused in my life!

With Dimentio framing an exiled MKPCian, but then revealing his new self, that was a bit anti-climactic. However, what will happen? Will Elija succeed over the new threat? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

EP6

Both sides have come to a temporary agreement to dispel the acts of Cursa. But will they succeed? Will Elija's envy postpone the advance? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

BJ: So how's this gonna work? Everyone gonna shoot this fake Bender or what?
Elija: That was my plan...
Lemon: Hey Elija, calm down. You don't want to transform into a snake again.
Elija: You're right I guess, even though you're not strictly helping.
Lely and Max: Can everybody please just calm down? BJ, stop bugging Elija. Elija, don't take it personally.
Chilli: So what you're saying is that it's BJ's fault? It's not his problem that Elija's massive ego is making him go outta whack.
5072: Heh heh heh heh. Is somebody getting jealous?
Elija: Stay out of this, 5072.
Lemon: Elija, please calm down! Once you got so envious of Paratroopa that you came close to eating him alive!
Popplio: Lemon's right, Elija. You've seriously gotta calm down.
Elija: Could you just stop making me jealous of you lot? Paratroopa, Lely, Chilli, prepare the artillery. We're going all-out. It's now or never.

The cannons were primed and they continuously shot at the Coconator, weakening its defences. It still kept shooting explosive coconuts at the base, albeit they both would not give up.

Max: Hey Elija! One of the engines has been ruptured!
Elija: Paratroopa, check the engines. Everyone else, keep firing.
Cursa: BAHAHAHAHA! Your Nerf gun bullets have no effect against me or Coconator!
Lemon: Then get a load of this, you tinhead!
Coconator: INITIALIZING LASER.

The Coconator fired a huge laser at the mothership, sending it hurtling through the sky.

Elija: L-Lemon?
Max: Hey Elija, what's up?
Elija: N-nothing...
Max: Uhhh... OK.
Max POV: Is he really all right? He sounded like he was gonna cry or something.
Elija POV: I've gotta get her someplace safe. And that robot... She attacked it... Jeez, did she defend me?

Elsewhere on board the mothership...

Lely: Great. Now we don't have the second Power Star. Cursa's gonna take over the world.
Paratroopa: Cheer up Lely, at least we have one.
Chilli: I hate to say it, but Lely's right. What if Cursa gets to the other Power Stars before we do? The universe as we know it could be under his control, or worse.
5072: Then what are we doing just standing here? Let's go destroy that freak Cursa!
Popplio: Hold up! Go destroy that freak Cursa? With the state that Lemon's in? No way!
BJ: Stop being the rational one, nerd. I just want those Stars for myself. That way there'd be no need for such stupid quarreling.
Popplio POV: And you call me nerdy?

Back in the cabin...

Elija: Still not awake... I can't afford to lose her as well...
Max: OK, Elija, what's seriously going on?
Elija: Hey, why're you getting mad at me?
Max: I... sorry.
Elija: No, it's quite all right.
Max: So please, just tell me, what's going on?
Elija: Remember the attack?
Max: Yeah, that was probably the worst situation we've ever been in.
Saguantuan: Hey, what's going on?
Max: Not now, Saguantuan.
Saguantuan: Oh, OK.
Elija: Max, Lemon defended me.
Max: What?
Elija: Yeah, she tried to fire all the missiles at once in a futile yet brave attempt to get the Power Star. But the Coconator's laser fired before she could immobilize the robot. I called, for her to take cover, albeit it was too late.
Max: So... she's unconscious?
Elija: Y-yeah...

With Lemon unconscious, and the second Power Star still in Cursa's grasp, what will the others do now? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Sorry it's taking a bit longer than expected, I'm just trying to figure out the plot because there's a major plot twist in the second half of Episode 6 lol

Hi guys, sorry I haven't been posting a while. There was the whole 'Ask Me Anything trend' as well as some other matters I had to attend to (high school, homework, yada yada yada)
But the next episode will be coming out today, so that's good (I think).
Can I also remind you that the main climax hasn't even happened yet, so enough talk about The Heroes committing 'warcrimes' or The Villains 'not being villainous enough'

And yes, I know some of them are 'The Villains', including myself, but right now the focus isn't crimes committed solely by me, but rather defeating Cursa and restoring peace to the galaxy
You'll see in today's episode...
EDIT: Bruh, I'm trying to keep things comedic but people just talk about random stuff istg I don't associate with the fanfic lol

Nobody's at war, Dietsoda
At least, not in the fanfic
And 'warcrimes'? Everyone's just trying to save the universe by fighting evil and collecting Power Stars. I don't think that trying to do that is criminal lol

It's just a nickname which I thought would match your character's personality and development throughout the fanfic

EP5

The Heroes and The Villains have now joined forces against Cursa. Both  sides are now getting ready to take on Cursa's new creation, the Coconator. But will they emerge victorious? Find out in this Bonfire Night Special of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Lemon: So where are we going to find Cursa?
Lely: According to these readings, he's on a deserted island to the west of this place.
5072: But how are we meant to get there?! It's not like we have a boat or something!
Paratroopa: Hey guys, the airship's not working.
Elija: Great, just what we needed(!)
Max: Easy-peasy.
Elija: What do you mean 'easy-peasy?' We've got to repair the ship!
Lely: Elija's right Max, I just can't stand seeing my friends in trouble like this, even if they're toxic, dark or evil or even all three.
Max: I agree. That's what I meant by 'easy-peasy.' If only we had some metal around here...
Saguantuan: Coconator left a few scraps over here.
5072 and Paratroopa: There are more here too!
Elija: Excellent. Now my plan is nascent.
Everyone: Huh?
Elija: Lemon! Grab my flare, please.
Lemon: Here it is! I found it among a few pieces of robotic space junk.
Elija: Great. Everyone, in the newly-repaired airship!

They sailed into the vast blue yonder, cutting the air beneath their very feet.

Elija: Now let's give that Cursa a bonfire night it'll never forget!
Chilli: Yay, fireworks!
Lemon: And not the good kind! Elija packed it with heated nitrogen! Something random, sure, but it'll at least burn and freeze the enemy!
Elija: Perfect. Lely, do you have the false white flags?
Lely: Yep! I'm holding them right now!
Elija: Now on the count of three, I'll fire this spark several times while each of you waves one of these flags whilst pretending to surrender.
Paratroopa and Lemon: Which will lure Cursa right into our trap! Elija, you're a genius!
Elija: Thank you both. Now, are ye all ready?
Max POV: He's getting serious now... That strong Irish accent isn't there for the sake of it...
Elija: AON! DHÁ! TRÍ!
Ashton POV: Wait, was that one, two, three in Irish? How does Elija expect us to know THAT?!

Everyone started to pretend to surrender whilst Elija periodically blasted the flare. It went as expected - both Cursa and Coconator fell for it! But what will happen next? Will they obtain the second Power Star? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

I'm writing the next episode now, and your character will continue developing as the story progresses

Yeah, that line was meant for 5072 originally

No it's just Cursa pretending to be him... I know this fanfic is weird sometimes lol

EP4

The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.

Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...

Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.

Back at Tropical District Galaxy...

Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-

Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.

Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.

With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.

Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.

But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!