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[FANFIC] Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising
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6102 pts ★ RacerOn 2023-02-13 at 21:38:18
This whole fanfic started on Halloween's Day lmfao, during the autumnal holidays, and now we are already during the winter holidays and the final episode is gonna be released
On 2023-02-13 at 10:35:25
3On 2023-02-13 at 03:37:07
Fiery: What- LOOKS LIKE A BEAR THAT EATS PEOPLE?!
Lely: Uhhh... what the fuck? Are you describing a cannibal...?
Fiery: NO, YOU IDIOT
Lely: Uhhh... what the fuck? Are you describing a cannibal...?
Fiery: NO, YOU IDIOT
That got me lol
I don't know why this line of mine is so dumb but whatever x)
2On 2023-02-01 at 13:34:01
S3EP5
At long last, The Resistance have made it across the first of many trials put in place by Dietsoda. As they make haste for his lair, they must be wary of spies from within...
Lemon: B-but why?
Ralsei: Beats me. If I had to bet, it's probably brainwashing or hypnosis.
Lely: So... you're saying...
Nudge: Either way, he's gonna die...
IlluZhion: Calm down Nudge, if he IS being manipulated all we have to do is destroy the source.
Krazey: Sorry Nudge, but the boss is right.
Max: Yeah, we can't just murder someone. That's not what heroes do.
Lemon: Let's just get this over and done with already. It's not like we're gonna get shit done if we talk about how we're gonna do it.
At the base of the lair...
Popplio: This place freaks me out...
Ralsei: Cry about it bitch, we're going in.
Osc: Shit, there's no door here... I'mma bust through the wall...
???: Not NESessary.
IlluZhion: I fucking swear down, whoever made that dad jo- oh hey Fiery.
Max and Lely: Lemme guess, Club IlluZhion?
*Max and Lely stare at each other and giggle*
Fiery: HOW'D YOU KNOW THAT?!
Ralsei: Well naaah then bitch, it's obvious. Osc and me both got here via the nightclub.
Nudge: What were you doing there anyway? Looking for someone or just in for a pint or two?
Fiery: Eh, I was just catching a pint. Was NOT expecting to wind up 10 billion light years from Earth- oh yeah, the wall? I'mma just...
*The false wall burns down*
Lemon: Great, we can get in! Time to save the multiverse!
In the castle...
Dietsoda: How sweet, they're coming in...
xrunner: What're we gonna do now bro?
Dietsoda: Activate the traps. We can't risk them foiling our plans...
xrunner: Got it.
Seven floors down...
*Lava gushes in from nowhere*
Popplio: WAAAAAAAUUUUUUUGGGGGH!!!
Lemon: This way! Hurry!
*THWOMP!*
IlluZhion: Oh great, Thwomps...
*They slide under the Thwomp's path*
Nudge: That was-
Lemon: LOOK OUT!
*An ax swings in from nowhere, Nudge dodges just in time*
IlluZhion: Ah crap, I smell garlic...
Lely: Well, sayonara to you and Lemon then... Wario's in the other room...
Osc and Fiery: Just why?
Max: Waluigi's in there as well...
IlluZhion: Fuck this, I'm fighting 'em.
Lemon: Me too...
Wario: HAH HAH HAH! Goodbye, losers!
IlluZhion: Pffft, bring it on, fatso.
Waluigi: WALUIGI GONNA WIN!
*Lemon and Waluigi fight while IlluZhion and Wario fight*
Max: Come on you two...
Wario: BUUUUUUURRRRRRRP!
IlluZhion: Ah shit...
*IlluZhion explodes into a load of bats*
Wario: WAH HAH- Huh?
Waluigi: I'MMA HELP-A YOU BR-
*Lemon throws a bunch of cyber-shurikens at Waluigi*
Lemon: Don't mess with me again, you bony dipshit.
*The bats manage to scare off Wario, at which point they turn back into IlluZhion*
Lely: Wow... I don't think I've ever seen IlluZhion and Lemon like that... Anyway, we should get going...
At long last, The Resistance have made it across the first of many trials put in place by Dietsoda. As they make haste for his lair, they must be wary of spies from within...
Lemon: B-but why?
Ralsei: Beats me. If I had to bet, it's probably brainwashing or hypnosis.
Lely: So... you're saying...
Nudge: Either way, he's gonna die...
IlluZhion: Calm down Nudge, if he IS being manipulated all we have to do is destroy the source.
Krazey: Sorry Nudge, but the boss is right.
Max: Yeah, we can't just murder someone. That's not what heroes do.
Lemon: Let's just get this over and done with already. It's not like we're gonna get shit done if we talk about how we're gonna do it.
At the base of the lair...
Popplio: This place freaks me out...
Ralsei: Cry about it bitch, we're going in.
Osc: Shit, there's no door here... I'mma bust through the wall...
???: Not NESessary.
IlluZhion: I fucking swear down, whoever made that dad jo- oh hey Fiery.
Max and Lely: Lemme guess, Club IlluZhion?
*Max and Lely stare at each other and giggle*
Fiery: HOW'D YOU KNOW THAT?!
Ralsei: Well naaah then bitch, it's obvious. Osc and me both got here via the nightclub.
Nudge: What were you doing there anyway? Looking for someone or just in for a pint or two?
Fiery: Eh, I was just catching a pint. Was NOT expecting to wind up 10 billion light years from Earth- oh yeah, the wall? I'mma just...
*The false wall burns down*
Lemon: Great, we can get in! Time to save the multiverse!
In the castle...
Dietsoda: How sweet, they're coming in...
xrunner: What're we gonna do now bro?
Dietsoda: Activate the traps. We can't risk them foiling our plans...
xrunner: Got it.
Seven floors down...
*Lava gushes in from nowhere*
Popplio: WAAAAAAAUUUUUUUGGGGGH!!!
Lemon: This way! Hurry!
*THWOMP!*
IlluZhion: Oh great, Thwomps...
*They slide under the Thwomp's path*
Nudge: That was-
Lemon: LOOK OUT!
*An ax swings in from nowhere, Nudge dodges just in time*
IlluZhion: Ah crap, I smell garlic...
Lely: Well, sayonara to you and Lemon then... Wario's in the other room...
Osc and Fiery: Just why?
Max: Waluigi's in there as well...
IlluZhion: Fuck this, I'm fighting 'em.
Lemon: Me too...
Wario: HAH HAH HAH! Goodbye, losers!
IlluZhion: Pffft, bring it on, fatso.
Waluigi: WALUIGI GONNA WIN!
*Lemon and Waluigi fight while IlluZhion and Wario fight*
Max: Come on you two...
Wario: BUUUUUUURRRRRRRP!
IlluZhion: Ah shit...
*IlluZhion explodes into a load of bats*
Wario: WAH HAH- Huh?
Waluigi: I'MMA HELP-A YOU BR-
*Lemon throws a bunch of cyber-shurikens at Waluigi*
Lemon: Don't mess with me again, you bony dipshit.
*The bats manage to scare off Wario, at which point they turn back into IlluZhion*
Lely: Wow... I don't think I've ever seen IlluZhion and Lemon like that... Anyway, we should get going...
This episode was great, this Fiery pun was absolutely well thought but indeed it sounds like a dad joke. The only complaint I have to say is how Lemon sounds overly agressive and dark, more than her actual personnality, it sounds more like what you would want her to be, as an edgelord, than th eactual Lemon. That feels kinda unnatural if you ask me. What's with the Club IlluZhion too ? I didn't understand...
Anyways, this fanfic is great nonetheless. Good job.
I have shit humor
You can't be worse than me. I'm literally the worst jokester on Earth
Not NESesary to say that. I’m sorry, force of habit.
Not SNESsary to argue with me about that when you don't know how bad my jokes are
On 2023-01-31 at 21:52:27
S3EP5
At long last, The Resistance have made it across the first of many trials put in place by Dietsoda. As they make haste for his lair, they must be wary of spies from within...
Lemon: B-but why?
Ralsei: Beats me. If I had to bet, it's probably brainwashing or hypnosis.
Lely: So... you're saying...
Nudge: Either way, he's gonna die...
IlluZhion: Calm down Nudge, if he IS being manipulated all we have to do is destroy the source.
Krazey: Sorry Nudge, but the boss is right.
Max: Yeah, we can't just murder someone. That's not what heroes do.
Lemon: Let's just get this over and done with already. It's not like we're gonna get shit done if we talk about how we're gonna do it.
At the base of the lair...
Popplio: This place freaks me out...
Ralsei: Cry about it bitch, we're going in.
Osc: Shit, there's no door here... I'mma bust through the wall...
???: Not NESessary.
IlluZhion: I fucking swear down, whoever made that dad jo- oh hey Fiery.
Max and Lely: Lemme guess, Club IlluZhion?
*Max and Lely stare at each other and giggle*
Fiery: HOW'D YOU KNOW THAT?!
Ralsei: Well naaah then bitch, it's obvious. Osc and me both got here via the nightclub.
Nudge: What were you doing there anyway? Looking for someone or just in for a pint or two?
Fiery: Eh, I was just catching a pint. Was NOT expecting to wind up 10 billion light years from Earth- oh yeah, the wall? I'mma just...
*The false wall burns down*
Lemon: Great, we can get in! Time to save the multiverse!
In the castle...
Dietsoda: How sweet, they're coming in...
xrunner: What're we gonna do now bro?
Dietsoda: Activate the traps. We can't risk them foiling our plans...
xrunner: Got it.
Seven floors down...
*Lava gushes in from nowhere*
Popplio: WAAAAAAAUUUUUUUGGGGGH!!!
Lemon: This way! Hurry!
*THWOMP!*
IlluZhion: Oh great, Thwomps...
*They slide under the Thwomp's path*
Nudge: That was-
Lemon: LOOK OUT!
*An ax swings in from nowhere, Nudge dodges just in time*
IlluZhion: Ah crap, I smell garlic...
Lely: Well, sayonara to you and Lemon then... Wario's in the other room...
Osc and Fiery: Just why?
Max: Waluigi's in there as well...
IlluZhion: Fuck this, I'm fighting 'em.
Lemon: Me too...
Wario: HAH HAH HAH! Goodbye, losers!
IlluZhion: Pffft, bring it on, fatso.
Waluigi: WALUIGI GONNA WIN!
*Lemon and Waluigi fight while IlluZhion and Wario fight*
Max: Come on you two...
Wario: BUUUUUUURRRRRRRP!
IlluZhion: Ah shit...
*IlluZhion explodes into a load of bats*
Wario: WAH HAH- Huh?
Waluigi: I'MMA HELP-A YOU BR-
*Lemon throws a bunch of cyber-shurikens at Waluigi*
Lemon: Don't mess with me again, you bony dipshit.
*The bats manage to scare off Wario, at which point they turn back into IlluZhion*
Lely: Wow... I don't think I've ever seen IlluZhion and Lemon like that... Anyway, we should get going...
At long last, The Resistance have made it across the first of many trials put in place by Dietsoda. As they make haste for his lair, they must be wary of spies from within...
Lemon: B-but why?
Ralsei: Beats me. If I had to bet, it's probably brainwashing or hypnosis.
Lely: So... you're saying...
Nudge: Either way, he's gonna die...
IlluZhion: Calm down Nudge, if he IS being manipulated all we have to do is destroy the source.
Krazey: Sorry Nudge, but the boss is right.
Max: Yeah, we can't just murder someone. That's not what heroes do.
Lemon: Let's just get this over and done with already. It's not like we're gonna get shit done if we talk about how we're gonna do it.
At the base of the lair...
Popplio: This place freaks me out...
Ralsei: Cry about it bitch, we're going in.
Osc: Shit, there's no door here... I'mma bust through the wall...
???: Not NESessary.
IlluZhion: I fucking swear down, whoever made that dad jo- oh hey Fiery.
Max and Lely: Lemme guess, Club IlluZhion?
*Max and Lely stare at each other and giggle*
Fiery: HOW'D YOU KNOW THAT?!
Ralsei: Well naaah then bitch, it's obvious. Osc and me both got here via the nightclub.
Nudge: What were you doing there anyway? Looking for someone or just in for a pint or two?
Fiery: Eh, I was just catching a pint. Was NOT expecting to wind up 10 billion light years from Earth- oh yeah, the wall? I'mma just...
*The false wall burns down*
Lemon: Great, we can get in! Time to save the multiverse!
In the castle...
Dietsoda: How sweet, they're coming in...
xrunner: What're we gonna do now bro?
Dietsoda: Activate the traps. We can't risk them foiling our plans...
xrunner: Got it.
Seven floors down...
*Lava gushes in from nowhere*
Popplio: WAAAAAAAUUUUUUUGGGGGH!!!
Lemon: This way! Hurry!
*THWOMP!*
IlluZhion: Oh great, Thwomps...
*They slide under the Thwomp's path*
Nudge: That was-
Lemon: LOOK OUT!
*An ax swings in from nowhere, Nudge dodges just in time*
IlluZhion: Ah crap, I smell garlic...
Lely: Well, sayonara to you and Lemon then... Wario's in the other room...
Osc and Fiery: Just why?
Max: Waluigi's in there as well...
IlluZhion: Fuck this, I'm fighting 'em.
Lemon: Me too...
Wario: HAH HAH HAH! Goodbye, losers!
IlluZhion: Pffft, bring it on, fatso.
Waluigi: WALUIGI GONNA WIN!
*Lemon and Waluigi fight while IlluZhion and Wario fight*
Max: Come on you two...
Wario: BUUUUUUURRRRRRRP!
IlluZhion: Ah shit...
*IlluZhion explodes into a load of bats*
Wario: WAH HAH- Huh?
Waluigi: I'MMA HELP-A YOU BR-
*Lemon throws a bunch of cyber-shurikens at Waluigi*
Lemon: Don't mess with me again, you bony dipshit.
*The bats manage to scare off Wario, at which point they turn back into IlluZhion*
Lely: Wow... I don't think I've ever seen IlluZhion and Lemon like that... Anyway, we should get going...
This episode was great, this Fiery pun was absolutely well thought but indeed it sounds like a dad joke. The only complaint I have to say is how Lemon sounds overly agressive and dark, more than her actual personnality, it sounds more like what you would want her to be, as an edgelord, than th eactual Lemon. That feels kinda unnatural if you ask me. What's with the Club IlluZhion too ? I didn't understand...
Anyways, this fanfic is great nonetheless. Good job.
I have shit humor
You can't be worse than me. I'm literally the worst jokester on Earth
Pas quand j'existe
Arrête de te rabaisser mdr, à chaque fois que je me critique tu dis que tu es pire, et c'est faux
Bref retour au topic
On 2023-01-31 at 21:50:40
S3EP5
At long last, The Resistance have made it across the first of many trials put in place by Dietsoda. As they make haste for his lair, they must be wary of spies from within...
Lemon: B-but why?
Ralsei: Beats me. If I had to bet, it's probably brainwashing or hypnosis.
Lely: So... you're saying...
Nudge: Either way, he's gonna die...
IlluZhion: Calm down Nudge, if he IS being manipulated all we have to do is destroy the source.
Krazey: Sorry Nudge, but the boss is right.
Max: Yeah, we can't just murder someone. That's not what heroes do.
Lemon: Let's just get this over and done with already. It's not like we're gonna get shit done if we talk about how we're gonna do it.
At the base of the lair...
Popplio: This place freaks me out...
Ralsei: Cry about it bitch, we're going in.
Osc: Shit, there's no door here... I'mma bust through the wall...
???: Not NESessary.
IlluZhion: I fucking swear down, whoever made that dad jo- oh hey Fiery.
Max and Lely: Lemme guess, Club IlluZhion?
*Max and Lely stare at each other and giggle*
Fiery: HOW'D YOU KNOW THAT?!
Ralsei: Well naaah then bitch, it's obvious. Osc and me both got here via the nightclub.
Nudge: What were you doing there anyway? Looking for someone or just in for a pint or two?
Fiery: Eh, I was just catching a pint. Was NOT expecting to wind up 10 billion light years from Earth- oh yeah, the wall? I'mma just...
*The false wall burns down*
Lemon: Great, we can get in! Time to save the multiverse!
In the castle...
Dietsoda: How sweet, they're coming in...
xrunner: What're we gonna do now bro?
Dietsoda: Activate the traps. We can't risk them foiling our plans...
xrunner: Got it.
Seven floors down...
*Lava gushes in from nowhere*
Popplio: WAAAAAAAUUUUUUUGGGGGH!!!
Lemon: This way! Hurry!
*THWOMP!*
IlluZhion: Oh great, Thwomps...
*They slide under the Thwomp's path*
Nudge: That was-
Lemon: LOOK OUT!
*An ax swings in from nowhere, Nudge dodges just in time*
IlluZhion: Ah crap, I smell garlic...
Lely: Well, sayonara to you and Lemon then... Wario's in the other room...
Osc and Fiery: Just why?
Max: Waluigi's in there as well...
IlluZhion: Fuck this, I'm fighting 'em.
Lemon: Me too...
Wario: HAH HAH HAH! Goodbye, losers!
IlluZhion: Pffft, bring it on, fatso.
Waluigi: WALUIGI GONNA WIN!
*Lemon and Waluigi fight while IlluZhion and Wario fight*
Max: Come on you two...
Wario: BUUUUUUURRRRRRRP!
IlluZhion: Ah shit...
*IlluZhion explodes into a load of bats*
Wario: WAH HAH- Huh?
Waluigi: I'MMA HELP-A YOU BR-
*Lemon throws a bunch of cyber-shurikens at Waluigi*
Lemon: Don't mess with me again, you bony dipshit.
*The bats manage to scare off Wario, at which point they turn back into IlluZhion*
Lely: Wow... I don't think I've ever seen IlluZhion and Lemon like that... Anyway, we should get going...
At long last, The Resistance have made it across the first of many trials put in place by Dietsoda. As they make haste for his lair, they must be wary of spies from within...
Lemon: B-but why?
Ralsei: Beats me. If I had to bet, it's probably brainwashing or hypnosis.
Lely: So... you're saying...
Nudge: Either way, he's gonna die...
IlluZhion: Calm down Nudge, if he IS being manipulated all we have to do is destroy the source.
Krazey: Sorry Nudge, but the boss is right.
Max: Yeah, we can't just murder someone. That's not what heroes do.
Lemon: Let's just get this over and done with already. It's not like we're gonna get shit done if we talk about how we're gonna do it.
At the base of the lair...
Popplio: This place freaks me out...
Ralsei: Cry about it bitch, we're going in.
Osc: Shit, there's no door here... I'mma bust through the wall...
???: Not NESessary.
IlluZhion: I fucking swear down, whoever made that dad jo- oh hey Fiery.
Max and Lely: Lemme guess, Club IlluZhion?
*Max and Lely stare at each other and giggle*
Fiery: HOW'D YOU KNOW THAT?!
Ralsei: Well naaah then bitch, it's obvious. Osc and me both got here via the nightclub.
Nudge: What were you doing there anyway? Looking for someone or just in for a pint or two?
Fiery: Eh, I was just catching a pint. Was NOT expecting to wind up 10 billion light years from Earth- oh yeah, the wall? I'mma just...
*The false wall burns down*
Lemon: Great, we can get in! Time to save the multiverse!
In the castle...
Dietsoda: How sweet, they're coming in...
xrunner: What're we gonna do now bro?
Dietsoda: Activate the traps. We can't risk them foiling our plans...
xrunner: Got it.
Seven floors down...
*Lava gushes in from nowhere*
Popplio: WAAAAAAAUUUUUUUGGGGGH!!!
Lemon: This way! Hurry!
*THWOMP!*
IlluZhion: Oh great, Thwomps...
*They slide under the Thwomp's path*
Nudge: That was-
Lemon: LOOK OUT!
*An ax swings in from nowhere, Nudge dodges just in time*
IlluZhion: Ah crap, I smell garlic...
Lely: Well, sayonara to you and Lemon then... Wario's in the other room...
Osc and Fiery: Just why?
Max: Waluigi's in there as well...
IlluZhion: Fuck this, I'm fighting 'em.
Lemon: Me too...
Wario: HAH HAH HAH! Goodbye, losers!
IlluZhion: Pffft, bring it on, fatso.
Waluigi: WALUIGI GONNA WIN!
*Lemon and Waluigi fight while IlluZhion and Wario fight*
Max: Come on you two...
Wario: BUUUUUUURRRRRRRP!
IlluZhion: Ah shit...
*IlluZhion explodes into a load of bats*
Wario: WAH HAH- Huh?
Waluigi: I'MMA HELP-A YOU BR-
*Lemon throws a bunch of cyber-shurikens at Waluigi*
Lemon: Don't mess with me again, you bony dipshit.
*The bats manage to scare off Wario, at which point they turn back into IlluZhion*
Lely: Wow... I don't think I've ever seen IlluZhion and Lemon like that... Anyway, we should get going...
This episode was great, this Fiery pun was absolutely well thought but indeed it sounds like a dad joke. The only complaint I have to say is how Lemon sounds overly agressive and dark, more than her actual personnality, it sounds more like what you would want her to be, as an edgelord, than th eactual Lemon. That feels kinda unnatural if you ask me. What's with the Club IlluZhion too ? I didn't understand...
Anyways, this fanfic is great nonetheless. Good job.
I have shit humor
You can't be worse than me. I'm literally the worst jokester on Earth
3On 2023-01-31 at 21:20:39
S3EP5
At long last, The Resistance have made it across the first of many trials put in place by Dietsoda. As they make haste for his lair, they must be wary of spies from within...
Lemon: B-but why?
Ralsei: Beats me. If I had to bet, it's probably brainwashing or hypnosis.
Lely: So... you're saying...
Nudge: Either way, he's gonna die...
IlluZhion: Calm down Nudge, if he IS being manipulated all we have to do is destroy the source.
Krazey: Sorry Nudge, but the boss is right.
Max: Yeah, we can't just murder someone. That's not what heroes do.
Lemon: Let's just get this over and done with already. It's not like we're gonna get shit done if we talk about how we're gonna do it.
At the base of the lair...
Popplio: This place freaks me out...
Ralsei: Cry about it bitch, we're going in.
Osc: Shit, there's no door here... I'mma bust through the wall...
???: Not NESessary.
IlluZhion: I fucking swear down, whoever made that dad jo- oh hey Fiery.
Max and Lely: Lemme guess, Club IlluZhion?
*Max and Lely stare at each other and giggle*
Fiery: HOW'D YOU KNOW THAT?!
Ralsei: Well naaah then bitch, it's obvious. Osc and me both got here via the nightclub.
Nudge: What were you doing there anyway? Looking for someone or just in for a pint or two?
Fiery: Eh, I was just catching a pint. Was NOT expecting to wind up 10 billion light years from Earth- oh yeah, the wall? I'mma just...
*The false wall burns down*
Lemon: Great, we can get in! Time to save the multiverse!
In the castle...
Dietsoda: How sweet, they're coming in...
xrunner: What're we gonna do now bro?
Dietsoda: Activate the traps. We can't risk them foiling our plans...
xrunner: Got it.
Seven floors down...
*Lava gushes in from nowhere*
Popplio: WAAAAAAAUUUUUUUGGGGGH!!!
Lemon: This way! Hurry!
*THWOMP!*
IlluZhion: Oh great, Thwomps...
*They slide under the Thwomp's path*
Nudge: That was-
Lemon: LOOK OUT!
*An ax swings in from nowhere, Nudge dodges just in time*
IlluZhion: Ah crap, I smell garlic...
Lely: Well, sayonara to you and Lemon then... Wario's in the other room...
Osc and Fiery: Just why?
Max: Waluigi's in there as well...
IlluZhion: Fuck this, I'm fighting 'em.
Lemon: Me too...
Wario: HAH HAH HAH! Goodbye, losers!
IlluZhion: Pffft, bring it on, fatso.
Waluigi: WALUIGI GONNA WIN!
*Lemon and Waluigi fight while IlluZhion and Wario fight*
Max: Come on you two...
Wario: BUUUUUUURRRRRRRP!
IlluZhion: Ah shit...
*IlluZhion explodes into a load of bats*
Wario: WAH HAH- Huh?
Waluigi: I'MMA HELP-A YOU BR-
*Lemon throws a bunch of cyber-shurikens at Waluigi*
Lemon: Don't mess with me again, you bony dipshit.
*The bats manage to scare off Wario, at which point they turn back into IlluZhion*
Lely: Wow... I don't think I've ever seen IlluZhion and Lemon like that... Anyway, we should get going...
At long last, The Resistance have made it across the first of many trials put in place by Dietsoda. As they make haste for his lair, they must be wary of spies from within...
Lemon: B-but why?
Ralsei: Beats me. If I had to bet, it's probably brainwashing or hypnosis.
Lely: So... you're saying...
Nudge: Either way, he's gonna die...
IlluZhion: Calm down Nudge, if he IS being manipulated all we have to do is destroy the source.
Krazey: Sorry Nudge, but the boss is right.
Max: Yeah, we can't just murder someone. That's not what heroes do.
Lemon: Let's just get this over and done with already. It's not like we're gonna get shit done if we talk about how we're gonna do it.
At the base of the lair...
Popplio: This place freaks me out...
Ralsei: Cry about it bitch, we're going in.
Osc: Shit, there's no door here... I'mma bust through the wall...
???: Not NESessary.
IlluZhion: I fucking swear down, whoever made that dad jo- oh hey Fiery.
Max and Lely: Lemme guess, Club IlluZhion?
*Max and Lely stare at each other and giggle*
Fiery: HOW'D YOU KNOW THAT?!
Ralsei: Well naaah then bitch, it's obvious. Osc and me both got here via the nightclub.
Nudge: What were you doing there anyway? Looking for someone or just in for a pint or two?
Fiery: Eh, I was just catching a pint. Was NOT expecting to wind up 10 billion light years from Earth- oh yeah, the wall? I'mma just...
*The false wall burns down*
Lemon: Great, we can get in! Time to save the multiverse!
In the castle...
Dietsoda: How sweet, they're coming in...
xrunner: What're we gonna do now bro?
Dietsoda: Activate the traps. We can't risk them foiling our plans...
xrunner: Got it.
Seven floors down...
*Lava gushes in from nowhere*
Popplio: WAAAAAAAUUUUUUUGGGGGH!!!
Lemon: This way! Hurry!
*THWOMP!*
IlluZhion: Oh great, Thwomps...
*They slide under the Thwomp's path*
Nudge: That was-
Lemon: LOOK OUT!
*An ax swings in from nowhere, Nudge dodges just in time*
IlluZhion: Ah crap, I smell garlic...
Lely: Well, sayonara to you and Lemon then... Wario's in the other room...
Osc and Fiery: Just why?
Max: Waluigi's in there as well...
IlluZhion: Fuck this, I'm fighting 'em.
Lemon: Me too...
Wario: HAH HAH HAH! Goodbye, losers!
IlluZhion: Pffft, bring it on, fatso.
Waluigi: WALUIGI GONNA WIN!
*Lemon and Waluigi fight while IlluZhion and Wario fight*
Max: Come on you two...
Wario: BUUUUUUURRRRRRRP!
IlluZhion: Ah shit...
*IlluZhion explodes into a load of bats*
Wario: WAH HAH- Huh?
Waluigi: I'MMA HELP-A YOU BR-
*Lemon throws a bunch of cyber-shurikens at Waluigi*
Lemon: Don't mess with me again, you bony dipshit.
*The bats manage to scare off Wario, at which point they turn back into IlluZhion*
Lely: Wow... I don't think I've ever seen IlluZhion and Lemon like that... Anyway, we should get going...
This episode was great, this Fiery pun was absolutely well thought but indeed it sounds like a dad joke. The only complaint I have to say is how Lemon sounds overly agressive and dark, more than her actual personnality, it sounds more like what you would want her to be, as an edgelord, than th eactual Lemon. That feels kinda unnatural if you ask me. What's with the Club IlluZhion too ? I didn't understand...
Anyways, this fanfic is great nonetheless. Good job.
On 2023-01-15 at 09:49:22
HOLY FUCK ONE OF THEM IS ACTUALLY A PEDOPHILE
WHAT THE F**K. WHAT. THAT IS JUST…NO.
To make matters even worse, that motherfucker is the one who is THE MOST CAPABLE OF RAPING MY LEMON BECAUSE HE'S ALREADY A GODFORSAKEN RAPIST
Some people will never change. It's actually crazy how this man has not been caught. He's doing so wrong, he's doing an horrible use of his life, an illegal use, but he isn't even punished yet ??? What the fuck is this ??? He needs to realize what he is doing right now, because it's not the assholes he's hanging out with who will teach him how to live properly without causing shit. "I'm doing me cause this is my life." Well, I'm prepared to see this sentence somewhere if he ever talks to me. Well no. Everyone has boundaries, your freedom stops where other people's freedom starts. If you're terrifying and raping people in your life, well at this point, it's just not YOUR business, it's also the business of the people who take your goddman shit in the face. I hope he will get owned someday. I'm praying for Lemon to stay safe. But is there much we can do about this ? It's infuriating to see, but at the moment, he is unstoppable. AAAAAA I hate those people. Doing so much shit and being very wrong during all their life... But stronger than you, so you cannot stop them. They use their fucking strength to make this world a trashfire.
Listen, maybe that instead of crying here about how he is wrong, we should try to give strength to Lemon. After all, she's the one suffering the most. Not us.
3On 2023-01-04 at 23:08:24
S2EP6
Last time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising, the Zyka, a malevolent alien race that desecrated the home of IlluZhion and Lemon, attacked The Villains' mothership! After a long and tiring battle to save Lemon, IlluZhion managed to kill the Zyka and protect his love. But the Zyka aren't the only ones trying to board the ship...
Elija/IlluZhion: Kris? How did you even manage to get here?
Kris: I have no clue, but I think I was sucked into some black hole.
Nudge: Just like us...
Lemon: Well either way, we need all the help we can get.
Kris: Wait, only you guys made it? What about Lely, Max, Chilli, Krazey-
Elija/IlluZhion: We don't talk about them...
Lemon: They betrayed us after Dimentio and Bowser attacked us and stole the Power Stars from us. It's not like they didn't try helping though, but they were too lazy to help us so we sent them away.
Paratroopa: Well that was their choice.
xrunner: Yeah, it's not like we forced them to go or anything.
Lemon: Let's not dwell on that for now. You guys must be knackered. Let's get some sleep. We can talk in the morning.
Meanwhile...
Dietsoda: Such unsuspecting morons.
Max: WHOA, WHAT IS THAT?!
Lely: HOLY SHIT, IT'S A BOMB!!!
Chilli: AAAAAAAAGGGGH!!! WE'RE DOOMED!!!
Krazey: Let's just back off and take cover!
*Bomb explodes*
Dietsoda: Hahahaha. They didn't suspect a thing.
Last time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising, the Zyka, a malevolent alien race that desecrated the home of IlluZhion and Lemon, attacked The Villains' mothership! After a long and tiring battle to save Lemon, IlluZhion managed to kill the Zyka and protect his love. But the Zyka aren't the only ones trying to board the ship...
Elija/IlluZhion: Kris? How did you even manage to get here?
Kris: I have no clue, but I think I was sucked into some black hole.
Nudge: Just like us...
Lemon: Well either way, we need all the help we can get.
Kris: Wait, only you guys made it? What about Lely, Max, Chilli, Krazey-
Elija/IlluZhion: We don't talk about them...
Lemon: They betrayed us after Dimentio and Bowser attacked us and stole the Power Stars from us. It's not like they didn't try helping though, but they were too lazy to help us so we sent them away.
Paratroopa: Well that was their choice.
xrunner: Yeah, it's not like we forced them to go or anything.
Lemon: Let's not dwell on that for now. You guys must be knackered. Let's get some sleep. We can talk in the morning.
Meanwhile...
Dietsoda: Such unsuspecting morons.
Max: WHOA, WHAT IS THAT?!
Lely: HOLY SHIT, IT'S A BOMB!!!
Chilli: AAAAAAAAGGGGH!!! WE'RE DOOMED!!!
Krazey: Let's just back off and take cover!
*Bomb explodes*
Dietsoda: Hahahaha. They didn't suspect a thing.
I kinda like this episode, although I think the lines you gave Lemon doesn't fit her, she's just not the type to dump people like that.
4On 2022-12-29 at 13:14:50
Guys I'm sorry but for now I'm not writing a plot. My crush (who if you hadn't already figured out is Lemon) is extremely stressed out by recent events on Discord.
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her
Completely understand you, those weirdos went way too far and it's honestly worrying to see they're threatening younger people to die and stalk them without any second thought. Honestly, they need to be stopped.
They're not even adults, they're like 16 at maximum
Damn, it's it's worse lol
So they act like grown ups but Max is almost as old as them
Nice "unintenlligence"
It's even worse considering some of them are as young as 11
LOL I'm older than some of them ? So at this point it's really ridiculous lol
On 2022-12-29 at 12:31:05
Guys I'm sorry but for now I'm not writing a plot. My crush (who if you hadn't already figured out is Lemon) is extremely stressed out by recent events on Discord.
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her
Completely understand you, those weirdos went way too far and it's honestly worrying to see they're threatening younger people to die and stalk them without any second thought. Honestly, they need to be stopped.
They're not even adults, they're like 16 at maximum
Damn, it's it's worse lol
So they act like grown ups but Max is almost as old as them
Nice "unintenlligence"
3On 2022-12-29 at 12:15:21
Guys I'm sorry but for now I'm not writing a plot. My crush (who if you hadn't already figured out is Lemon) is extremely stressed out by recent events on Discord.
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her
Completely understand you, those weirdos went way too far and it's honestly worrying to see they're threatening younger people to die and stalk them without any second thought. Honestly, they need to be stopped.
2On 2022-12-28 at 02:07:00
Is this still being written? I know it's hard to write fanfics, but I just want to know.
Yeah, I'm thinking of a plot
But it's hard when you've got girls lusting after you, a severe crush and tons of artwork lol
Yeah, I u derstand, and anyways quality > quantity so if you don't have any ideas or inspiration it's fine! Just wait for it. If you force yourself
the result will be garbage (I experienced it myself). It's better to wait for the right time than to force yourself, and disgust yourself of it while posting bad content lol.
11On 2022-11-15 at 20:59:23
EP7
Last time on Super MKPC Galaxy, the temporarily-joined forces were hit by a freak attack at the hands of the Coconator! In a last-ditch attempt to save everyone, Lemon kept on firing at the robotic monstrosity, albeit it had no effect, only angering the robot and making it go haywire. Lemon sustained serious injuries from the attack, knocking her unconscious. Will she recover or succumb to her injuries? Either way, what will the others do? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Elija: L-Lemon... D-Don't go...
Lely: Jeez, this is sure hitting Elija hard.
Popplio: Of course, they've known each other much longer than we have.
BJ: Bruh, when the heck am I getting that second Power Star?
???: Hey guys!
Elija: What the...
Max and Lely POV: Oh no...
Paratroopa POV: Who on MKPC earth is this?
Chilli POV: Why? Just why? I could have sworn he was banned.
???: Looks like you lot need a little help! AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
BJ: Give up the act, Ralsei. We know it's you.
Ralsei: Well done, Einstein. So I got banned for a long time. Does it look like I give a damn? AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
Ashton POV: Hey, spamming's against the rules! So is reviving dead memes!
Ralsei: Well, guess you could say... AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
Max: Should we just kick this guy off the ship altogether?
Ralsei: AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOG-
Elija: You... do realize how annoying you are?
Ralsei: But- AMOGUS, here- AMOGUS- is the catch- AMOGUS. I- AMOGUS- am not Ralsei- AMOGUS.
Elija: Well, if you're not Ralsei, could you please quit speaking like that?
Ralsei(?): Ahahahahaha. Foolish serpent. You do not remember me?
Elija: No...
Ralsei(?): Well, allow me to make my grand debut.
Max: Whoever you are, just get this over with.
Ralsei(?): I... am DIMENTIO! Master of chaos, pleaser of crowds-
Elija: Dumb psychopathic megalomaniac...
Dimentio: Yeah, you get the gist of this, don't you?
5072: What are you even doing here?
Dimentio: Your beloved Power Star and Dietsoda? Mine. Your entire reputation? Also mine! The Coconator, however? Me!
Elija: So you're the one who almost killed-
Dimentio: Your best friend? Ahahahahaha. Nay, Elija, I would not do anything so cruel.
Elija: That doesn't give you any motive for what you tried to do in Super Paper Mario.
Max: Hey Elija, I think it's best if we stay outta this.
Elija: No. I will not back down. Anyone who tries to kill Lemon has to go through me first.
Lely: What are you talking about?
Elija: You heard me.
Nudge: This means bad... It's not usually like this when Elija's just... being calm.
Lely: I'm scared!
Chilli: If you DARE play BTS aloud on your iPod...
*Lely blasts Go Go, much to Chilli's annoyance*
Chilli (barely audible over the music): I HATE YOU, LELY!!!
Elija: Hey Lely, thanks for the BGM! Anois scriosaimis an rud seo!
Ashton POV: And again with the Irish! I've never been more confused in my life!
With Dimentio framing an exiled MKPCian, but then revealing his new self, that was a bit anti-climactic. However, what will happen? Will Elija succeed over the new threat? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Last time on Super MKPC Galaxy, the temporarily-joined forces were hit by a freak attack at the hands of the Coconator! In a last-ditch attempt to save everyone, Lemon kept on firing at the robotic monstrosity, albeit it had no effect, only angering the robot and making it go haywire. Lemon sustained serious injuries from the attack, knocking her unconscious. Will she recover or succumb to her injuries? Either way, what will the others do? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Elija: L-Lemon... D-Don't go...
Lely: Jeez, this is sure hitting Elija hard.
Popplio: Of course, they've known each other much longer than we have.
BJ: Bruh, when the heck am I getting that second Power Star?
???: Hey guys!
Elija: What the...
Max and Lely POV: Oh no...
Paratroopa POV: Who on MKPC earth is this?
Chilli POV: Why? Just why? I could have sworn he was banned.
???: Looks like you lot need a little help! AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
BJ: Give up the act, Ralsei. We know it's you.
Ralsei: Well done, Einstein. So I got banned for a long time. Does it look like I give a damn? AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
Ashton POV: Hey, spamming's against the rules! So is reviving dead memes!
Ralsei: Well, guess you could say... AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
Max: Should we just kick this guy off the ship altogether?
Ralsei: AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOG-
Elija: You... do realize how annoying you are?
Ralsei: But- AMOGUS, here- AMOGUS- is the catch- AMOGUS. I- AMOGUS- am not Ralsei- AMOGUS.
Elija: Well, if you're not Ralsei, could you please quit speaking like that?
Ralsei(?): Ahahahahaha. Foolish serpent. You do not remember me?
Elija: No...
Ralsei(?): Well, allow me to make my grand debut.
Max: Whoever you are, just get this over with.
Ralsei(?): I... am DIMENTIO! Master of chaos, pleaser of crowds-
Elija: Dumb psychopathic megalomaniac...
Dimentio: Yeah, you get the gist of this, don't you?
5072: What are you even doing here?
Dimentio: Your beloved Power Star and Dietsoda? Mine. Your entire reputation? Also mine! The Coconator, however? Me!
Elija: So you're the one who almost killed-
Dimentio: Your best friend? Ahahahahaha. Nay, Elija, I would not do anything so cruel.
Elija: That doesn't give you any motive for what you tried to do in Super Paper Mario.
Max: Hey Elija, I think it's best if we stay outta this.
Elija: No. I will not back down. Anyone who tries to kill Lemon has to go through me first.
Lely: What are you talking about?
Elija: You heard me.
Nudge: This means bad... It's not usually like this when Elija's just... being calm.
Lely: I'm scared!
Chilli: If you DARE play BTS aloud on your iPod...
*Lely blasts Go Go, much to Chilli's annoyance*
Chilli (barely audible over the music): I HATE YOU, LELY!!!
Elija: Hey Lely, thanks for the BGM! Anois scriosaimis an rud seo!
Ashton POV: And again with the Irish! I've never been more confused in my life!
With Dimentio framing an exiled MKPCian, but then revealing his new self, that was a bit anti-climactic. However, what will happen? Will Elija succeed over the new threat? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BTS reference + Ralsei reference : a good episode.
Why did you chose Go Go though, it's one of the only songs I dislike.
Also, my interest for this fanfic is growing, even if there is maybe too much characters aside from MKPC ones
I just did Go Go bcz I was outta ideas lol
I was thinking of doing Not Today, too non-battle-y for an epic battle against a manic jester. Gangnam Style, dead and not BTS. IDOL and/or FAKE LOVE, just couldn't be asked lol
Also, the other characters are just there as bosses or anti-heroes aside from BJ and Dietsoda.
EDIT: I might include FAKE LOVE/IDOL as a reference in the first phase of the final boss fight lol
Actually Not Today is supposed to be a fight song. "If you can't crawl, gear up" "Point, aim, shoot !" "Trust me, we're on the same side, together we won't die, I trust you, we're on the same side, together we won't die" "we believe in the world, together, we believe that we're bulletproof"
Don't worry, the references about BTS always make my character more accurate and it adds something, especially when you're the first doing that
11
1On 2022-11-15 at 20:46:15
EP7
Last time on Super MKPC Galaxy, the temporarily-joined forces were hit by a freak attack at the hands of the Coconator! In a last-ditch attempt to save everyone, Lemon kept on firing at the robotic monstrosity, albeit it had no effect, only angering the robot and making it go haywire. Lemon sustained serious injuries from the attack, knocking her unconscious. Will she recover or succumb to her injuries? Either way, what will the others do? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Elija: L-Lemon... D-Don't go...
Lely: Jeez, this is sure hitting Elija hard.
Popplio: Of course, they've known each other much longer than we have.
BJ: Bruh, when the heck am I getting that second Power Star?
???: Hey guys!
Elija: What the...
Max and Lely POV: Oh no...
Paratroopa POV: Who on MKPC earth is this?
Chilli POV: Why? Just why? I could have sworn he was banned.
???: Looks like you lot need a little help! AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
BJ: Give up the act, Ralsei. We know it's you.
Ralsei: Well done, Einstein. So I got banned for a long time. Does it look like I give a damn? AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
Ashton POV: Hey, spamming's against the rules! So is reviving dead memes!
Ralsei: Well, guess you could say... AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
Max: Should we just kick this guy off the ship altogether?
Ralsei: AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOG-
Elija: You... do realize how annoying you are?
Ralsei: But- AMOGUS, here- AMOGUS- is the catch- AMOGUS. I- AMOGUS- am not Ralsei- AMOGUS.
Elija: Well, if you're not Ralsei, could you please quit speaking like that?
Ralsei(?): Ahahahahaha. Foolish serpent. You do not remember me?
Elija: No...
Ralsei(?): Well, allow me to make my grand debut.
Max: Whoever you are, just get this over with.
Ralsei(?): I... am DIMENTIO! Master of chaos, pleaser of crowds-
Elija: Dumb psychopathic megalomaniac...
Dimentio: Yeah, you get the gist of this, don't you?
5072: What are you even doing here?
Dimentio: Your beloved Power Star and Dietsoda? Mine. Your entire reputation? Also mine! The Coconator, however? Me!
Elija: So you're the one who almost killed-
Dimentio: Your best friend? Ahahahahaha. Nay, Elija, I would not do anything so cruel.
Elija: That doesn't give you any motive for what you tried to do in Super Paper Mario.
Max: Hey Elija, I think it's best if we stay outta this.
Elija: No. I will not back down. Anyone who tries to kill Lemon has to go through me first.
Lely: What are you talking about?
Elija: You heard me.
Nudge: This means bad... It's not usually like this when Elija's just... being calm.
Lely: I'm scared!
Chilli: If you DARE play BTS aloud on your iPod...
*Lely blasts Go Go, much to Chilli's annoyance*
Chilli (barely audible over the music): I HATE YOU, LELY!!!
Elija: Hey Lely, thanks for the BGM! Anois scriosaimis an rud seo!
Ashton POV: And again with the Irish! I've never been more confused in my life!
With Dimentio framing an exiled MKPCian, but then revealing his new self, that was a bit anti-climactic. However, what will happen? Will Elija succeed over the new threat? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Last time on Super MKPC Galaxy, the temporarily-joined forces were hit by a freak attack at the hands of the Coconator! In a last-ditch attempt to save everyone, Lemon kept on firing at the robotic monstrosity, albeit it had no effect, only angering the robot and making it go haywire. Lemon sustained serious injuries from the attack, knocking her unconscious. Will she recover or succumb to her injuries? Either way, what will the others do? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Elija: L-Lemon... D-Don't go...
Lely: Jeez, this is sure hitting Elija hard.
Popplio: Of course, they've known each other much longer than we have.
BJ: Bruh, when the heck am I getting that second Power Star?
???: Hey guys!
Elija: What the...
Max and Lely POV: Oh no...
Paratroopa POV: Who on MKPC earth is this?
Chilli POV: Why? Just why? I could have sworn he was banned.
???: Looks like you lot need a little help! AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
BJ: Give up the act, Ralsei. We know it's you.
Ralsei: Well done, Einstein. So I got banned for a long time. Does it look like I give a damn? AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
Ashton POV: Hey, spamming's against the rules! So is reviving dead memes!
Ralsei: Well, guess you could say... AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUS
Max: Should we just kick this guy off the ship altogether?
Ralsei: AMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOGUSAMOG-
Elija: You... do realize how annoying you are?
Ralsei: But- AMOGUS, here- AMOGUS- is the catch- AMOGUS. I- AMOGUS- am not Ralsei- AMOGUS.
Elija: Well, if you're not Ralsei, could you please quit speaking like that?
Ralsei(?): Ahahahahaha. Foolish serpent. You do not remember me?
Elija: No...
Ralsei(?): Well, allow me to make my grand debut.
Max: Whoever you are, just get this over with.
Ralsei(?): I... am DIMENTIO! Master of chaos, pleaser of crowds-
Elija: Dumb psychopathic megalomaniac...
Dimentio: Yeah, you get the gist of this, don't you?
5072: What are you even doing here?
Dimentio: Your beloved Power Star and Dietsoda? Mine. Your entire reputation? Also mine! The Coconator, however? Me!
Elija: So you're the one who almost killed-
Dimentio: Your best friend? Ahahahahaha. Nay, Elija, I would not do anything so cruel.
Elija: That doesn't give you any motive for what you tried to do in Super Paper Mario.
Max: Hey Elija, I think it's best if we stay outta this.
Elija: No. I will not back down. Anyone who tries to kill Lemon has to go through me first.
Lely: What are you talking about?
Elija: You heard me.
Nudge: This means bad... It's not usually like this when Elija's just... being calm.
Lely: I'm scared!
Chilli: If you DARE play BTS aloud on your iPod...
*Lely blasts Go Go, much to Chilli's annoyance*
Chilli (barely audible over the music): I HATE YOU, LELY!!!
Elija: Hey Lely, thanks for the BGM! Anois scriosaimis an rud seo!
Ashton POV: And again with the Irish! I've never been more confused in my life!
With Dimentio framing an exiled MKPCian, but then revealing his new self, that was a bit anti-climactic. However, what will happen? Will Elija succeed over the new threat? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BTS reference + Ralsei reference : a good episode.
Why did you chose Go Go though, it's one of the only songs I dislike.
Also, my interest for this fanfic is growing, even if there is maybe too much characters aside from MKPC ones
On 2022-11-07 at 23:23:37
Elija: Perfect. Lely, do you have the false white flags
Everyone started to pretend to surrender
Warcrimes? I thought some of you were the "heroes".
Nobody's at war, Dietsoda
At least, not in the fanfic
And 'warcrimes'? Everyone's just trying to save the universe by fighting evil and collecting Power Stars. I don't think that trying to do that is criminal lol
And yes, I know some of them are 'The Villains', including myself, but right now the focus isn't crimes committed solely by me, but rather defeating Cursa and restoring peace to the galaxy
You'll see in today's episode...
EDIT: Bruh, I'm trying to keep things comedic but people just talk about random stuff istg I don't associate with the fanfic lol
Sorry its just that false surrender is a warcrime and I couldn't get that out of my head.
How is that a big deal ?
On 2022-11-06 at 12:56:29
Elija: Perfect. Lely, do you have the false white flags
Everyone started to pretend to surrender
Warcrimes? I thought some of you were the "heroes".
I never accepted to actually hold them and to do this. I never accepted.
2On 2022-11-05 at 09:10:27
EP4
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
I like the fanfic, but I find my personnality annoying overall, and not in the right sense, I'm more like a sensitive crybaby that stands up for his friends rather than someone who is often cussing at others while being annoying. As an example, I would say the environment is nice, rather than being too serious and saying rudely to Bj that we're not here for that, especially in that way.
Other than that the fanfic is ok
1On 2022-11-03 at 19:35:20
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After getting pushed back by a deadly cactus demon, The Heroes have to fight. Slowly but surely, both sides discover new galaxies... and new ambitions. What will each of them find? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Max: Whoa! How are we gonna beat this thing?
Lely: I don't know! I've never played Super Mario Galaxy!
Chilli: Haha, noob.
Lely: When will you learn to SHUT UP?!
Saguantuan: GROOOAAAARRGH!
Lely: I thought I just told humanity to SHUT UP! That applies to monsters as well!
Saguantuan: WAAAAAAAAA!
*Saguantuan starts weeping*
Max: Way to make him cry, Lely.
Chilli: I don't like you, Lely!
Lely: I'm sorry! Besides, Chilli, I'd figured.
*Saguantuan stops crying all of a sudden*
Saguantuan: Wait, where's Elija?
Jey: That's what we're trying to find out! Wanna come with us?
Saguantuan: Uhhh, sure. I'd better give you this Power Star in case you need it.
Now The Heroes have 1 out of 7 Power Stars! As they travel to another galaxy, Saguantuan the Mutant Cactus joins them on their adventures.
Max: So this is the new galaxy.
Lely: 'Tropical District Galaxy' - not the most creative name - I swear there was a similarly named Mario Kart track.
Saguantuan: Yeah, the inhabitants apparently named it after Coconut Mall.
Chilli: Avid gamers, huh? Hey Lely, bet you can't relate!
Lely: SHUT UP, CHILLI!!
Max: Both of you, stop fighting!
So they made their way into the central plaza. But what will they find? Is Saguantuan trustworthy? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
After getting pushed back by a deadly cactus demon, The Heroes have to fight. Slowly but surely, both sides discover new galaxies... and new ambitions. What will each of them find? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Max: Whoa! How are we gonna beat this thing?
Lely: I don't know! I've never played Super Mario Galaxy!
Chilli: Haha, noob.
Lely: When will you learn to SHUT UP?!
Saguantuan: GROOOAAAARRGH!
Lely: I thought I just told humanity to SHUT UP! That applies to monsters as well!
Saguantuan: WAAAAAAAAA!
*Saguantuan starts weeping*
Max: Way to make him cry, Lely.
Chilli: I don't like you, Lely!
Lely: I'm sorry! Besides, Chilli, I'd figured.
*Saguantuan stops crying all of a sudden*
Saguantuan: Wait, where's Elija?
Jey: That's what we're trying to find out! Wanna come with us?
Saguantuan: Uhhh, sure. I'd better give you this Power Star in case you need it.
Now The Heroes have 1 out of 7 Power Stars! As they travel to another galaxy, Saguantuan the Mutant Cactus joins them on their adventures.
Max: So this is the new galaxy.
Lely: 'Tropical District Galaxy' - not the most creative name - I swear there was a similarly named Mario Kart track.
Saguantuan: Yeah, the inhabitants apparently named it after Coconut Mall.
Chilli: Avid gamers, huh? Hey Lely, bet you can't relate!
Lely: SHUT UP, CHILLI!!
Max: Both of you, stop fighting!
So they made their way into the central plaza. But what will they find? Is Saguantuan trustworthy? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Good, but there's a few things that don't fit me at all :
- I've played SMG but it was for the gag so OK
- I wouldn't say shut up to something I don't even know, especially if I'm just angry at Chilli
- I wouldn't say this name is uncreative, but ok
- I wouldn't scream at Chilli, in this case he's just annoying, I would stay calm and I would just tell him to stop
But still, it's kinda good
1On 2022-11-03 at 17:41:46
Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?
Wouldn't say hate. I would just say that if you back off and let me take over the universe you will be a fine subject under my rule.
I just can't let you do that...
You sure?
I will try to stop you as much as I can. There needs to be people to control the galaxy, but they shouldn't be dictators, and do whatever they want, they should actually respect people, and hearing them out, and helping them out.
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