List of comments from Ssg-132 (123)

1/5 there are no indicators on which path to take. Although there’s a ton of random decors, none of them are on the road which makes gameplay really boring. I just which that actual effort was put into these, but instead of all these tracks feel like slop. Edit: the fact that 2 new tracks were made while I was playing and writing this really proves my point of these tracks being slop.

The tracks are poorly designed. All of the tracks are lacking crucial features like walls and off-roads. The CPUS are way to easy, I found myself lapping them on every track but dandelion depths, because it’s a minute for a lap. I genuinely think that these could be fun if more effort was put into these tracks. 2/5

Unskippable title.

Please stop making square tracks.

I was joking the paper clip version is awful.

It’s not the paper clip layout. :(

Pretty good but the 2nd track is kinda boring.

Thanks! The name is Sandy Sandy Speedway btw.

Just put more time into it.

Gameplay 5.5/8 Overall it’s pretty fun but it would definitely be better if jumps were indicated and I also think it would be better if the water actually pushed you (using mobile floors)
Visual 3.5/6 Pretty meh visually some details in the road would help out some.
4/6 creativity pretty good in this aspect.
1/3 variety some more unique parts would be cool.
1/2 usage of theme. There’s definitely pipes, maybe do more with them
Total 15/25

Well if you’re playing for the first time you most likely won’t be able to react to that.

4/8 gameplay. It’s good except the part where the pipes block the off-road and the forced puddles, they completely throw off the flow of the track and feel awful to go through.
2.5/6 Visual. There’s not a lot you can do with visuals in a qm track.
3/6 creativity. There is unique parts, but they’re not executed properly.
2.5/3 variety. There is unique parts and the track does have good variety in its sections.
1/2 usage of theme. I think pipes in the background could improve this aspect and maybe even more visuals.
Total 13/25

I just realized that this wasn’t made for the tbc itself. Please make a brand new track for this.

I don’t usually do redos so I’ll average the scores.
Here is the scores for this version.
Gameplay 5.5/8 average 4/8
Visual 3/6 average 2.5/6
Creativity 3.5/6 average 2.75/6
Variety 2/3 average 1.5/8
Use of theme 1/2 average 0.75/ w
Total for this version
15/25 averse 11.5/25

Gameplay 2.5/8 this track would definitely benefits from item as you seem to have forgotten them and maybe pipes in the track instead of the background
Visual 2/6. The pipes are really the only unique visual here and the feel, random.
2/6 creativity, this track feels generic with nothing to really stand out.
1/3 variety, lack of any items and decors make the track feel really stale.
0.5/2. Usage of theme. It would be better if pipes weren’t just visuals and in the track.
Total 8/25. This track could benefit from stuff inside the tracks since that could’ve earned you like 2-4 more points.

My favorite part is when it turns right…

No but i can still have an opinion

1. Layout is way to different at this point its a new track. 2. Boosts are angled wrong. 3. Dummy its a complete mode track contest

I actually made the coin boos for a completely different contestent track

Uhhhhhh ok you play your pretend games about mario being “racist”