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[Fanfic] The Poofie World
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7144 pts ★ RacerOn 2026-03-12 at 00:42:30
Can you draw me?
Reference: Black hair, with a black helmet but on with a black suit, refuses to take the helmet off to show face.
Reference: Black hair, with a black helmet but on with a black suit, refuses to take the helmet off to show face.
On 2026-01-09 at 16:09:41
Episode 1
SM7: Where... are we?
Xzeezy101: I don't know. It seems that we came through that portal.
Maker: Guys? I don't think a new world is the last of our problems! LOOK!
He points to a bunch of figures that look that their heading towards them. FAST. They quickly get out of the way.
???: -Just don't see how the Poofie Portal would send a bunch of people out here.
???: Yeah. Judging by the fact that there are people next to the Poofie Portal, that would never happen.
EAS: Who- Who are you?
???: Hey... I recognize you! You're EAS!
EAS: How do you know my-
???: And you're Xzeezy101, Maker, and Super Mega 7! I'm Poofie Master!
SM7: So that's how he knows our names...
Xzeezy101: Hey! Poofie Master! I didn't recognize you because that's not your pfp.
PM: These are my friends!
Wayne, Donna, Peno, Melody, Liza, Molly, Kira,
Hi-Chew, and Eric.
Maker: Nice to meet you!
Wayne: Great. Now that we all know each other, WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE??!!
SM7: We were transported by that strange portal over there.
PM: Well, until we can get the Mega Poofie guards to get the Poofie Portal to send you back to the MKPCverse, we'll just have to keep you here.
SM7: Where... are we?
Xzeezy101: I don't know. It seems that we came through that portal.
Maker: Guys? I don't think a new world is the last of our problems! LOOK!
He points to a bunch of figures that look that their heading towards them. FAST. They quickly get out of the way.
???: -Just don't see how the Poofie Portal would send a bunch of people out here.
???: Yeah. Judging by the fact that there are people next to the Poofie Portal, that would never happen.
EAS: Who- Who are you?
???: Hey... I recognize you! You're EAS!
EAS: How do you know my-
???: And you're Xzeezy101, Maker, and Super Mega 7! I'm Poofie Master!
SM7: So that's how he knows our names...
Xzeezy101: Hey! Poofie Master! I didn't recognize you because that's not your pfp.
PM: These are my friends!
Wayne, Donna, Peno, Melody, Liza, Molly, Kira,
Hi-Chew, and Eric.
Maker: Nice to meet you!
Wayne: Great. Now that we all know each other, WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE??!!
SM7: We were transported by that strange portal over there.
PM: Well, until we can get the Mega Poofie guards to get the Poofie Portal to send you back to the MKPCverse, we'll just have to keep you here.
by the way, can you also draw the custom characters including me?
On 2026-01-08 at 02:35:02
Would you like to join? The plot becomes clear throughout the story. I need at least 2 characters to start, other than my 10 default ones.
I'd also need a kart and glider from 8. Make sure to add a description of your character.
1. Poofie Master (Me) Image here
2. Wayne: Not the happiest guy in the world, but loves bombs and cheez-its. Image here
3. Donna: A boo. She's a bit sarcastic at times, and has a pet Fantom Poofie named Boof. image here
4. Peno: Some figure in a cloak with no body. He loves food, especially Peanut Butter and Chocolate. Image here
5. Melody: Is very smart and loves to read. (Wayne sometimes calls her a nerd) Image here
6. Liza: Very happy at most times, and a bit crazy. She also somehow flies with her ponytail. Image here (She's the one on the left)
7. Molly: Twins with Liza. She always pushes herself to the limit and likes video games. Image here (She's the one on the right)
8. Kira: Quiet and shy. Scares easily. Image here
9. Hi-Chew: Very Positive and artsy. Can turn into a poofie. Wonder what that mark on her cheek is... Image here
10. Eric: Huge prankster. He also has that mark... Image here
11. Maker
12. Xzeezy101
I'll add more numbers if more people join
I'd also need a kart and glider from 8. Make sure to add a description of your character.
1. Poofie Master (Me) Image here
2. Wayne: Not the happiest guy in the world, but loves bombs and cheez-its. Image here
3. Donna: A boo. She's a bit sarcastic at times, and has a pet Fantom Poofie named Boof. image here
4. Peno: Some figure in a cloak with no body. He loves food, especially Peanut Butter and Chocolate. Image here
5. Melody: Is very smart and loves to read. (Wayne sometimes calls her a nerd) Image here
6. Liza: Very happy at most times, and a bit crazy. She also somehow flies with her ponytail. Image here (She's the one on the left)
7. Molly: Twins with Liza. She always pushes herself to the limit and likes video games. Image here (She's the one on the right)
8. Kira: Quiet and shy. Scares easily. Image here
9. Hi-Chew: Very Positive and artsy. Can turn into a poofie. Wonder what that mark on her cheek is... Image here
10. Eric: Huge prankster. He also has that mark... Image here
11. Maker
12. Xzeezy101
I'll add more numbers if more people join
I guess boof is emo
On 2026-01-08 at 02:33:55
Name: Xzeezy101
Description: Race for a living, chill, I don't give a damn vibe, and plays games sometimes. Mainly my personality to be honest.
Color: Green
Kart: Standard kart
Glider: Paper Glider
If you don't mind, can I also try to make some episodes? And when it's done, can I make it into a comic?
Description: Race for a living, chill, I don't give a damn vibe, and plays games sometimes. Mainly my personality to be honest.
Color: Green
Kart: Standard kart
Glider: Paper Glider
If you don't mind, can I also try to make some episodes? And when it's done, can I make it into a comic?
1. Custom episodes might not go well with the actual story, but maybe you could post a different topic for specific custom episodes of this fanfic. If you do, though, make sure to give the link to the original.
2. I'm fine with you making comics of the episodes. I love comics anyways!
No like help with episodes for the actual story. And YAYY I can make a comic on it!
1. I guess you could help with ideas in a different chat.
2.Just be sure to see what everyone looks like. (Look at the images next to the discription)
Okay, got it. I'll look at them now
On 2026-01-08 at 02:28:16
Name: Xzeezy101
Description: Race for a living, chill, I don't give a damn vibe, and plays games sometimes. Mainly my personality to be honest.
Color: Green
Kart: Standard kart
Glider: Paper Glider
If you don't mind, can I also try to make some episodes? And when it's done, can I make it into a comic?
Description: Race for a living, chill, I don't give a damn vibe, and plays games sometimes. Mainly my personality to be honest.
Color: Green
Kart: Standard kart
Glider: Paper Glider
If you don't mind, can I also try to make some episodes? And when it's done, can I make it into a comic?
1. Custom episodes might not go well with the actual story, but maybe you could post a different topic for specific custom episodes of this fanfic. If you do, though, make sure to give the link to the original.
2. I'm fine with you making comics of the episodes. I love comics anyways!
No like help with episodes for the actual story. And YAYY I can make a comic on it!
On 2026-01-08 at 02:16:32
Name: Xzeezy101
Description: Race for a living, chill, I don't give a damn vibe, and plays games sometimes. Mainly my personality to be honest.
Color: Green
Kart: Standard kart
Glider: Paper Glider
If you don't mind, can I also try to make some episodes? And when it's done, can I make it into a comic?
Description: Race for a living, chill, I don't give a damn vibe, and plays games sometimes. Mainly my personality to be honest.
Color: Green
Kart: Standard kart
Glider: Paper Glider
If you don't mind, can I also try to make some episodes? And when it's done, can I make it into a comic?
MKPC Official Card Game (Project)
On 2025-12-18 at 20:05:04
That's honestly kind of fire doe
On 2025-12-14 at 21:31:11
Welcome to MKPCOCG! I will make the project, you make the cards.
Make cards here: https://pokecardmaker.net/. Submit them!
We need 140 cards!
Booster Packs coming soon!
Rules:
1. Basics
Every card is one of 4 types: White, Green, Red and Blue.
The cards are either Support (required for Attacks), Normal (performing Attacks), or Partner (performing Power Skills and SP Skills).
2. About the cards
You can only have one Partner card in your deck.
You can place a "New" card in the Center and let them perform.
The card in the Center is also called the "Center card". To begin the game, you need at least 1 "New" card to set as the Center card.
Cards with "Spot" written in the top left corner are "Spot cards" and you can place them on the stage just like "New" cards.
The card in the Collab position is a "Collab card".
3. Warm-up
Select your Partner card and place it in the Partner position face down.
The winner of a rock, paper, scissors game decides who goes first.
Draw seven cards from your deck in the middle right.
The first hand is 7-card, which contains cards (1) - (5) and 2 other random cards. But you have the option to redraw.
To briefly go through the redraw process, return all the cards in your hand to the deck. Shuffle it again, and then draw 7 new cards.
After the first redraw, if you don't have a card with "New" written on the top left corner, show your entire hand to your opponent to make sure that there are no cards with "New" on them. You must redraw until you draw a card with "New" on it. With each redraw, you draw 1 less card. This means that if you don't have a "New" card in your hand, you have to start the game with fewer cards.
Next, place a "New" card from your hand onto the stage right in front of you.
Please take a look at card (1) in your hand.
If it's a "New" card, place it in the Center face down.
Once both sides are finished this setup, it's time to say "Live Start!" and flip the Center and Partner cards.
One final thing is to prepare your Life.
Life is prepared by the cards in the bottom left deck called the Support cards. They are in the Support deck in the bottom left. Life depends on the number in the bottom right corner of your Partner card, which may either be 4, 5 or 6. Put that number of Support cards in the Life deck, which is right above the Support deck.
4. Gameplay
When you begin your turn, please follow these steps in order.
1. Reset Phase (skipped on the first turn of both players)
2. Draw Phase
3. Support Phase
4. Main Phase
5. Performance Phase (skipped on the first turn of the first player)
6. End Phase
After the End Phase, pass the turn to your opponent.
First is the Reset Phase. Take cards that were in collab back on the stage and turn them sideways to indicate they're resting, or ready up resting cards. Resting cards cannot Collab or use Attacks.
If the Center position is empty, place a card from the Stage there.
During the Draw Phase, draw one card from the top of your deck.
Next is Support Phase! Draw one card from your Support deck and send it to one of the cards in the Center, the Partner position (to the right of the Center) or the Collab position (to the left of the Center). For the first turn, send the Support card underneath the Center card. This phase must be done every turn.
NOTE: You can only attach Support cards of the same type as the card which will be Supported.
In the Main Phase, first place cards (2) and (3) on the stage.
There are many other actions you can take during your turn, but in the first player's turn, your options are limited. However, there is one more useful thing that you can do this turn, and it's the "Collab".
Collab can only be used once per turn. To perform it, first place one card from the top of your deck face down next to your Partner card in the "Power" area. By accumulating cards in the "Power" area, you can move a card that is currently on the stage to the Collab position. A "Collab Effect" is an ability that activates when a card performs a Collab from the stage.
Time for the Performance Phase! Here, the Center or Collab card can use Attacks to deal damage to a Center or a Collab card. When a card has 0 HP left, it is downed and the player whose card is downed loses a life.
Downed cards are moved to the Archive (below your deck) with their Support cards. The player who lost a life reveals the top Support card from his Life deck and sends it to the Partner, Center or Collab card.
Here, Partner cards can use Power Skills and SP Skills, which use Power. The Power used is moved to the Archive.
End Phase: the player ends their turn.
5. Winning conditions
A player wins if:
1. he reduces his opponent's life to 0,
2. he removes all opposing cards from the stage (except for the Partner card),
3. the opponent has no cards in their deck at the start of the Draw Phase.
Make cards here: https://pokecardmaker.net/. Submit them!
We need 140 cards!
Booster Packs coming soon!
Rules:
1. Basics
Every card is one of 4 types: White, Green, Red and Blue.
The cards are either Support (required for Attacks), Normal (performing Attacks), or Partner (performing Power Skills and SP Skills).
2. About the cards
You can only have one Partner card in your deck.
You can place a "New" card in the Center and let them perform.
The card in the Center is also called the "Center card". To begin the game, you need at least 1 "New" card to set as the Center card.
Cards with "Spot" written in the top left corner are "Spot cards" and you can place them on the stage just like "New" cards.
The card in the Collab position is a "Collab card".
3. Warm-up
Select your Partner card and place it in the Partner position face down.
The winner of a rock, paper, scissors game decides who goes first.
Draw seven cards from your deck in the middle right.
The first hand is 7-card, which contains cards (1) - (5) and 2 other random cards. But you have the option to redraw.
To briefly go through the redraw process, return all the cards in your hand to the deck. Shuffle it again, and then draw 7 new cards.
After the first redraw, if you don't have a card with "New" written on the top left corner, show your entire hand to your opponent to make sure that there are no cards with "New" on them. You must redraw until you draw a card with "New" on it. With each redraw, you draw 1 less card. This means that if you don't have a "New" card in your hand, you have to start the game with fewer cards.
Next, place a "New" card from your hand onto the stage right in front of you.
Please take a look at card (1) in your hand.
If it's a "New" card, place it in the Center face down.
Once both sides are finished this setup, it's time to say "Live Start!" and flip the Center and Partner cards.
One final thing is to prepare your Life.
Life is prepared by the cards in the bottom left deck called the Support cards. They are in the Support deck in the bottom left. Life depends on the number in the bottom right corner of your Partner card, which may either be 4, 5 or 6. Put that number of Support cards in the Life deck, which is right above the Support deck.
4. Gameplay
When you begin your turn, please follow these steps in order.
1. Reset Phase (skipped on the first turn of both players)
2. Draw Phase
3. Support Phase
4. Main Phase
5. Performance Phase (skipped on the first turn of the first player)
6. End Phase
After the End Phase, pass the turn to your opponent.
First is the Reset Phase. Take cards that were in collab back on the stage and turn them sideways to indicate they're resting, or ready up resting cards. Resting cards cannot Collab or use Attacks.
If the Center position is empty, place a card from the Stage there.
During the Draw Phase, draw one card from the top of your deck.
Next is Support Phase! Draw one card from your Support deck and send it to one of the cards in the Center, the Partner position (to the right of the Center) or the Collab position (to the left of the Center). For the first turn, send the Support card underneath the Center card. This phase must be done every turn.
NOTE: You can only attach Support cards of the same type as the card which will be Supported.
In the Main Phase, first place cards (2) and (3) on the stage.
There are many other actions you can take during your turn, but in the first player's turn, your options are limited. However, there is one more useful thing that you can do this turn, and it's the "Collab".
Collab can only be used once per turn. To perform it, first place one card from the top of your deck face down next to your Partner card in the "Power" area. By accumulating cards in the "Power" area, you can move a card that is currently on the stage to the Collab position. A "Collab Effect" is an ability that activates when a card performs a Collab from the stage.
Time for the Performance Phase! Here, the Center or Collab card can use Attacks to deal damage to a Center or a Collab card. When a card has 0 HP left, it is downed and the player whose card is downed loses a life.
Downed cards are moved to the Archive (below your deck) with their Support cards. The player who lost a life reveals the top Support card from his Life deck and sends it to the Partner, Center or Collab card.
Here, Partner cards can use Power Skills and SP Skills, which use Power. The Power used is moved to the Archive.
End Phase: the player ends their turn.
5. Winning conditions
A player wins if:
1. he reduces his opponent's life to 0,
2. he removes all opposing cards from the stage (except for the Partner card),
3. the opponent has no cards in their deck at the start of the Draw Phase.
bro i cant wait for this
PROJECT: Mariokart World PC
On 2026-04-05 at 03:34:22
When are we updating le list
They ARE updating the list. You can check the second message of this topic, @BowserJr03 is updating that message instead of posting a new message every time the list gets updated.
(some of it is a bit inaccurate tho)
On 2026-02-27 at 17:01:52
so like will these tracks be added to the base game, a new website, or just a custom multicup
what is the better game: mario kart world or sonic racing crossworlds
On 2026-03-17 at 15:54:03
MKWRLD
KFP Team
On 2026-01-20 at 15:06:58
Submit harder tracks, Beginner Cup is done 
I would rather make harder tracks for you guys because the only tracks raiders will only play the hardest tracks, so you can do the easier ones just for the cup so others can play it and stuff.
you have to join KFP Team bro
well, i would rather for YOU GUYS. thats better wording.
On 2026-01-18 at 18:08:49
Submit harder tracks, Beginner Cup is done
I would rather make harder tracks for you guys because the only tracks raiders will only play the hardest tracks, so you can do the easier ones just for the cup so others can play it and stuff.
Vacation!!! :)
On 2026-04-03 at 15:54:02
I'm going on vacation soon this month, I'm very excited : D I'll be gone for a week sadly, my rank will probably go from 117, to 120 or 130. But, I really don't care, I'm just excited that I can finally go on a vacation again :P (I hope my little brother doesn't pee on my arm again on the way there) I'm creating this topic so my friends and all don't wonder where did I go because I randomly disappeared. Anyways, I'll be gone soon this month for a week!
Good bye,Esther! Wish you have a nice vacation.
Tysm : D
On 2026-04-02 at 21:32:49
Enjoy your vacation! I just got back from mine to Arizona last night.
That sounds so cool : P
On 2026-04-02 at 20:37:08
I'm going on vacation soon this month, I'm very excited : D I'll be gone for a week sadly, my rank will probably go from 117, to 120 or 130. But, I really don't care, I'm just excited that I can finally go on a vacation again :P (I hope my little brother doesn't pee on my arm again on the way there) I'm creating this topic so my friends and all don't wonder where did I go because I randomly disappeared. Anyways, I'll be gone soon this month for a week!
Nice! Praying for you that your brother wont do that nasty thing. Also, where are you going?
Most likely to some resort in West Virginia, idk
2On 2026-04-02 at 18:14:46
I'm going on vacation soon this month, I'm very excited : D I'll be gone for a week sadly, my rank will probably go from 117, to 120 or 130. But, I really don't care, I'm just excited that I can finally go on a vacation again :P (I hope my little brother doesn't pee on my arm again on the way there) I'm creating this topic so my friends and all don't wonder where did I go because I randomly disappeared. Anyways, I'll be gone soon this month for a week!
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3[Fanfic] A Normal Trip
On 2026-04-01 at 18:30:37
Episode 2
The hallway breathed.
Not metaphorically.
The walls expanded and contracted in slow, wet pulses, like lungs struggling to stay alive. The doors lining either side shifted ever so slightly with each inhale, their hinges creaking in uneven rhythm—as if they were trying to sync with something deeper in the building.
Sebastian didn’t move.
…Don’t open any doors yet.
His voice sounded wrong.
Not just shaken—delayed, like the building had to approve it before letting it exist.
Jake wiped sweat from his forehead, glancing at his own door.
Oh yeah, great idea. Let’s just stand in the flesh hallway and do nothing.
Melissa hugged herself tighter, staring at the floor.
It’s not flesh… it’s not… it just looks like that…
The floor twitched beneath her feet.
Frank let out a low breath.
I’ve worked in some bad kitchens… this smell? This is worse. Way worse.
A faint drip echoed somewhere far down the hall.
Then—
Another voice.
Not theirs.
Not from ahead.
Not from behind.
From inside the walls.
“…open…”
Gordo growled, low and guttural, backing away from the nearest door.
Grrrrrr…
Koroshi crouched, pressing his ear against the wall.
There’s… layers again. Like before. But now it’s… overlapping voices.
Neptuno clutched his DSi tighter.
I don’t like this. I really, really don’t like this…
The DSi screen flickered on.
None of them had pressed anything.
A message appeared:
SAVE FILE CORRUPTED. RESTORE?
Neptuno’s hands trembled.
I didn’t— I didn’t open anything…
The screen changed again.
PLAYER COUNT: 11
Everyone froze.
Slowly… they turned to each other.
Keinieo let out a dry laugh.
Yeah, no. Nope. Not doing this again. We’re all here. I can see you.
Nommanic shook his head.
Sight isn’t reliable here. Memory wasn’t either. Now it’s counting us…
Weegee stepped forward, forcing a grin that didn’t quite land.
Hey, hey— we handled the last puzzle, right? We just gotta figure out the rules again.
Sebastian’s gaze drifted to the open door at the end of the hall.
The one without a name.
Something inside it shifted.
And this time—
It stepped closer.
…We don’t go there. Not yet.
—
A click.
Melissa flinched.
Her door had just unlocked.
No one touched it.
It slowly creaked open.
Inside—
A bedroom.
Soft lighting. Warm. Safe.
Completely untouched by decay.
Melissa’s breath hitched.
…That’s my room.
The others looked inside.
Everything was perfect.
Too perfect.
The bed neatly made. The air still. Even the faint scent of perfume lingered, untouched by the rot outside.
Jake frowned.
Okay, that’s… actually nice. Suspicious, but nice.
Sebastian grabbed Melissa’s wrist before she could step forward.
Wait.
She pulled slightly.
It’s fine. It’s just my room. Maybe this is how we get out—
The mirror inside the room shifted.
Not visibly.
But wrong.
Koroshi noticed first.
Don’t go in.
Melissa stopped.
Why?
Koroshi pointed.
Look at the mirror.
They did.
Everyone’s reflection stood in the hallway.
Except Melissa’s.
Her reflection was already inside the room.
Standing by the bed.
Smiling.
Melissa’s face drained of color.
…I’m not doing that.
The reflection tilted its head.
Then raised a hand.
And knocked on the inside of the mirror.
Three slow taps.
Knock.
Knock.
Knock.
The real Melissa stumbled back.
The door slammed shut on its own.
Locked again.
—
No one spoke for a long moment.
Then—
Jake’s door clicked.
Oh come ON—
It swung open violently.
Inside—
Darkness.
Total.
Except for a faint metallic glint.
Jake swallowed.
…That’s not my place.
A voice came from inside.
His voice.
You already picked wrong once.
Jake staggered back.
Nope. Nope. Not listening to that.
The darkness moved, stretching toward the doorway like fingers.
Sebastian slammed the door shut.
No one goes into their rooms.
Nommanic nodded slowly.
These aren’t safe spaces. They’re… distortions. Personalized traps.
Frank looked down the hallway again.
Then what’s the goal? We just avoid everything?
The answer came immediately.
From every door at once.
They all creaked open.
—
Inside each one—
Something waited.
Not rooms.
Not memories.
But scenes.
Moments frozen in time.
Some familiar.
Some not.
And in every single one—
Something was wrong.
Neptuno’s screen flickered again.
OBJECTIVE UPDATED:
FIX WHAT WAS BROKEN.
OR JOIN IT.
—
Fix… what?
Sebastian stepped forward slowly, scanning the open doors.
…We don’t have a choice.
He pointed to one.
Frank’s.
Inside—
A kitchen.
Burned.
Blackened walls. Melted utensils. A stove still faintly glowing red.
And in the center—
A figure.
Charred.
Still standing.
Frank’s breathing stopped.
…No. No, that’s not—
The figure turned.
Its face cracked as it moved.
Ash fell away.
Revealing Frank’s own features beneath.
Burned.
Smiling.
You left the stove on.
Frank stumbled back.
I didn’t— I would never—
You might have, Nommanic said quietly. Or you think you might have. That’s enough here.
The burned version of Frank stepped closer.
Fix it.
The stove flared brighter.
The room grew hotter.
The smell of burning flesh filled the hallway.
Frank shook his head violently.
I’m not going in there.
The figure tilted its head.
Then—
It reached out of the doorway.
Its arm stretched unnaturally long, fingers splitting at the joints as they scraped across the floor toward him.
Gordo lunged forward, barking wildly.
RAAAAGH!
The arm recoiled slightly—but didn’t retreat.
It just… waited.
…If I don’t fix it…
It escalates, Nommanic said.
We help him, Sebastian added.
Jake shook his head.
Help him HOW? That thing is literally cooked!
Koroshi pulled out a sticker.
It showed the kitchen.
But different.
The stove was off.
The burned figure was gone.
This might be the “correct” version, he said. We need to make it match this.
Frank swallowed hard.
…So I go in there… and turn off the stove.
The burned version of him smiled wider.
Too wide.
Yes.
Sebastian stepped beside him.
You won’t be alone.
Frank hesitated.
Then nodded.
—
The moment they stepped inside—
The door slammed shut behind them.
The heat intensified instantly.
Sebastian’s skin prickled.
The stove roared louder.
Frank forced himself forward.
Just… turn it off. Just turn it off…
The burned version circled them slowly.
You’re too late.
Ignore it!
Frank reached for the stove.
The handle was fused.
Melted into place.
It’s stuck!
The burned version lunged.
Its hands grabbed Frank’s shoulders—
And suddenly—
Frank wasn’t standing.
He was watching.
From outside his own body.
Seeing himself in the kitchen.
Forgetting to turn the stove off.
Walking away.
The flames starting.
Growing.
Consuming everything.
…No…
You left, the burned version whispered.
Fix it.
Frank screamed—
And forced his hand forward.
Through the heat.
Through the melting metal.
Through the pain that shouldn’t exist.
He grabbed the dial.
And turned.
—
Click.
—
Silence.
The fire vanished instantly.
The burned version froze.
Cracked.
And shattered into ash.
—
The door reopened.
Sebastian and Frank stumbled back into the hallway.
Frank collapsed to his knees, gasping.
I felt it… I felt all of it…
The hallway was quieter now.
One door had closed.
Permanently.
Neptuno’s screen updated again.
ERROR CORRECTED.
REMAINING: 10
—
TEN?!
They all froze.
Slowly…
They counted again.
One.
Two.
Three…
Eleven.
Still eleven.
But the screen insisted:
Ten.
Koroshi looked down at his sticker again.
Now—
It showed only ten figures.
…It’s happening again.
Sebastian’s chest tightened.
Who did we lose?
Silence.
No one answered.
Because no one knew.
And worse—
No one could remember if someone had been standing there just seconds ago.
—
At the end of the hall—
The nameless door creaked wider.
The thing inside stepped closer.
This time—
They all saw it.
It had no fixed shape.
Just shifting pieces.
Faces.
Limbs.
Voices overlapping.
All of them.
Every single one.
You are still late.
You are still late.
You are still late.
You are still late.
All spoken at once.
Sebastian’s flashlight flickered again.
And for a split second—
They saw themselves.
All of them.
Standing inside that room.
Watching.
Waiting.
Smiling.
—
End of Episode 2
The hallway breathed.
Not metaphorically.
The walls expanded and contracted in slow, wet pulses, like lungs struggling to stay alive. The doors lining either side shifted ever so slightly with each inhale, their hinges creaking in uneven rhythm—as if they were trying to sync with something deeper in the building.
Sebastian didn’t move.
…Don’t open any doors yet.
His voice sounded wrong.
Not just shaken—delayed, like the building had to approve it before letting it exist.
Jake wiped sweat from his forehead, glancing at his own door.
Oh yeah, great idea. Let’s just stand in the flesh hallway and do nothing.
Melissa hugged herself tighter, staring at the floor.
It’s not flesh… it’s not… it just looks like that…
The floor twitched beneath her feet.
Frank let out a low breath.
I’ve worked in some bad kitchens… this smell? This is worse. Way worse.
A faint drip echoed somewhere far down the hall.
Then—
Another voice.
Not theirs.
Not from ahead.
Not from behind.
From inside the walls.
“…open…”
Gordo growled, low and guttural, backing away from the nearest door.
Grrrrrr…
Koroshi crouched, pressing his ear against the wall.
There’s… layers again. Like before. But now it’s… overlapping voices.
Neptuno clutched his DSi tighter.
I don’t like this. I really, really don’t like this…
The DSi screen flickered on.
None of them had pressed anything.
A message appeared:
SAVE FILE CORRUPTED. RESTORE?
Neptuno’s hands trembled.
I didn’t— I didn’t open anything…
The screen changed again.
PLAYER COUNT: 11
Everyone froze.
Slowly… they turned to each other.
Keinieo let out a dry laugh.
Yeah, no. Nope. Not doing this again. We’re all here. I can see you.
Nommanic shook his head.
Sight isn’t reliable here. Memory wasn’t either. Now it’s counting us…
Weegee stepped forward, forcing a grin that didn’t quite land.
Hey, hey— we handled the last puzzle, right? We just gotta figure out the rules again.
Sebastian’s gaze drifted to the open door at the end of the hall.
The one without a name.
Something inside it shifted.
And this time—
It stepped closer.
…We don’t go there. Not yet.
—
A click.
Melissa flinched.
Her door had just unlocked.
No one touched it.
It slowly creaked open.
Inside—
A bedroom.
Soft lighting. Warm. Safe.
Completely untouched by decay.
Melissa’s breath hitched.
…That’s my room.
The others looked inside.
Everything was perfect.
Too perfect.
The bed neatly made. The air still. Even the faint scent of perfume lingered, untouched by the rot outside.
Jake frowned.
Okay, that’s… actually nice. Suspicious, but nice.
Sebastian grabbed Melissa’s wrist before she could step forward.
Wait.
She pulled slightly.
It’s fine. It’s just my room. Maybe this is how we get out—
The mirror inside the room shifted.
Not visibly.
But wrong.
Koroshi noticed first.
Don’t go in.
Melissa stopped.
Why?
Koroshi pointed.
Look at the mirror.
They did.
Everyone’s reflection stood in the hallway.
Except Melissa’s.
Her reflection was already inside the room.
Standing by the bed.
Smiling.
Melissa’s face drained of color.
…I’m not doing that.
The reflection tilted its head.
Then raised a hand.
And knocked on the inside of the mirror.
Three slow taps.
Knock.
Knock.
Knock.
The real Melissa stumbled back.
The door slammed shut on its own.
Locked again.
—
No one spoke for a long moment.
Then—
Jake’s door clicked.
Oh come ON—
It swung open violently.
Inside—
Darkness.
Total.
Except for a faint metallic glint.
Jake swallowed.
…That’s not my place.
A voice came from inside.
His voice.
You already picked wrong once.
Jake staggered back.
Nope. Nope. Not listening to that.
The darkness moved, stretching toward the doorway like fingers.
Sebastian slammed the door shut.
No one goes into their rooms.
Nommanic nodded slowly.
These aren’t safe spaces. They’re… distortions. Personalized traps.
Frank looked down the hallway again.
Then what’s the goal? We just avoid everything?
The answer came immediately.
From every door at once.
They all creaked open.
—
Inside each one—
Something waited.
Not rooms.
Not memories.
But scenes.
Moments frozen in time.
Some familiar.
Some not.
And in every single one—
Something was wrong.
Neptuno’s screen flickered again.
OBJECTIVE UPDATED:
FIX WHAT WAS BROKEN.
OR JOIN IT.
—
Fix… what?
Sebastian stepped forward slowly, scanning the open doors.
…We don’t have a choice.
He pointed to one.
Frank’s.
Inside—
A kitchen.
Burned.
Blackened walls. Melted utensils. A stove still faintly glowing red.
And in the center—
A figure.
Charred.
Still standing.
Frank’s breathing stopped.
…No. No, that’s not—
The figure turned.
Its face cracked as it moved.
Ash fell away.
Revealing Frank’s own features beneath.
Burned.
Smiling.
You left the stove on.
Frank stumbled back.
I didn’t— I would never—
You might have, Nommanic said quietly. Or you think you might have. That’s enough here.
The burned version of Frank stepped closer.
Fix it.
The stove flared brighter.
The room grew hotter.
The smell of burning flesh filled the hallway.
Frank shook his head violently.
I’m not going in there.
The figure tilted its head.
Then—
It reached out of the doorway.
Its arm stretched unnaturally long, fingers splitting at the joints as they scraped across the floor toward him.
Gordo lunged forward, barking wildly.
RAAAAGH!
The arm recoiled slightly—but didn’t retreat.
It just… waited.
…If I don’t fix it…
It escalates, Nommanic said.
We help him, Sebastian added.
Jake shook his head.
Help him HOW? That thing is literally cooked!
Koroshi pulled out a sticker.
It showed the kitchen.
But different.
The stove was off.
The burned figure was gone.
This might be the “correct” version, he said. We need to make it match this.
Frank swallowed hard.
…So I go in there… and turn off the stove.
The burned version of him smiled wider.
Too wide.
Yes.
Sebastian stepped beside him.
You won’t be alone.
Frank hesitated.
Then nodded.
—
The moment they stepped inside—
The door slammed shut behind them.
The heat intensified instantly.
Sebastian’s skin prickled.
The stove roared louder.
Frank forced himself forward.
Just… turn it off. Just turn it off…
The burned version circled them slowly.
You’re too late.
Ignore it!
Frank reached for the stove.
The handle was fused.
Melted into place.
It’s stuck!
The burned version lunged.
Its hands grabbed Frank’s shoulders—
And suddenly—
Frank wasn’t standing.
He was watching.
From outside his own body.
Seeing himself in the kitchen.
Forgetting to turn the stove off.
Walking away.
The flames starting.
Growing.
Consuming everything.
…No…
You left, the burned version whispered.
Fix it.
Frank screamed—
And forced his hand forward.
Through the heat.
Through the melting metal.
Through the pain that shouldn’t exist.
He grabbed the dial.
And turned.
—
Click.
—
Silence.
The fire vanished instantly.
The burned version froze.
Cracked.
And shattered into ash.
—
The door reopened.
Sebastian and Frank stumbled back into the hallway.
Frank collapsed to his knees, gasping.
I felt it… I felt all of it…
The hallway was quieter now.
One door had closed.
Permanently.
Neptuno’s screen updated again.
ERROR CORRECTED.
REMAINING: 10
—
TEN?!
They all froze.
Slowly…
They counted again.
One.
Two.
Three…
Eleven.
Still eleven.
But the screen insisted:
Ten.
Koroshi looked down at his sticker again.
Now—
It showed only ten figures.
…It’s happening again.
Sebastian’s chest tightened.
Who did we lose?
Silence.
No one answered.
Because no one knew.
And worse—
No one could remember if someone had been standing there just seconds ago.
—
At the end of the hall—
The nameless door creaked wider.
The thing inside stepped closer.
This time—
They all saw it.
It had no fixed shape.
Just shifting pieces.
Faces.
Limbs.
Voices overlapping.
All of them.
Every single one.
You are still late.
You are still late.
You are still late.
You are still late.
All spoken at once.
Sebastian’s flashlight flickered again.
And for a split second—
They saw themselves.
All of them.
Standing inside that room.
Watching.
Waiting.
Smiling.
—
End of Episode 2
1On 2026-04-01 at 16:39:21
Last night I have been working on episode 2 for the whole entire night and I have been working on the fanfic for this whole entire day so far, so I don't have that much to do left, I'm very surprised on how much progress I have made on the second episode so far : D
On 2026-04-01 at 14:22:24
Episode 1
They didn’t remember signing up for it.
That was the first thing Sebastian noticed.
Not just him—*all of them*.
The bus was just still in the fog, its headlights still humming weakly as if they had been left on for hours. Or days. The road behind it stretched into nothing, swallowed by a pale gray haze that pulsed like something breathing.
Sebastian tightened his grip on the flashlight.
Does anyone… remember how we got here?
No one answered immediately.
Jake scoffed, adjusting his jacket, though his fingers trembled just enough to betray him.
Yeah, we got on a bus. Not rocket science, kid.
But from where? Melissa snapped, arms crossed, slippers slapping softly against the cracked asphalt as she shifted. I don’t remember the start point. Or the driver.
Frank rubbed his temples, staring at the bus like it had personally wronged him.
My restaurant… I was closing up. I remember locking the door, and then… He stopped. His breathing hitched. Nothing.
Koroshi crouched near the front tire, peeling off a sticker he had apparently just printed—a perfect replica of the bus logo. He frowned.
This logo doesn’t exist. I made it, like, five seconds ago… but it was already there before I printed it.
That’s not funny, Neptuno muttered, clutching his DSi like a lifeline. None of this is funny.
Gordo let out a low growl.
The fog shifted.
And then something *moved inside it.*
—
They found the building because it *wanted* to be found.
It stood alone beyond the road—a massive, decaying structure of warped concrete and blackened windows. No signs. No lights. Just a door slightly ajar, as if inviting them.
Or expecting them.
Weegee wiped his hands on his overalls.
Alright, classic horror setup. We go in, we find a phone, we leave. Easy.
Melissa froze.
No phones.
Everyone looked at her.
No phones, she repeated, sharper this time. We find anything else.
Jake rolled his eyes.
Yeah, sure, we’ll avoid the spooky telephones. That’ll save us.
Nommanic stepped forward, gaze narrowing at the doorway.
Something’s wrong with the space here. It feels… layered.
Keinieo smirked, flipping his craft knife open and shut.
Layered or not, standing out here isn’t better.
Sebastian swallowed, then nodded.
We stay together. No splitting up.
That was the second mistake.
—
Inside, the air smelled like rot.
Not normal rot—something older. Damp walls peeled like skin. The floor creaked in a way that didn’t match their steps.
Every sound lagged half a second behind reality.
Frank noticed first.
Did you hear that?
They all stopped.
A faint echo of their own footsteps continued… even though they weren’t moving.
KFP waved their glowstick slowly, the orange light cutting through the dimness.
…
The glow flickered strangely—like it was being swallowed instead of reflected.
There’s writing, Koroshi said suddenly.
On the wall ahead, scratched deep into the surface:
**YOU WERE LATE.**
Jake snorted.
Late for what?
The message *changed.*
The letters twisted, reshaping with a wet, grinding sound.
**YOU ARE STILL LATE.**
Sebastian’s chest tightened.
We should go.
He turned back toward the door.
It was gone.
—
The first puzzle appeared in a room that shouldn’t exist.
A long hallway had led them there, but when they looked back, the hallway was only a few feet long—ending in a solid wall.
The room itself was circular. In the center stood a metal table. On it: twelve objects.
Each one belonged to them.
Sebastian’s Fire Flower. Jake’s pistol. Frank’s pan. Melissa’s slippers. Koroshi’s sticker printer. Neptuno’s DSi. Keinieo’s Pepsi bottle. Weegee’s toolbox. Nommanic’s Ultra Ball. KFP’s glowstick. And even Gordo sat beside an empty space, whining softly.
Above the table, carved into the ceiling:
**ONLY WHAT YOU REMEMBER IS REAL. CHOOSE WRONG, AND IT WILL REMEMBER YOU INSTEAD.**
Neptuno let out a shaky laugh.
Okay… puzzle. We just pick our own stuff, right?
No, Nommanic said quietly. It’s not that simple.
Sebastian stepped closer. His Fire Flower looked… off. The colors were slightly wrong. Too dull.
Jake grabbed his pistol instantly.
Done. Easy.
The moment his fingers wrapped around it—
The sound of a gunshot echoed.
But Jake hadn’t pulled the trigger.
He froze.
Then slowly looked down.
The pistol was… inside his hand.
Not held.
Embedded.
Metal fused with flesh, stretching his skin unnaturally as the barrel pushed through his palm.
Jake screamed.
AAAAAA—!
The walls *echoed it back*, but distorted—like multiple versions of his scream layered over each other.
“WRONG,” something whispered.
Not from the room.
From *inside* them.
Jake staggered back, clutching his arm, but the pistol was gone again—leaving no wound.
Just the memory.
And the pain.
—
Don’t touch anything, Sebastian said quickly, voice shaking. We have to think.
Frank stared at the pan.
I cook every day. That should be mine… but why does it feel… unfamiliar?
Melissa looked at her slippers, then down at her feet. She was barefoot.
…I was wearing these earlier.
No, Keinieo said. You *think* you were.
Koroshi slowly peeled a sticker from his printer. It showed the room exactly as it was—but one detail was different.
In the sticker, there were only eleven people.
Not twelve.
Someone here doesn’t belong, he said.
Silence fell.
Gordo whimpered.
Sebastian’s heart pounded.
What do you mean?
Koroshi held up the sticker.
Count.
They did.
One.
Two.
Three…
Twelve.
But the sticker still showed eleven.
Neptuno backed away.
Stop messing around—
I’m not, Koroshi snapped. One of us isn’t real.
The writing on the ceiling shifted again.
**REMOVE THE EXTRA.**
—
Panic erupted.
Jake stumbled backward.
You think it’s me? Because of the gun thing?
No one said that, Frank replied, though his voice lacked conviction.
Nommanic’s eyes darted between them.
We’re missing something. Memory defines reality here… so whoever *wasn’t remembered*—
KFP’s glowstick flickered violently.
Sebastian turned to them.
KFP?
They didn’t respond.
They just stood there, perfectly still.
Too still.
…Have they said anything since we came in? Melissa asked quietly.
Silence.
No one could answer.
Because none of them remembered.
The glowstick dropped from KFP’s hand.
It hit the floor with a hollow sound.
And KFP’s body… *folded.*
Not like a person collapsing.
Like paper being crushed.
Their form compressed inward, shrinking, twisting—until there was nothing left but the glowstick.
The room exhaled.
The ceiling text faded.
The door reappeared.
—
No one spoke as they left.
Not about KFP.
Not about the puzzle.
Not about how none of them could clearly remember KFP’s face anymore.
Only that something had been there.
And now it wasn’t.
—
The hallway beyond was darker.
Longer.
And lined with doors.
Each one labeled with a name.
Sebastian.
Jake.
Frank.
Melissa.
All of them.
At the very end of the hall, one final door stood open.
No name.
Inside, something moved.
A voice echoed from within—layered, broken, familiar.
“YOU ARE STILL LATE.”
Sebastian’s flashlight flickered.
And for a split second—
He saw himself standing inside that room.
Smiling.
Waiting.
—
End of Episode 1.
PS. I searched up a LOT of phrases that books use, so please ignore some stuff.
They didn’t remember signing up for it.
That was the first thing Sebastian noticed.
Not just him—*all of them*.
The bus was just still in the fog, its headlights still humming weakly as if they had been left on for hours. Or days. The road behind it stretched into nothing, swallowed by a pale gray haze that pulsed like something breathing.
Sebastian tightened his grip on the flashlight.
Does anyone… remember how we got here?
No one answered immediately.
Jake scoffed, adjusting his jacket, though his fingers trembled just enough to betray him.
Yeah, we got on a bus. Not rocket science, kid.
But from where? Melissa snapped, arms crossed, slippers slapping softly against the cracked asphalt as she shifted. I don’t remember the start point. Or the driver.
Frank rubbed his temples, staring at the bus like it had personally wronged him.
My restaurant… I was closing up. I remember locking the door, and then… He stopped. His breathing hitched. Nothing.
Koroshi crouched near the front tire, peeling off a sticker he had apparently just printed—a perfect replica of the bus logo. He frowned.
This logo doesn’t exist. I made it, like, five seconds ago… but it was already there before I printed it.
That’s not funny, Neptuno muttered, clutching his DSi like a lifeline. None of this is funny.
Gordo let out a low growl.
The fog shifted.
And then something *moved inside it.*
—
They found the building because it *wanted* to be found.
It stood alone beyond the road—a massive, decaying structure of warped concrete and blackened windows. No signs. No lights. Just a door slightly ajar, as if inviting them.
Or expecting them.
Weegee wiped his hands on his overalls.
Alright, classic horror setup. We go in, we find a phone, we leave. Easy.
Melissa froze.
No phones.
Everyone looked at her.
No phones, she repeated, sharper this time. We find anything else.
Jake rolled his eyes.
Yeah, sure, we’ll avoid the spooky telephones. That’ll save us.
Nommanic stepped forward, gaze narrowing at the doorway.
Something’s wrong with the space here. It feels… layered.
Keinieo smirked, flipping his craft knife open and shut.
Layered or not, standing out here isn’t better.
Sebastian swallowed, then nodded.
We stay together. No splitting up.
That was the second mistake.
—
Inside, the air smelled like rot.
Not normal rot—something older. Damp walls peeled like skin. The floor creaked in a way that didn’t match their steps.
Every sound lagged half a second behind reality.
Frank noticed first.
Did you hear that?
They all stopped.
A faint echo of their own footsteps continued… even though they weren’t moving.
KFP waved their glowstick slowly, the orange light cutting through the dimness.
…
The glow flickered strangely—like it was being swallowed instead of reflected.
There’s writing, Koroshi said suddenly.
On the wall ahead, scratched deep into the surface:
**YOU WERE LATE.**
Jake snorted.
Late for what?
The message *changed.*
The letters twisted, reshaping with a wet, grinding sound.
**YOU ARE STILL LATE.**
Sebastian’s chest tightened.
We should go.
He turned back toward the door.
It was gone.
—
The first puzzle appeared in a room that shouldn’t exist.
A long hallway had led them there, but when they looked back, the hallway was only a few feet long—ending in a solid wall.
The room itself was circular. In the center stood a metal table. On it: twelve objects.
Each one belonged to them.
Sebastian’s Fire Flower. Jake’s pistol. Frank’s pan. Melissa’s slippers. Koroshi’s sticker printer. Neptuno’s DSi. Keinieo’s Pepsi bottle. Weegee’s toolbox. Nommanic’s Ultra Ball. KFP’s glowstick. And even Gordo sat beside an empty space, whining softly.
Above the table, carved into the ceiling:
**ONLY WHAT YOU REMEMBER IS REAL. CHOOSE WRONG, AND IT WILL REMEMBER YOU INSTEAD.**
Neptuno let out a shaky laugh.
Okay… puzzle. We just pick our own stuff, right?
No, Nommanic said quietly. It’s not that simple.
Sebastian stepped closer. His Fire Flower looked… off. The colors were slightly wrong. Too dull.
Jake grabbed his pistol instantly.
Done. Easy.
The moment his fingers wrapped around it—
The sound of a gunshot echoed.
But Jake hadn’t pulled the trigger.
He froze.
Then slowly looked down.
The pistol was… inside his hand.
Not held.
Embedded.
Metal fused with flesh, stretching his skin unnaturally as the barrel pushed through his palm.
Jake screamed.
AAAAAA—!
The walls *echoed it back*, but distorted—like multiple versions of his scream layered over each other.
“WRONG,” something whispered.
Not from the room.
From *inside* them.
Jake staggered back, clutching his arm, but the pistol was gone again—leaving no wound.
Just the memory.
And the pain.
—
Don’t touch anything, Sebastian said quickly, voice shaking. We have to think.
Frank stared at the pan.
I cook every day. That should be mine… but why does it feel… unfamiliar?
Melissa looked at her slippers, then down at her feet. She was barefoot.
…I was wearing these earlier.
No, Keinieo said. You *think* you were.
Koroshi slowly peeled a sticker from his printer. It showed the room exactly as it was—but one detail was different.
In the sticker, there were only eleven people.
Not twelve.
Someone here doesn’t belong, he said.
Silence fell.
Gordo whimpered.
Sebastian’s heart pounded.
What do you mean?
Koroshi held up the sticker.
Count.
They did.
One.
Two.
Three…
Twelve.
But the sticker still showed eleven.
Neptuno backed away.
Stop messing around—
I’m not, Koroshi snapped. One of us isn’t real.
The writing on the ceiling shifted again.
**REMOVE THE EXTRA.**
—
Panic erupted.
Jake stumbled backward.
You think it’s me? Because of the gun thing?
No one said that, Frank replied, though his voice lacked conviction.
Nommanic’s eyes darted between them.
We’re missing something. Memory defines reality here… so whoever *wasn’t remembered*—
KFP’s glowstick flickered violently.
Sebastian turned to them.
KFP?
They didn’t respond.
They just stood there, perfectly still.
Too still.
…Have they said anything since we came in? Melissa asked quietly.
Silence.
No one could answer.
Because none of them remembered.
The glowstick dropped from KFP’s hand.
It hit the floor with a hollow sound.
And KFP’s body… *folded.*
Not like a person collapsing.
Like paper being crushed.
Their form compressed inward, shrinking, twisting—until there was nothing left but the glowstick.
The room exhaled.
The ceiling text faded.
The door reappeared.
—
No one spoke as they left.
Not about KFP.
Not about the puzzle.
Not about how none of them could clearly remember KFP’s face anymore.
Only that something had been there.
And now it wasn’t.
—
The hallway beyond was darker.
Longer.
And lined with doors.
Each one labeled with a name.
Sebastian.
Jake.
Frank.
Melissa.
All of them.
At the very end of the hall, one final door stood open.
No name.
Inside, something moved.
A voice echoed from within—layered, broken, familiar.
“YOU ARE STILL LATE.”
Sebastian’s flashlight flickered.
And for a split second—
He saw himself standing inside that room.
Smiling.
Waiting.
—
End of Episode 1.
PS. I searched up a LOT of phrases that books use, so please ignore some stuff.
Oh yeah, you mixed up some colours. I am Red and Koroshi is White and Jake is Dodger Blue
oh okay thx for letting me know ima fix that