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name: TJ
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species: human
abilities: Shotgun, with 420 bullets. can use rapid fire at any time

Ep#2 Nasty Surprises

At the entrance to the quick mode tracks;

Fiery; The tracks lead through the entrance. Something was dragged through here.
Nudge; So we follow them. Who’s with me?
Illuzhion; Okay, let’s go.
Melee; Alright. The marks are leading toward the portal leading to the track called ‘GBA Riverside Park.’ It looks like the one Toad made.
Toad; Oh you guys are gonna looove this track. We should stop for a race!
Popplio; Did you install a waterslide? Cuz I’ll totally go!
Knoah; HERE WE GO!!!
Nudge; What the… Why are you yelling so loud, you idiot? If someone involved with that bomber is at this track, now they know we’re here.
Knoah; Uh, sorry.
Illuzhion; Well, let’s just go in and get it over with.

StarSplizz; There’s no one here, as far as I can tell.
Sorbet; There’s some sort of pounding noise coming from the tunnel. We should go see what’s up.

Everyone goes to the cave.

Dark; Well then, here we are.
MisterCringeh; Wow, that pounding is very loud. What's going on in there?
Knoah; Go on, we’ve got to go look.
Everyone goes in. Knoah creates a clone and sends it in. He waits outside.

Noob; AAAHHH! Thwomps! Everyone get out of the way!
Xrunner48; Move!
Toad; What are these things doing here? I didn’t bring them! YOWCH!!!
StarSplizz; Toad’s been crushed!
Nudge; He’s half vampire, he’ll be fine.
Noob; What? OOF.
MisterCringeh; Noob, are you okay?
Fiery; He’s just unconscious. Let’s get out of here.
Xrunner48; I’ll carry Noob out. StarSplizz, can you get Toad?
Melee; I’ve got him.

Then the thwomps at near the entrances started hitting the ceiling instead.

MisterCringeh; Aaaand the ceiling is coming down.
Illuzhion; Great, just perfect.

The entrances collapsed, trapping many of the MKPCians inside. Xrunner48 managed to get out with Noob. Popplio slipped out through a gap before it closed.

Knoah; What happened in there? Are you alright?
Dietsoda; No time for that. We need to get out of here. There’s some sort of army coming out of the water.
Noob; Ooow. Wait, what about the others?
Dietsoda; We’ll come back for them. Now move, shorty.

A mob of green-blue creatures walking on two legs approached from the water. Their eyes were pale white and their huge hands held clubs. The MKPCians ran toward the portal, but some of the creatures reached it first.

Dietsoda; We’ll have to fight our way through.
Popplio; Uuuh, I don’t know about this.
Xrunner48; EEEYAAAH!

Xrunner48 charged and killed the creatures before they could capture the MKPCians. Dietsoda fired an arrow and hit a distant one between the eyes.

Xrunner48; Let’s go. We’ll get K and Oskar and they can help us free the others.

They went through the portal. Behind them, Knoah looked at the creatures bodies and snarled angrily. Then he followed.

Meanwhile, at the entrance to the official tracks;

K; We’re almost through. If we can just repair the control mechanism we can reactivate the portal.
Oskar; It’s kinda late, can we just go to sleep and finish in the morning?
???; You’re never going to finish this job. No one must see what is on the other side of the portal!
Oskar; Huh? Who’s talking?

A cloaked figure appeared out of the shadows, leading something that looked like a huge, hairless dog.
K; What is that thing!? Aaargh!

The dog attacked them, pulling them down and dragging them away. K dropped a small metal box on the ground before the dog beat him.

???; Quickly, we need to get these two to ‘Bowser Catwalk.’ We will dispose of them there…

Inside the cave, the MKPCians are confused and worried.

Dark; At least the thwomps have stopped. We need to get out of here. Anyone got a plan?
Sorbet;I've got an idea. Listen, here's what we need to do...

What in the name of Wargor is going on in MKPC?! Who is this person to control particularly ugly mutant dog-monsters? Will the trapped MKPCians be able to escape the cave? And what is up with Knoah?

So since the vote was very much in favor of not changing the colors, all colors are the same, except for when people wanted their own colors changed. Hope you liked this episode, #3 should be a bit better. Right now I'm sorta just getting the plot moving.

He’s already getting a color change because white is my color and he didn’t choose white

Name: Fiery
Species: Toad
Color: Green
personality: just how a toad acts in a mario game
skills: can teleport anyone anywhere and can disable gravity

You could always use lightgreen. It's rather similar to aqua.

@FieryToad ^^

Name: Fiery
Species: Toad
Color: Green
personality: just how a toad acts in a mario game
skills: can teleport anyone anywhere and can disable gravity

Ok, just plz send me the required info so I can use your character.

EDIT; are you another @Knoah alt?

BlueGrayRJ Said on SNES GCN Baby Park that I could use the Courses. Obviously You didn't Look at it.

That's like saying you can take RHcks' tracks and saying it's yours because it wasn't been worked on in a while. You can only be the owner of the image if you make it yourself.

Btw, you should probably learn about copyright laws and stuff because taking other people's works may result in legal disputes etc. Luckily this is only mkpc where it's not a massive deal (and the course is generally just deleted).

In My case, The Original Track was Deleted. I brought back the Original If it will make You happy. I'll Give Credit.

Interesting! I Also Save Track Images! I Saved One Fiery Toad Made!