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[FANFIC] Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising

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EP4

The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.

Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...

Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.

Back at Tropical District Galaxy...

Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-

Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.

Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.

With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.

Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.

But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

I like the fanfic, but I find my personnality annoying overall, and not in the right sense, I'm more like a sensitive crybaby that stands up for his friends rather than someone who is often cussing at others while being annoying. As an example, I would say the environment is nice, rather than being too serious and saying rudely to Bj that we're not here for that, especially in that way.

Other than that the fanfic is ok
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EP3

After getting pushed back by a deadly cactus demon, The Heroes have to fight. Slowly but surely, both sides discover new galaxies... and new ambitions. What will each of them find? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Max: Whoa! How are we gonna beat this thing?
Lely: I don't know! I've never played Super Mario Galaxy!
Chilli: Haha, noob.
Lely: When will you learn to SHUT UP?!
Saguantuan: GROOOAAAARRGH!
Lely: I thought I just told humanity to SHUT UP! That applies to monsters as well!
Saguantuan: WAAAAAAAAA!
*Saguantuan starts weeping*
Max: Way to make him cry, Lely.
Chilli: I don't like you, Lely!
Lely: I'm sorry! Besides, Chilli, I'd figured.
*Saguantuan stops crying all of a sudden*
Saguantuan: Wait, where's Elija?
Jey: That's what we're trying to find out! Wanna come with us?
Saguantuan: Uhhh, sure. I'd better give you this Power Star in case you need it.

Now The Heroes have 1 out of 7 Power Stars! As they travel to another galaxy, Saguantuan the Mutant Cactus joins them on their adventures.

Max: So this is the new galaxy.
Lely: 'Tropical District Galaxy' - not the most creative name - I swear there was a similarly named Mario Kart track.
Saguantuan: Yeah, the inhabitants apparently named it after Coconut Mall.
Chilli: Avid gamers, huh? Hey Lely, bet you can't relate!
Lely: SHUT UP, CHILLI!!
Max: Both of you, stop fighting!

So they made their way into the central plaza. But what will they find? Is Saguantuan trustworthy? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Good, but there's a few things that don't fit me at all :
- I've played SMG but it was for the gag so OK
- I wouldn't say shut up to something I don't even know, especially if I'm just angry at Chilli
- I wouldn't say this name is uncreative, but ok
- I wouldn't scream at Chilli, in this case he's just annoying, I would stay calm and I would just tell him to stop

But still, it's kinda good
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Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?


Wouldn't say hate. I would just say that if you back off and let me take over the universe you will be a fine subject under my rule.

I just can't let you do that... :p


You sure?

I will try to stop you as much as I can. There needs to be people to control the galaxy, but they shouldn't be dictators, and do whatever they want, they should actually respect people, and hearing them out, and helping them out.
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Dietsoda wrote:
Invu wrote:
Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?


Wouldn't say hate. I would just say that if you back off and let me take over the universe you will be a fine subject under my rule.

I just can't let you do that... :p
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This fanfic is gonna divide MKPC in two sides, istg.
That ultimate family feeling will get away with those two names, heroes and villains. This is gonna divide us.
(This is a joke)
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EP2:

Our heroes and villains have thus far arrived in a mysterious universe. Lemon, Dietsoda and Lely have sustained some damage, but with some help they were restored to full health. Elija's still searching for the others, but while doing so he realized it wasn't a sustainable plan. With help from the others who landed in the same galaxy, he created a neo-mechanical space hub, but is it all that nice and selfless? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Lemon: Wha... where am I?
Elija: We arrived here 24 hours ago. Nudge, take her to the center.
Nudge: Got it, boss.
Lemon: Jeez Elija, how much did you spend on this?
Elija: Not a cent. I just found some crystals lying about and decided to set up a place to live.

While The Villains were enjoying themselves, unfortunately for The Heroes, things weren't so great...

Dietsoda: Report to base. I repeat, REPORT TO BASE!
Lely: Hey, what's going on, Dietsoda?
*Dietsoda puts transceiver on hold*
Dietsoda: Uhhh... nothing.
xrunner48: Hey, DS, what's going on?
Dietsoda POV: Lely's being a jerk, that's what.
Dietsoda IRL: I don't know. Lely just thought it was a good idea to question me out of the blue.
Nudge: Hey, what you got against Lely, huh?
Dietsoda POV: He's foiling our plans of intergalactic domination, stupid.
Elija: You OK, DS? You seem... kinda self-centered all of a sudden.
Lely: OWWWW!
Dietsoda: Sorry, got to go. Lely just hurt himself for the millionth time today. DS out.
Max: Hey, what's up Lely?
Lely: Chilli just punched me for no reason!
Chilli: No I didn't!
Lely: Liar!
Chilli: Well, what on earth do you expect me to do? You're listening to K-Pop and we're on an important mission!
Max: Honestly?


Lely and Chilli were so engrossed in their little brawl that nobody realized that Dietsoda had gone AWOL. Suddenly, a humongous mutant cactus emerged from the ground, sending all of them flying away while they were oblivious. For some reason, Dietsoda made it back to base unscathed.

What will happen next? Will The Heroes defeat the cactus demon? Or will they all perish in the attempt? What are Dietsoda's true intentions? Is Elija as nice as he appears? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

The fight part really fits my personality.
I hate K-pop.
Also, unexpected Dietsoda cactus moment!

That doesn't gives you the right to hit me. Imagine me being like "Let's beat up people that likes heavy metal, or rap, because I feel like doing so"
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Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?
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In a mysterious land, our heroes (and villains) are relaxing at Elija’s place.

Dietsoda: I wish something interesting would happen today… it’s just like every other day.
xrunner: I know.
Max: Would you two shut up for once, I’m trying to sleep.
Nudge: Lighten up a bit Max, Elija did make us pizza after all.
Max: I’m trying to sleep it off, Nudge.
Lemon: Hey guys, sorry to sound off topic, but what is THAT?!

A rift between space and time had opened up in Elija’s backyard. Bowser stormed out of it, appearing to have kidnapped Mario, Peach and Luigi.

Elija: Jeez, does this guy EVER stop bugging people?
*Elija kills Bowser*
Bowser: OH GREAAAAT!!

But that didn’t stop the rift from expanding. Mario, Luigi and Peach wandered off home, leaving the others to the mercy of the ever-expanding void.

Chilli: Oh great, now we’re all about to DIE!!!
Elija: Of course we’re going to die, genius(!)
Max: How on earth do you stay calm when our lives are at risk?
Elija: Has it never occurred to you that I’m part feline? I have nine lives, Max, nine!
Max: Oh yeah, so you and Lemon should be just fine!
Nudge: Well, let’s at least accept our fate.
Lely: I don’t wanna die yet, I’m halfway through a BTS song!
Elija: I’m the most intelligent being of all you lot, we’re not going to die. This void is probably linked to a wormhole, so we’ll be OK.
Flabebseth: Why didn’t you say so earlier, Einstein?
Elija: Just wanted to see the look on your stupid faces.
Paratroopa: If I was on an MKPC forum right now, I’d give you a Mario facepalm.
Elija: Anyone gonna jump in?
Lely: I’m too scared!
Lemon: Eh sure, why not?
Nudge and Dietsoda: Fine.

Everyone eventually agreed to jump into the wormhole. But what happened next? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

I can't believe you actually did a BTS reference, that adds to the accuracy of my character, my character is super accurate and the fanfic is pretty cool and accurate, I just think Max is a bit too agressive but its up to him to correct you and that's not my job, also I love this
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Hello !
Personnality : obsessed by cuteness, crybaby, sensitive, hates when my friends are in pain, slightly smart and very kind, a bit sadist and completely dumb
I wouldn't fit as a villain tbh
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Stress par rapport à Flora Piranha

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Maxou64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Maxou64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Maxou64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Maxou64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Je ne pense pas que ce soit si grave si on ne l'obtient pas, ça reste un personnage, je trouve que tu vas peut-être un peu loin en envoyant des mails à Nintendo, ça fait un peu forcing à ce point, tu vois un nouveau perso arriver et tu en proposes plus, je sais pas trop... :s


Je ne le force pas, je lui ai proposé des idées de persos. C'est très différent. Bon peut être que c'est un peu genre imposer.

"forcing" c'est pas la même chose que "forcer". Forcer c'est littéralement aller vers la personne et l'obliger à faire ce que tu veux. Le forcing, ça peut être insister répétitivement. Bref, ce n'est pas grave... Je trouve juste bizarre que tu stresse autant sur l'apparition d'un personnage


Je stresse parce que Flora est l'un des persos les plus désirés de Mario Kart, elle est mon perso favori et elle a fait son retour dans MKT après 19 ans d'absence. En plus, dans Ruines Plante Piranha, y a plein de réfs à elle, donc il serait illogique que le circuit soit ajouté, mais pas Flora.

Déjà qu'est-ce qui te dit qu'on aura le circuit x)
Je comprends que tu espères sa venue, mais pas que tu stresses 🤷‍♂️


Il arrivera à la vague 5, sinon à la vague 6.

Comme je l'ai dit, je crois, Birdo a un lien avec Ile de Yoshi, donc Flora a un lien avec Ruines Plante Piranha vu les références à elle dans le circuit, donc il serait logique qu'elle soit ajoutée quand ce circuit sera inclus.

Mais comment tu peux savoir que le circuit va arriver ? C'est probable, mais ce n'est pas officiel... :s


C une prédiction.

Oui mais tu dis ça comme si c'était officiel et confirmé, tes prédictions ne sont pas forcément la réalité, d'ailleurs elles ne le sont malheureusement pas dans la plupart des cas ^^'
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Maxou64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Maxou64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Maxou64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Je ne pense pas que ce soit si grave si on ne l'obtient pas, ça reste un personnage, je trouve que tu vas peut-être un peu loin en envoyant des mails à Nintendo, ça fait un peu forcing à ce point, tu vois un nouveau perso arriver et tu en proposes plus, je sais pas trop... :s


Je ne le force pas, je lui ai proposé des idées de persos. C'est très différent. Bon peut être que c'est un peu genre imposer.

"forcing" c'est pas la même chose que "forcer". Forcer c'est littéralement aller vers la personne et l'obliger à faire ce que tu veux. Le forcing, ça peut être insister répétitivement. Bref, ce n'est pas grave... Je trouve juste bizarre que tu stresse autant sur l'apparition d'un personnage


Je stresse parce que Flora est l'un des persos les plus désirés de Mario Kart, elle est mon perso favori et elle a fait son retour dans MKT après 19 ans d'absence. En plus, dans Ruines Plante Piranha, y a plein de réfs à elle, donc il serait illogique que le circuit soit ajouté, mais pas Flora.

Déjà qu'est-ce qui te dit qu'on aura le circuit x)
Je comprends que tu espères sa venue, mais pas que tu stresses 🤷‍♂️


Il arrivera à la vague 5, sinon à la vague 6.

Comme je l'ai dit, je crois, Birdo a un lien avec Ile de Yoshi, donc Flora a un lien avec Ruines Plante Piranha vu les références à elle dans le circuit, donc il serait logique qu'elle soit ajoutée quand ce circuit sera inclus.

Mais comment tu peux savoir que le circuit va arriver ? C'est probable, mais ce n'est pas officiel... :s
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Maxou64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Maxou64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Je ne pense pas que ce soit si grave si on ne l'obtient pas, ça reste un personnage, je trouve que tu vas peut-être un peu loin en envoyant des mails à Nintendo, ça fait un peu forcing à ce point, tu vois un nouveau perso arriver et tu en proposes plus, je sais pas trop... :s


Je ne le force pas, je lui ai proposé des idées de persos. C'est très différent. Bon peut être que c'est un peu genre imposer.

"forcing" c'est pas la même chose que "forcer". Forcer c'est littéralement aller vers la personne et l'obliger à faire ce que tu veux. Le forcing, ça peut être insister répétitivement. Bref, ce n'est pas grave... Je trouve juste bizarre que tu stresse autant sur l'apparition d'un personnage


Je stresse parce que Flora est l'un des persos les plus désirés de Mario Kart, elle est mon perso favori et elle a fait son retour dans MKT après 19 ans d'absence. En plus, dans Ruines Plante Piranha, y a plein de réfs à elle, donc il serait illogique que le circuit soit ajouté, mais pas Flora.

Déjà qu'est-ce qui te dit qu'on aura le circuit x)
Je comprends que tu espères sa venue, mais pas que tu stresses 🤷‍♂️
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Maxou64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Je ne pense pas que ce soit si grave si on ne l'obtient pas, ça reste un personnage, je trouve que tu vas peut-être un peu loin en envoyant des mails à Nintendo, ça fait un peu forcing à ce point, tu vois un nouveau perso arriver et tu en proposes plus, je sais pas trop... :s


Je ne le force pas, je lui ai proposé des idées de persos. C'est très différent. Bon peut être que c'est un peu genre imposer.

"forcing" c'est pas la même chose que "forcer". Forcer c'est littéralement aller vers la personne et l'obliger à faire ce que tu veux. Le forcing, ça peut être insister répétitivement. Bref, ce n'est pas grave... Je trouve juste bizarre que tu stresse autant sur l'apparition d'un personnage
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Je ne pense pas que ce soit si grave si on ne l'obtient pas, ça reste un personnage, je trouve que tu vas peut-être un peu loin en envoyant des mails à Nintendo, ça fait un peu forcing à ce point, tu vois un nouveau perso arriver et tu en proposes plus, je sais pas trop... :s

Blueyfan has been doing some stuff lately

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FieryToad wrote:
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FieryToad wrote:
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600 is actually REASONABLE. 650 isn't.
Btw, stop copying my template "About [...]"
Jk
But yeah, that's very annoying, and the worst is that he is stubborn, not even trying to debate with us

It was your template? Never knew, but the guy can’t explain why he’s facepalming and why he thinks his memes are funny. He’s ignoring us. He does understand, he’s dodging the questions and for zero reason.

No it's not my template lol, I just noticed people used it once I already used it. But that ain't my template lol, I was joking. About Bluey, you are right, he dodges any debate, unlike Landon, who despite having basically zero arguments or absolutely stupid arguments, actually responded to our complaints and debated with us, instead of straight up ignoring us.

I took the joke too seriously and changed the topic title 😅 I think Landon is worse though, they got banned for PEDOPHILIA of all things…All Bluey did was just make some bad memes, have bias and just be stubborn. While Landon was a entitled crybaby who thought their opinions were over everyone elses.

No no no, you got me wrong here, I never said BLuey was worse than Landon, Landon was way worse and he did that since a longer amount of time, already posting annoying comments back in 2021. Plus his arguments were dumb, he made fun of everyone he didn't like, and wasn't capable of using better arguments than "Oh it's not my fault, it's your fault. WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH I only send hate because you are hateful. I'm gonna tell mommy right now" while he was 16. He was entitled to his opinion and was super arrogant towards everyone, he even called Max mean for nothing lol. I just said Bluey completely dodges the debate whereas Landon, despite being stupid in the said debate using stupid arguments and being annoying, still participated in the debate and didn't ignore everything we said. Unlike Bluey who genuinely acts as if nothing happened, letting the story and reproaches go with a mario facepalm that only represents a lack of arguments and a debate dodge.
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FieryToad wrote:
Invu wrote:
600 is actually REASONABLE. 650 isn't.
Btw, stop copying my template "About [...]"
Jk
But yeah, that's very annoying, and the worst is that he is stubborn, not even trying to debate with us

It was your template? Never knew, but the guy can’t explain why he’s facepalming and why he thinks his memes are funny. He’s ignoring us. He does understand, he’s dodging the questions and for zero reason.

No it's not my template lol, I just noticed people used it once I already used it. But that ain't my template lol, I was joking. About Bluey, you are right, he dodges any debate, unlike Landon, who despite having basically zero arguments or absolutely stupid arguments, actually responded to our complaints and debated with us, instead of straight up ignoring us.
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600 is actually REASONABLE. 650 isn't.
Btw, stop copying my template "About [...]"
Jk
But yeah, that's very annoying, and the worst is that he is stubborn, not even trying to debate with us

the last of me

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Why are you leaving "forever" exactly ? There doesn't sound to be any reason to that, not even boredom. I find it quite weird that yoiu are saying you'll leave forever, but goodbye I guess.

Merry St. Valentines Years!

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Did I Get the Name Wrong?

Yes, it's called St. Valentine's Day. I know some places unofficially extend it as a week-long celebration, but who on Earth would convince you that it's a whole YEAR?

It's even worse than you think, he called it YEARS
That means we are gonna have to deal with the lovey dovey birds for several years
Ughhhhh I feel so single
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I'm a bit late, but... happy Valentine's Day !
I feel so single...

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