[Fanfic] Mario & Luigi: Brothership

This fanfic is Mario & Luigi: Brothership, but it's slightly changed. This is also for people that are too lazy to just read the entire story on the Mario Wiki. Anyways, here's the cast, a work in progress as you can see:
Mario,
Luigi,
Green Shades Toad (by @MisterYoshi),
Chris The Yoshi (also by @MisterYoshi),
Random Creepy Toad (just guess who it's by...),
and "flying computer face."

You can put in a character, it's just most likely it won't be accepted. If you have any questions, just post 'em and I'll be working on the first episode.

Well, that's disheartening. Green Shades Toad?
Just has a chill personality.

That could be a Toad in a part of a shop in the game, that's really all I could think of. Just add more details if you're planning to make more characters.

Okay. I have the Avengers roster with me-- jk I have five more.

Edit:
Hunter (from This Is Mariokart) the Yoshi
Chris the Yoshi (me pretty much)
Random Creepy Toad (feel free to leave him out)
Princess Diané (red hair princess from a random fanfic I've been working on. Likes fighting and is a bit more than a warrior than a princess)
Ziro (from Splatoad! Battle Arena, but a human.)

Only Chris the Yoshi and Random Creepy Toad make it. Only characters based off of Mario characters with slight changes make it, really.

Alright. I'll keep it in mind.

Prologue
Oh hello, didn’t see you there.
WHACK!
???: Big Bro, who are you talking to?
???: Shush! We’re currently whacking this flying computer face with our hammers, so I recommend to cover your ears.
WHACK!
???: Brother, I think he’s more falling computer face, not flying, now.
”falling computer face”: CAN YOU GUYS SHUT UP WHILE WE’RE ALL FALLING TO OUR DEATH?
???: No thanks, flying computer face.
WHACK!
???: It’s falling, not flying…
???: Potato, Pahtahto.
???: Wouldn’t it be respectful to give the existent or non-existent people you’re talking to our names?
???: Nah, let’s do that… next episode, and in a different part of our story. I feel uncomfortable speaking like that earlier and breaking the 4th wall…
???: Which wall do you mean? There are only 46,8-
WHACK!

Disclaimer: I haven't played M&L: Brothership, so feel free to change the prices.

Nommanic Folloreht the Shy Guy; color: #0080ff

My thought:
(Mario and Luigi arrive at the village, or whatever town is in the game. The camera goes to Nommanic, standing somewhere in the village like NPCs do. When Mario and Luigi talk to Nommanic...)
Nommanic: Need some extra stuff?
-> YES!
     NO!
(Player selects "yes."
Potion: 50 coins (or so.)
Description: Heals 20 HP for either Mario or Luigi.

Super Potion: 100 coins (or so.)
Description: Heals 50 HP for either Mario or Luigi.

Hyper Potion: 250 coins (or so.)
Description: Heals 200 HP for either Mario or Luigi.

Max Potion: 500 coins (or so.)
Description: Heals ALL HP for either Mario or Luigi.

Full Heal: 500 coins (or so.)
Description: Cures all status effects for either Mario or Luigi.

Full Restore: 1000 coins (or so.)
Description: Cures all status effects and heals all HP for either Mario or Luigi.

Vitamin: 500 coins (or so.)
Description: Increases a stat for either Mario or Luigi.

Ether: 100 coins (or so.)
Description: Restores 10 Bros Points (or whatever this game's equivalent is) to either Mario or Luigi.

Elixr: 150 coins (or so.)
Description: Restores 10 Bros Points (or whatever this game's equivalent is) to BOTH Mario and Luigi.

Max Ether: 500 coins (or so.)
Description: Restores ALL Bros Points to either Mario or Luigi.

Max Elixr: 750 coins (or so.)
Description: Restores ALL Bros Points to BOTH Mario and Luigi.

Heal: 100 coins (or so.)
Description: Heals a status condition on either Mario or Luigi.

(Yes, those items are taken directly from the Pokemon series.)

Note: Sometimes, in certain locations, he can be seen doing aiming practise with Hunter, who he knows from This is Mario Kart.

This shouldn't affect gameplay too much, right?

Hope you don't mind, but can I change the Pokémon Items to things like Mushrooms, Syrup Jars, Refreshing Herbs, etc.? Also, I can't do extremely specific colors, but I can change that color to this. Wait just kidding I didn't read all that, you're appoved entirely with the stuff you did. Revives and Full Revives have the same system as 1-Up Mushrooms and 1-Up DXs, so I'ma add that. There are some things like Nuts and Ampberries. I guess you could make Full Heals later for Ampberries and Heals just not doing the same thing as Ampberries. Full Restores will cure everything, including BP or Bros. Points. The "Vitamins" you're talking about are replacement for Beans, rare things to raise stats. I may have to remove that since Beans aren't normally sold in stores, just for rewards. I appove of it not taking action too much, since I kinda want it to be different so John Nintendo doesn't come to my front door.

Episode 1: The Wackiest Day... Part 1...
One day, in the Mushroom Kingdom, it was ABSOLUTELY peacefu-
WHOOSH!!
Luigi: Mario, heeeeeelp!
Mario: Luigi?
Luigi: Heeeeelp!
Bees were following Luigi, so much for calling it peaceful...
Mario: Ugh... again?
Luigi: This never happened, Brother.
Mario: DON'T RUN OVER THERE! THAT'S A CLIFF!!!
Luigi: Huh?
Luigi looks down, about 30 feet below him, ground stood there.
Luigi: Mariooooooo!
Mario: LUIGI!
Mario pulls Luigi up from the cliff.
Mario: Luigi, why are your gloves yellow? Did you pee on your gloves again?
Luigi: I never did that, what?
Suddenly, a portal was above them, the portal sucked them up from the ground.
Meanwhile, Peach was teaching Toads a lesson about the difference between Mushrooms and 1-Up Mushrooms.
Peach: You see, mushrooms- huh? What is that up there?
Green Shades Toad: WHAT THE HECK, I'M TO YOUNG TO DIEEEEEEEE!!!
Toad: Calm down. What even is up- holy shi-
Meanwhile, Bowser and his minions were in his airship nearby.
Koopa: Oh look, a pink tuby thing down there!
Bowser: Huh.
Goomba: What's up? Literally!
Bowser: HUH!? WHAT THE HECK IS HAPPENING?
Then, the portal by Mario and Luigi was sucking so hard, and Luigi went up the portal.
WHOOSH!
Mario, thinking: Who knows what is down there, but I gotta go save him...
Mario: Luigi! Wait!
WHOOSH!
Mario goes through the portal, pushing himself like a professional swimmer. Soon, Mario finds Luigi and grabs his hand.
Luigi: Huh? Look around.
Mario looking everywhere, he sees visions of a tree dying, lands drifting away from one of them. Mario looks right where Luigi SHOULD be, but he's not there. Mario looks everywhere, soon finding Luigi.
Mario: Luigi! Get over here!
Luigi, trying to come to Mario: I... Can't... Oh no... nononononononononononononono...
Luigi fades away at the end of the portal.
Mario, thinking: Oh well, guess another adventure is about to start...
Mario looks forward. He sees extremely bright light.
Mario, thinking: Please, light, take me to my brother, no matter what it takes...
Mario fades into the light like Luigi did earlier. Well, he's gone. Wait. WHAT DO I NARRATE, NOW?!

That's kinda unrealistic. They would probably, idk, learn it from their parents, or learn it at Toad school from a teacher. But I guess Peach would also teach some Toads because... what does the Princess even do in her free time?

GREAT use of BBcode btw.

A short hypothetical scenario I wrote because I was bored:

Peach: You see, mushroom make you bigger--
Random Gen Alpha Kid: Bigger?
Peach: --and 1-Ups give you--
Random Gen Alpha Kid: What about the normal mushroom?
Daisy: *bursting in* Did you mean 1-Up Hearts? Anyway, a weird portal just-- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
.........
Peach: Okay, resuming our lesson: You see mushrooms-- huh? What is that up there?

Well, I was in a rush since my Switch Browser time limit was abt to go off. Either way, the entire episode  is supposed to be this:

I know it seems nothing like the video, but it’s supposed to be a bit different from the game so it would be better than just reading it straight off of Mario Wiki.