{Fanfic} Yoshi LOVER's Grand Prix!

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On 2025-08-10 at 03:05:56
Why has no one said they’re friends with Boner? ;_;
Also new information on him:
Friends:
Canada
Dasher
Explorer
Personally:
LIKES TO YAP.
^ *LOVES*
Preferred tracks: Dry Bones Burnout, Bone-Dry Dunes
Preferred items: Hammer (MKTour/MKWorld), POW Block (MKWii), Bullet Bill (DS, Wii, 7, 8/8dx, World)
Other:
Chucks his freaking skull at people when angry 💀
Chucks bones (like in SMB3)
Rattles when nervous/afraid
By “preferred tracks” i mean almost always wins on em
By “preferred items” i mean he uses them VERY strategically
Also his name is now “DryBonesFan”
Also new information on him:
Friends:
Canada
Dasher
Explorer
Personally:
^ *LOVES*
Preferred tracks: Dry Bones Burnout, Bone-Dry Dunes
Preferred items: Hammer (MKTour/MKWorld), POW Block (MKWii), Bullet Bill (DS, Wii, 7, 8/8dx, World)
Other:
Chucks his freaking skull at people when angry 💀
Chucks bones (like in SMB3)
Rattles when nervous/afraid
By “preferred tracks” i mean almost always wins on em
By “preferred items” i mean he uses them VERY strategically
Also his name is now “DryBonesFan”
On 2025-08-12 at 22:45:29
Pretty Cool That You're Taking Inspiration Of My Fanfic, Also I Would Like To Join To This!
Anyways Here's My Info
Name: Sebastian
Species: A Normal Human
Personality: Friendly, Knows Where To Go In And Has A Rivalry Against Sébastien
Text Colour: Blue
Class: Medium
Team: Green
Anyways Here's My Info
Name: Sebastian
Species: A Normal Human
Personality: Friendly, Knows Where To Go In And Has A Rivalry Against Sébastien
Text Colour: Blue
Class: Medium
Team: Green
On 2025-08-12 at 22:51:00
Name: GamerGuy
Personality: SILENT
Color: Blue
Species: Animation
Team: Green
description:
he is not a human, rather animation, he's not actually real, he's a flat image that rotates with player's vision... as he is an Animation, the drawer can do whatever the heck they want with him. so @YoshiLOVER do whatever you feel like with him, I don't care
Personality: SILENT
Color: Blue
Species: Animation
Team: Green
description:
he is not a human, rather animation, he's not actually real, he's a flat image that rotates with player's vision... as he is an Animation, the drawer can do whatever the heck they want with him. so @YoshiLOVER do whatever you feel like with him, I don't care
On 2025-08-13 at 02:18:49
Here, why not? (Hope you don't mind @SuperSwimmer)
Nommanic Folloreht
13-year-old Pokemon Trainer
Reacts pedantically, nonchalantly, or snarkily. (Whichever's best)
Cyan!!
Lightweight
Pink Team
Elemental Ally: Volcan
Weapons: Time Blade, Star Bow
Items: 20 Hyper Potions, 20 Full Heals, Pokemon:
Lvl 80 Typhlosion
Eruption, Shadow Claw, Solar Beam, Sunny Day
Lvl 50 SHINY Gyarados
Bite, Ice Fang, Waterfall, Dragon Dance
Lvl 50 Raichu
Thunderbolt, Rain Dance, Surf, Thunder Wave
Lvl 40 Vapereon
Surf, Aurora Beam, Bite, Shadow Ball
Lvl 40 Graveler
Earthquake, Rollout, Strength, Rock Smash
Lvl 30 Kadabra
Teleport, Psybeam, Disable, Magical Eye
Lvl 20 Pichu
Nasty Plot, Charm, Thundershock, Thunder Wave
Lvl 20 Machop
Karate Chop, Low Kick, Focus Energy, Leer
Lvl 20 Bellsprout
Vine Whip, Sleep Powder, Poison Powder, Stun Spore
Lvl 30 Togetic:
Yawn, Extrasensory, Fly, Magical Leaf
Lvl 20 Poliwag
Hypnosis, Rain Dance, Water Gun, Double Slap
Kart: MKPC Daisy
A quick learner, he is moderately skilled in almost everything. He hates burgers. He is a pro at reverse drifting, and is capable of many shortcuts. He does not bag. He has war experience, and can use a spear well, though he is somewhat weak. His favorite food is ramen. His favorite Pokemon type is Ghost.
Next character:
Opulent Crafty Mystic Folloreht
Psychic 16-year-old novice trainer
Her personality is similar to Nommanic's, but she leans on the pedantic side and not on the nonchalant or snarky side.
Cyan!!
Medium Weight
Pink Team
Elemental Ally: Psycho
Weapons: Star Blade, Star Bow
Items: A weird rock that is indistinguishable from a Moon Stone (A gift from Nommanic), and a Pokemon:
Lvl 10 Charmander
Scratch, Smokescreen, Ember, Bite
Kart: Dry Bomber
She has Pryokinetic powers, is quite physically capable, and yes she is Nommanic's sister. She dislikes burgers. She is a pro at Mario Kart DS and can easily outrun reverse drifters by snaking. She doesn't bag either. She often throws her kart for stylish and practical moves. Her favorite food is pizza.
Nommanic Folloreht
13-year-old Pokemon Trainer
Reacts pedantically, nonchalantly, or snarkily. (Whichever's best)
Cyan!!
Lightweight
Pink Team
Elemental Ally: Volcan
Weapons: Time Blade, Star Bow
Items: 20 Hyper Potions, 20 Full Heals, Pokemon:
Lvl 80 Typhlosion
Eruption, Shadow Claw, Solar Beam, Sunny Day
Lvl 50 SHINY Gyarados
Bite, Ice Fang, Waterfall, Dragon Dance
Lvl 50 Raichu
Thunderbolt, Rain Dance, Surf, Thunder Wave
Lvl 40 Vapereon
Surf, Aurora Beam, Bite, Shadow Ball
Lvl 40 Graveler
Earthquake, Rollout, Strength, Rock Smash
Lvl 30 Kadabra
Teleport, Psybeam, Disable, Magical Eye
Lvl 20 Pichu
Nasty Plot, Charm, Thundershock, Thunder Wave
Lvl 20 Machop
Karate Chop, Low Kick, Focus Energy, Leer
Lvl 20 Bellsprout
Vine Whip, Sleep Powder, Poison Powder, Stun Spore
Lvl 30 Togetic:
Yawn, Extrasensory, Fly, Magical Leaf
Lvl 20 Poliwag
Hypnosis, Rain Dance, Water Gun, Double Slap
Kart: MKPC Daisy
A quick learner, he is moderately skilled in almost everything. He hates burgers. He is a pro at reverse drifting, and is capable of many shortcuts. He does not bag. He has war experience, and can use a spear well, though he is somewhat weak. His favorite food is ramen. His favorite Pokemon type is Ghost.
Next character:
Opulent Crafty Mystic Folloreht
Psychic 16-year-old novice trainer
Her personality is similar to Nommanic's, but she leans on the pedantic side and not on the nonchalant or snarky side.
Cyan!!
Medium Weight
Pink Team
Elemental Ally: Psycho
Weapons: Star Blade, Star Bow
Items: A weird rock that is indistinguishable from a Moon Stone (A gift from Nommanic), and a Pokemon:
Lvl 10 Charmander
Scratch, Smokescreen, Ember, Bite
Kart: Dry Bomber
She has Pryokinetic powers, is quite physically capable, and yes she is Nommanic's sister. She dislikes burgers. She is a pro at Mario Kart DS and can easily outrun reverse drifters by snaking. She doesn't bag either. She often throws her kart for stylish and practical moves. Her favorite food is pizza.
On 2025-08-13 at 20:02:47
Chapter 1: The first race
Also glitched I couldn't add you in the 1st chapter because I was halfway writing the chapter when you submittedYoshi LOVER: (Walks into a room) So this is where I wait for the race huh...
Mercury: Hey YL! Your late!
Everyone waves at YL and are sitting down in some sort of house and waiting to go to the next race
Charlie: YL You made it just in time for the first race, it starts in 10 mins!
Lakitu: Hiya everyone! since the race is about to start anyone who has anything they can cheat with give it to me
Sébastien: Ugh Fine, I'll still beat Yoshi LOVER...
Lakitu: Alright! Let's get onto the track!
Sankeh: Gotta go fassssstttttttttt!
Play Music for this section:
Lakitu: Alright everyone! Check the rules!
Macey: Yo YL! You should see these items
Yoshi LOVER: Wow! There are some odd but funny items in there though!
Sébastien: Ugh only nerds check the items, I don't need to (Looks over to starlly who has his eyes right on the info for the items checking them like a idiot)
Macey: Anyway....
Totallyindian: The race is going to start!
Play this music until it finishes or until next music appears:
Lakitu: Everybody welcome to Yoshi LOVER Circuit! A nice grassland full of grass and wildlife!
Lakitu: 3
Lakitu: 2
Lakitu: 1
Lakitu: GO!
Play this music:
Yoshi LOVER: Look an item box! (Gets A Item box and hits the person in 1st place with a red shell)
Magicallity: Your gonna Pay for that Weakling!
Starlly: Wow I got this... Lightsaber? Cool! (Starts throwing it like a boomerang)
Mercury: (Throws A Red Shell At Starlly)
Starlly: (Blocks the red shell with his lightsaber)
Dasher: I'ma try and take this shortcut with my mushroom! (Falls Into the lake) Oh no!
Meanwhile In the top 3 placements for right now They are all so close to each other
Yoshi LOVER: (Tries drifting but fails) aw man!
Explorer: Oh No!
Magicallity: (Passes YL And Explorer) Now this is payback!
Macey: (Gets A Thundershroom) Wow this is like a mushroom but faster and longer!
Magicallity: What??
Medicallity: Cya Bro!
Second Lap! Here are the placements so far!
1st: Macey
2nd: Medicallity
3rd: Magicallity
4th: Explorer
5th: Yoshi LOVER
6th: Boner
7th: Starlly
8th: Mercury
9th: Totallyindian
10th: Canada is underwater lol
11th: YoshayLOVER
12th: Mr Yawshi
13th: Dull
14th: Charlie
15th: Sébastien
16th: Dasher
17th: Sankeh
18th: Squishy
Squishy: W-wh- what is this?(Grabs a hyper bill which is a normal Bullet bill but WAY Faster and blinds any person it touches for 5 seconds)
Sankeh: w-why am I blinded?
Dasher: What happned? Why can't I see?
Sébastien: It doesn't matter (Accidently drives into a fence) What? I hit something wooden?
Charlie: (Avoids the Hyper Bill at the right time) How did I avoid that? (Gets A Bullet bill cannon which is a cannon that lasts for 10 seconds and you can shoot bullet bills at racers)
Dull: OW! (Gets hit by a bullet bill but avoids the hyper bill) Oh thanks I guess?
Mr Yawshi: What is this a Magic ball? (uses the item and everyone turns into a koopa)
Yes YES Take that you idiots! (Gets Hit by Hyper Bill)
Yoshay LOVER: Guys wait a sec (Gets Hit By hyper bill) Where is Evil YL and Cosmic?
Canada: Oh Yeah, That's odd, they might be in the next race!
totallyindian: Hmm I don't think so, cosmic before took peach's castle with the help of someone (looks at Sébastien) but I'm not sure
Mercury: (Grabs a item called the shell bunch which has 1 of every shell kind and throws the 2 normal shells backwards and throws the blue shell) Take this (passes Starlly and Yoshi LOVER)
Starlly: OW!
Yoshi LOVER: With all of this star wars stuff I wouldn't be surprised if next race Osi Sobeck decided to race..
Mercury: Who?
Starlly: Some star wars character
Boner: Honestly No one cares
FINAL LAP! Here are the placements so far!
1st: Macey
2nd: Medicallity
3rd: Magicallity
4th: Squishy
5th: Explorer
6th: Mercury
7th: Boner
8th: Starlly
9th: Yoshi LOVER
10th: Totallyindian
11th: Yoshay LOVER
12th: Canada
13th: Dull
14th: Charlie
15th: Mr Yawshi
16th: Dasher
17th: Sankeh
18th: Sébastien
Macey: Ah the final lap this is intense!
Medicallity: Any thing could happen though...
Medicallity: Like what (Gets hit by a red shell)
Squishy: Heheheehehehehe
Mercury: Good job Squish!
Explorer: (Gets A abra) What's this do?
Abra: (Teleports away)
Explorer: Oh well!
Yoshi LOVER: Uhh Guys. Why do I hear Bullet Bill noises?
???: Yes a Bullet Bill
Macey: Who is that? WHAT HE JUST PASSED THE FINISH LINE BEFORE ME!
Boner: 💀💀💀
Lakitu: Alright everyone here are the placements
1st: Charlie = 30 Points
2nd: Macey = 25 Points
3rd: Medicallity = 20 Points
4th: Magicallity = 19 Points
5th: Squishy = 18 Points
6th: Mercury = 17 Points
7th: Boner = 16 Points
8th: Yoshi LOVER = 15 Points
9th: totallyindian = 14 Points
10th: Canada = 13 Points
11th: Yoshay LOVER = 10 Points
12th: Dull = 8 Points
13th: Starlly = 6 Points
14th: Explorer = 4 Points
15th: Sankeh = 2 Points
16th: Dasher = 0 Points
17th: Mr Yawshi = -2 Points (but he has none so nothing happens)
18th: Sébastien = -4 Points (but he has none so nothing happens)
Back at the house...
Medicallity: Wow that was fun!
Macey: Why is someone knocking on the door... oooh I know, new racers!
Next Chapter Coming Soon
I am under da water
pls help me
Anyways great episode although I only got 1 line??

On 2025-08-15 at 08:47:45
Chapter 1: The first race
Also glitched I couldn't add you in the 1st chapter because I was halfway writing the chapter when you submittedYoshi LOVER: (Walks into a room) So this is where I wait for the race huh...
Mercury: Hey YL! Your late!
Everyone waves at YL and are sitting down in some sort of house and waiting to go to the next race
Charlie: YL You made it just in time for the first race, it starts in 10 mins!
Lakitu: Hiya everyone! since the race is about to start anyone who has anything they can cheat with give it to me
Sébastien: Ugh Fine, I'll still beat Yoshi LOVER...
Lakitu: Alright! Let's get onto the track!
Sankeh: Gotta go fassssstttttttttt!
Play Music for this section:
Lakitu: Alright everyone! Check the rules!
Macey: Yo YL! You should see these items
Yoshi LOVER: Wow! There are some odd but funny items in there though!
Sébastien: Ugh only nerds check the items, I don't need to (Looks over to starlly who has his eyes right on the info for the items checking them like a idiot)
Macey: Anyway....
Totallyindian: The race is going to start!
Play this music until it finishes or until next music appears:
Lakitu: Everybody welcome to Yoshi LOVER Circuit! A nice grassland full of grass and wildlife!
Lakitu: 3
Lakitu: 2
Lakitu: 1
Lakitu: GO!
Play this music:
Yoshi LOVER: Look an item box! (Gets A Item box and hits the person in 1st place with a red shell)
Magicallity: Your gonna Pay for that Weakling!
Starlly: Wow I got this... Lightsaber? Cool! (Starts throwing it like a boomerang)
Mercury: (Throws A Red Shell At Starlly)
Starlly: (Blocks the red shell with his lightsaber)
Dasher: I'ma try and take this shortcut with my mushroom! (Falls Into the lake) Oh no!
Meanwhile In the top 3 placements for right now They are all so close to each other
Yoshi LOVER: (Tries drifting but fails) aw man!
Explorer: Oh No!
Magicallity: (Passes YL And Explorer) Now this is payback!
Macey: (Gets A Thundershroom) Wow this is like a mushroom but faster and longer!
Magicallity: What??
Medicallity: Cya Bro!
Second Lap! Here are the placements so far!
1st: Macey
2nd: Medicallity
3rd: Magicallity
4th: Explorer
5th: Yoshi LOVER
6th: Boner
7th: Starlly
8th: Mercury
9th: Totallyindian
10th: Canada is underwater lol
11th: YoshayLOVER
12th: Mr Yawshi
13th: Dull
14th: Charlie
15th: Sébastien
16th: Dasher
17th: Sankeh
18th: Squishy
Squishy: W-wh- what is this?(Grabs a hyper bill which is a normal Bullet bill but WAY Faster and blinds any person it touches for 5 seconds)
Sankeh: w-why am I blinded?
Dasher: What happned? Why can't I see?
Sébastien: It doesn't matter (Accidently drives into a fence) What? I hit something wooden?
Charlie: (Avoids the Hyper Bill at the right time) How did I avoid that? (Gets A Bullet bill cannon which is a cannon that lasts for 10 seconds and you can shoot bullet bills at racers)
Dull: OW! (Gets hit by a bullet bill but avoids the hyper bill) Oh thanks I guess?
Mr Yawshi: What is this a Magic ball? (uses the item and everyone turns into a koopa)
Yes YES Take that you idiots! (Gets Hit by Hyper Bill)
Yoshay LOVER: Guys wait a sec (Gets Hit By hyper bill) Where is Evil YL and Cosmic?
Canada: Oh Yeah, That's odd, they might be in the next race!
totallyindian: Hmm I don't think so, cosmic before took peach's castle with the help of someone (looks at Sébastien) but I'm not sure
Mercury: (Grabs a item called the shell bunch which has 1 of every shell kind and throws the 2 normal shells backwards and throws the blue shell) Take this (passes Starlly and Yoshi LOVER)
Starlly: OW!
Yoshi LOVER: With all of this star wars stuff I wouldn't be surprised if next race Osi Sobeck decided to race..
Mercury: Who?
Starlly: Some star wars character
Boner: Honestly No one cares
FINAL LAP! Here are the placements so far!
1st: Macey
2nd: Medicallity
3rd: Magicallity
4th: Squishy
5th: Explorer
6th: Mercury
7th: Boner
8th: Starlly
9th: Yoshi LOVER
10th: Totallyindian
11th: Yoshay LOVER
12th: Canada
13th: Dull
14th: Charlie
15th: Mr Yawshi
16th: Dasher
17th: Sankeh
18th: Sébastien
Macey: Ah the final lap this is intense!
Medicallity: Any thing could happen though...
Medicallity: Like what (Gets hit by a red shell)
Squishy: Heheheehehehehe
Mercury: Good job Squish!
Explorer: (Gets A abra) What's this do?
Abra: (Teleports away)
Explorer: Oh well!
Yoshi LOVER: Uhh Guys. Why do I hear Bullet Bill noises?
???: Yes a Bullet Bill
Macey: Who is that? WHAT HE JUST PASSED THE FINISH LINE BEFORE ME!
Boner: 💀💀💀
Lakitu: Alright everyone here are the placements
1st: Charlie = 30 Points
2nd: Macey = 25 Points
3rd: Medicallity = 20 Points
4th: Magicallity = 19 Points
5th: Squishy = 18 Points
6th: Mercury = 17 Points
7th: Boner = 16 Points
8th: Yoshi LOVER = 15 Points
9th: totallyindian = 14 Points
10th: Canada = 13 Points
11th: Yoshay LOVER = 10 Points
12th: Dull = 8 Points
13th: Starlly = 6 Points
14th: Explorer = 4 Points
15th: Sankeh = 2 Points
16th: Dasher = 0 Points
17th: Mr Yawshi = -2 Points (but he has none so nothing happens)
18th: Sébastien = -4 Points (but he has none so nothing happens)
Back at the house...
Medicallity: Wow that was fun!
Macey: Why is someone knocking on the door... oooh I know, new racers!
Next Chapter Coming Soon
I am under da water
pls help me
Anyways great episode although I only got 1 line??
It was hard Making every character have a decent role in the fanfic, I mean there are going to be nearly 30 Racers in the next chapter! I was sort of going to make the next chapter be about you and dull...

On 2025-08-15 at 15:52:56
I am under da water
pls help me
Anyways great episode although I only got 1 line??
Yeah, that's my beef with fanfics.
From the start, you have 20 characters the reader doesn't know about. You can't possibly develop all of them at the same time.
Plus, considering that in standard form there's hardly any description of the setting, it can be hard to follow.
Making tracks based off of this is probably the best idea I've seen to bypass this. W for YoshiLOVER.

Today at 15:10:24
i know you said you're canceling this fanfic, which is sad, but will you still make the tracks?
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