(Fanfic) Woo's GP

Submit your Characters pls!
I'll be Mario (yep, him)
We'll be doing a giant gp trough all my tracks!

I,ll be hyper toad

Ok... But custom is better...

Name: luis
Colour:red
Personality: kind and nice and cool

Name India
Color orange
Personality friendly and cheerful but gets angry quickly
He's a countryball

Read through my application forms and google any words you don't know.

Name: Esoteric Alpaca Folloreht
Age: 27
Birthyear: 2000
Colour: Cyan
Special Item: Fireball, flies in a line and explodes on contact. High knockback
Special Abilities: The ability to establish telepathic communication lines, and cryokinesis.
Personality: Daring, VERY Serious, Nonchalant, of course, and smirks when confident.

Char 2:
Name: Nommanic Folloreht
Age: 25
Birthyear: 2002
Colour: Cyan, or Dodgerblue as a Shy Guy
Special Item: TM, (as human) allows him to use a Pokemon move from Gen IV and below. Spear (as Shy Guy) can be thrown or stabbed.
Special Abilities: The ability to manipulate objects, for example turning on the lamp or opening the windows, the ability to deduce things like Sherlock Holmes, and the ability to rearrange subatomic particles, allowing him to make things from thin air, literally. He turns into a Shy Guy by putting on a mask and costume.
Personality: Nonchalant, and is pedantic and snarky when conversing.

Char 3: Opulent Crafty Mystic Folloreht
Age 28
Birthyear: 1999
Colour: Cyan, duh.
Special Item: Iceball, flies in a straight line and freezes an opponent.
Special Abilities: Pyrokinesis, and the ability to read minds. The mind reading also allows her to see invisible people.
Personality: Nonchalant, of course, and is Serious when racing, battling, or competing.

Char 4: Cinnamon Folloreht
Age: 26
Birthyear: 2001
Colour: Blue, as a Yoshi.
Special Item: Shadow Lock, this can turn Pokemon into Shadow Pokemon, or it can lock a person's secret from him or herself. Only if the person is intentionally hiding it from him.
Special Abilities: The ability to MOVE objects, manipulate people, and swap objects that have the same shape from his POV.
Personality: Nonchalant, Dashing, and smirks when confident.

countryballs can be any size

For racing?
(Idk I'll still use them)

Chapter 1: the startings...
First track DS Desert Hills...

Lap 1
Nommanic:I'll get you Mario!
*Summons an Darkshell accidentally and hits India*
Mario gets hit by a fireball and gets stunned by 3 seconds...
Opulent Hits an pokey losing time...

Lap 2/3

Mario: I'ma gonna use these Star that I gotta in 4th...

Toad gets hit by a star...

India : I'll use this bull-
*gets it stolen by Cinnamon, making him first...
Esoteric gets hit by an Fireball (obstacle) stunning him a 1/2 of a second.

Lap 3/3

Toad gets hit by an Dark Shell.

Shy Guy?: Hei Hou!uses an spear and hits Alpaca.

Mario uses Super Shroom and Passes through the shortcut.

Toad uses an bullet bill and passes Luis...

Standings:
1st-Nommanic
2nd- Mario
3rd- Cinnamon
4th- Esoteric
5th- Opulent
6th- India
7th- Toad
8th- Luis- RANKED OUT



Edited the OCM characters to have their first name.

Ranked Out...

Can we still sign up?

Name: Maker
Colour: Grey
Personality: Kind but strict. Will rant about random things.

Can my character ask for a team up with your character?

Ok sure lol

yes im 7th

If I had to give my honest opinion, it's pretty bad.

Length: 1/5
Story: 1/5

One more thing: the female characters are called Opulent and Esoteric, not Crafty and Alpaca. Just to clear something up.

Do you want to see the stuff before CH1?
Second... Uhh why did I think they had 4 names...

you don't have the rights to put the story rating...
(there's no story yet)
(Also, a race is to simple to explain)

I will be Wario