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6102 pts ★ RacerOn 2024-07-03 at 08:40:38
i want to study one of the older forum kids, @princesslucky, if thats ok
I think I would be a better analyser of her case as I am the prime victim of what she said and did
What is the best Christmas song?
On 2024-12-29 at 11:19:02
Are y'all arguing over... a missing letter out of all things?
Anyways I won't even bother. Lilith has cleared the confusion up. Anybody who answers her message to continue this "argument" will receive a warning and will also have their message deleted.
Mine is: (yeah I'm basic)
Anyways I won't even bother. Lilith has cleared the confusion up. Anybody who answers her message to continue this "argument" will receive a warning and will also have their message deleted.
Mine is: (yeah I'm basic)
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1Stuff they should add/remove from the game.
On 2024-12-31 at 20:34:41
Honestly, I personally think we need a new power up that is not in any actual Mario Kart game. Like an MK PC original.
What about the poison mushroom?
/!\ Advent Calendar 2024
On 2024-12-30 at 22:44:36
Thank you so much for yet another calendar, this year the challenges were nicely conceptualized, very fun, with a great difficulty curve. 🫶🏼
1On 2024-12-08 at 17:00:55
Why do you only Choose the hard Challenges?
1. The challenges being hard is subjective
2. They chose "hard" challenges so as to make the calendar interesting to complete instead of just having it be easy and possible to complete by any random newcomer on the game. Also, they weren't that hard, except for the third one, in my opinion. And even the 3rd wasn't that hard, more annoying and frustrating.
jokes for mkpc
On 2024-10-26 at 23:43:20
Jeez, we got it, the joke wasn't that funny. I doubt you guys can do much better though. 🤷♂️
1[Fanfic] - MKPC Archipel (2024 Season)
On 2024-12-28 at 10:21:28
I must admit, I completely forgot about this, I'm just gonna ignore the prologue ever existed, and start my 2025 Season following up with the actual ending episode.
On 2024-06-05 at 00:59:53
so...
what happened last season? did the police arrest the MKPCians or Cameron?
also, when will you continue working on this?
what happened last season? did the police arrest the MKPCians or Cameron?
also, when will you continue working on this?
When I will have time.
On 2024-05-20 at 00:48:45
Prologue : Reset
Back to when I didn't know you...
Nudge : We are free as ever !
Lely : I really didn't expect it
Max : Well does that mean the judges are smarter than me ?
Nudge : It's mathematically impossible for someone to be dumber than you
Max : Oof, why so mean ?
Lely : Because some things never change. And that's how it is.
When the 13 (yeah, they were thirteen now) came back to the huts...
Chuck : To make the amount of competitors even for the rest of the competition, we will have you modify the huts' organization... Because RedPikmin arrived !
RedPikmin : Hello everyone !
And with that, they began changing the huts, with some choices being surprising, and the others not.
Nudge : I had enough of you, Krazey. Just please go away.
Krazey : Oof. What was that for ?
Eli : Well... who could accept me ?
Alice : I will, don't worry.
VC : Well... I don't know what we should do. Noob ?
Noob : I think I'm going with Krazey.
Lely : Well I can come with you, VC
VC : Really good idea !
James : Hey Max, we can be together. We are both French and are kind of similar to each other !
Max : Fine by me.
RedPikmin : Hey Nudge, can I come with you ? You seem pretty nice.
Nudge : Okay. I won't kill you, don't worry. I already planned better murders.
Ben : Well... Choco, I'm sorry.
Choco : It's fine. You're trying to change.
And with that, that was what they got out of the new repartition.
Nudge and RedPikmin
Max and James
Lely and VC
Alice and Eli
Krazey and Noob
Ben and Choco
Chuck : Scores will now be reset, since the amount of competitors changed. Now to find out who is gonna be the real maestro of this competition... follow me.
To be continued...
Back to when I didn't know you...
Nudge : We are free as ever !
Lely : I really didn't expect it
Max : Well does that mean the judges are smarter than me ?
Nudge : It's mathematically impossible for someone to be dumber than you
Max : Oof, why so mean ?
Lely : Because some things never change. And that's how it is.
When the 13 (yeah, they were thirteen now) came back to the huts...
Chuck : To make the amount of competitors even for the rest of the competition, we will have you modify the huts' organization... Because RedPikmin arrived !
RedPikmin : Hello everyone !
And with that, they began changing the huts, with some choices being surprising, and the others not.
Nudge : I had enough of you, Krazey. Just please go away.
Krazey : Oof. What was that for ?
Eli : Well... who could accept me ?
Alice : I will, don't worry.
VC : Well... I don't know what we should do. Noob ?
Noob : I think I'm going with Krazey.
Lely : Well I can come with you, VC
VC : Really good idea !
James : Hey Max, we can be together. We are both French and are kind of similar to each other !
Max : Fine by me.
RedPikmin : Hey Nudge, can I come with you ? You seem pretty nice.
Nudge : Okay. I won't kill you, don't worry. I already planned better murders.
Ben : Well... Choco, I'm sorry.
Choco : It's fine. You're trying to change.
And with that, that was what they got out of the new repartition.
Nudge and RedPikmin
Max and James
Lely and VC
Alice and Eli
Krazey and Noob
Ben and Choco
Chuck : Scores will now be reset, since the amount of competitors changed. Now to find out who is gonna be the real maestro of this competition... follow me.
To be continued...
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45On 2024-05-14 at 23:29:22
MKPC Archipel 2024 Season - Arc 2
Coming soon...5
5On 2024-05-14 at 01:46:31
Decided not to count line distribution for the three last episodes because they were too short or had external characters so yeah, not even everybody had lines.
On 2024-05-14 at 01:45:21
Chapter 10 : Run Aw2y
So that nobody gets hurt anymore...
MKPC Archipel's Court
Pianta : Officer, I found these people. They crushed an innocent Pianta with a boulder. They are public nuisances. They need to be imprisoned.
Lely : *cries* He was--
Pianta : Shut up and let me finish ! This society is falling apart because of you ! You are the ones violenting the rules and making this place such a hellhole. AND NOW YOU MAY TALK !
Nudge : Um excuse me, but I think there is a concept called self defense. This man broke Max's ankle : he damaged us just like we did to him. He also threw boulders at us. I did threaten him with a knife, but--
Pianta : KNIVES !!! OH MY !!!
Nudge : -- but he had some too, and I never ever touched him with the knife. Also you have selective hearing.
VC : This is bullshit ! We have no business being here !
Pianta : SHUT UP !! THE SENTENCE WILL BE EVEN HEAVIER FOR YOU !!
Hearing these words, Lely just broke down, crying. Nobody wanted to say anything anymore. The judge had spit his venom, and no MKPCian was going to make things worse.
Pianta : Oh, and to be cruel. You know what's in the mountain ? Cameron has imprisoned him there. It's your friend, Eli. The fragments were to save him and he will forever be stuck--
Alice : EXCUSE ME WHAT ??
Furious, Alice jumped on the judge. The rest of the courtroom looked either shocked or disgusted by the judge.
Nudge : Everything's going down
But then, Lely stood up, seemed to see something...
And started to run away towards the exit. Soon after, everyone followed him, the judge choking on the ground and completely helpless while the courtroom was just filming the chaos unfold. Alice was done, and she even stole the judge's car. Furious, she invited everyone inside, and since it was a police car, they fit in. Her driving was kind of drunken looking since she was seeing red, but she managed to lead them to the mountain anyways. The moon was shining.
Dayzi : So we can't have a normal competition just like before ?
Choco : I would have said tomorrow, cause we will all be together...
Lely : No... we will be seen as criminals... we won't be together by tomorrow...
Max : How could the judges be this dumb ? I'm probably even less dumb than they are !
Krazey : That is yet to confirm.
Suddenly, they arrived. Ster and Chuck had, to their surprise, already created a tunnel inside of the mountain.
Ster : Hello ! We used the same boulders Cameron used to dig a tunnel. We didn't know Eli was in there but we heard the live info, so we got to work. Here, he is waiting for you inside.
So Alice walked in first, Lely following her. Nudge was following Lely, and the other followed as well. They arrived and saw someone crying on the ground.
And it was Eli.
Eli : You... guys are here ?
Alice : We are.
As they all hugged, they heard the police coming over again, but they were stopped by Ster and Chuck. James, who was checking social media, notuced the judge getting cancelled on the ex blue bird app. They were so happy, just being all together again, and they just stayed here together.
They would be, together by tomorrow...
So that nobody gets hurt anymore...
MKPC Archipel's Court
Pianta : Officer, I found these people. They crushed an innocent Pianta with a boulder. They are public nuisances. They need to be imprisoned.
Lely : *cries* He was--
Pianta : Shut up and let me finish ! This society is falling apart because of you ! You are the ones violenting the rules and making this place such a hellhole. AND NOW YOU MAY TALK !
Nudge : Um excuse me, but I think there is a concept called self defense. This man broke Max's ankle : he damaged us just like we did to him. He also threw boulders at us. I did threaten him with a knife, but--
Pianta : KNIVES !!! OH MY !!!
Nudge : -- but he had some too, and I never ever touched him with the knife. Also you have selective hearing.
VC : This is bullshit ! We have no business being here !
Pianta : SHUT UP !! THE SENTENCE WILL BE EVEN HEAVIER FOR YOU !!
Hearing these words, Lely just broke down, crying. Nobody wanted to say anything anymore. The judge had spit his venom, and no MKPCian was going to make things worse.
Pianta : Oh, and to be cruel. You know what's in the mountain ? Cameron has imprisoned him there. It's your friend, Eli. The fragments were to save him and he will forever be stuck--
Alice : EXCUSE ME WHAT ??
Furious, Alice jumped on the judge. The rest of the courtroom looked either shocked or disgusted by the judge.
Nudge : Everything's going down
But then, Lely stood up, seemed to see something...
And started to run away towards the exit. Soon after, everyone followed him, the judge choking on the ground and completely helpless while the courtroom was just filming the chaos unfold. Alice was done, and she even stole the judge's car. Furious, she invited everyone inside, and since it was a police car, they fit in. Her driving was kind of drunken looking since she was seeing red, but she managed to lead them to the mountain anyways. The moon was shining.
Dayzi : So we can't have a normal competition just like before ?
Choco : I would have said tomorrow, cause we will all be together...
Lely : No... we will be seen as criminals... we won't be together by tomorrow...
Max : How could the judges be this dumb ? I'm probably even less dumb than they are !
Krazey : That is yet to confirm.
Suddenly, they arrived. Ster and Chuck had, to their surprise, already created a tunnel inside of the mountain.
Ster : Hello ! We used the same boulders Cameron used to dig a tunnel. We didn't know Eli was in there but we heard the live info, so we got to work. Here, he is waiting for you inside.
So Alice walked in first, Lely following her. Nudge was following Lely, and the other followed as well. They arrived and saw someone crying on the ground.
And it was Eli.
Eli : You... guys are here ?
Alice : We are.
As they all hugged, they heard the police coming over again, but they were stopped by Ster and Chuck. James, who was checking social media, notuced the judge getting cancelled on the ex blue bird app. They were so happy, just being all together again, and they just stayed here together.
They would be, together by tomorrow...
MKPC Archipel 2024 Season
The end
The end
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4On 2024-05-13 at 07:53:55
Chapter 9 : Run Away
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
Run away, run away
Run away and save your life
Run away, run away
Run away if you want to survive
It's time to break free, oh oh oh oh
Run away, oh oh oh oh
You better break free, oh oh oh oh
Run away, oh oh oh oh
Pretty sure that's not where you got the title but xd
I was thinking of ONE OK ROCK or BTS
You both got it wrong
1
1On 2024-05-12 at 23:29:18
Chapter 9 : Run Away
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
Cameron having lots of lines
Ben: give me your lines?
lol but all jokes aside best episode yet, also epic cliffhanger cameron be gettin arrested 11/10
Who said that he was the one to be arrested ?
2On 2024-05-12 at 16:46:19
Chapter 9 : Run Away
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
63On 2024-05-07 at 23:50:04
im still doing the series cause why not 
Do it... in your phone notes
Yeah I don't even care you won't get a word in the writing. But can you actually listen to what others have told you ? Others find it annoying, and I also told you it'd lead nowhere. Why are you so stubborn ? On a public forum, not only your opinion matters. You're playing with fire, but you are gonna get sanctioned someday. These little actions piss off everyone, including the mods.
5On 2024-05-07 at 08:02:31
Chapter 9 : Run Away
Coming soon...
Coming soon...
5On 2024-05-06 at 22:52:08
Im just gonna start i mini series where i put possible development for characters who dont have it at the moment
Episode 1, Ben
Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.
But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.
Thoughts?
Episode 1, Ben
Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.
But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.
Thoughts?
I have already planned character development for every character, leave it to me
On 2024-05-06 at 16:53:16
Chapter 8 : Good At Love
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.
And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...
Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.
And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.
Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !
As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.
Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.
And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.
Max : I... can't even stand up.
The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.
And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...
Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.
And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.
Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !
As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.
Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.
And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.
Max : I... can't even stand up.
The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.
Very short, but very good.
Well I was really tired and did not feel like putting it on hold so yeah. Cliffhanger was voluntary
On 2024-05-06 at 00:00:49
Chapter 8 : Good At Love
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.
And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...
Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.
And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.
Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !
As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.
Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.
And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.
Max : I... can't even stand up.
The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.
And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...
Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.
And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.
Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !
As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.
Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.
And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.
Max : I... can't even stand up.
The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.
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