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6102 pts ★ RacerOn 2024-04-15 at 23:39:43
Alice 4
Nudge 4
Lely 4
Max 4
Ben 4
Choco 4
Krazey 4
VC 4
Angrybird 4
James 4
Noob 4
Dayzi 4
It's really fair. Well this episode was a break tbh, was supposed to feel chill and cute. Since it didn't include many plot elements, I decided to give the same amount of lines to everyone
Nudge 4
Lely 4
Max 4
Ben 4
Choco 4
Krazey 4
VC 4
Angrybird 4
James 4
Noob 4
Dayzi 4
It's really fair. Well this episode was a break tbh, was supposed to feel chill and cute. Since it didn't include many plot elements, I decided to give the same amount of lines to everyone
i wish i could join but when someone dies can i join when a character dies? also Ben and Eli have anti-hero potential, especaily Eli
Nobody will die so no.
On 2024-04-15 at 00:59:14
Alice 4
Nudge 4
Lely 4
Max 4
Ben 4
Choco 4
Krazey 4
VC 4
Angrybird 4
James 4
Noob 4
Dayzi 4
It's really fair. Well this episode was a break tbh, was supposed to feel chill and cute. Since it didn't include many plot elements, I decided to give the same amount of lines to everyone
Nudge 4
Lely 4
Max 4
Ben 4
Choco 4
Krazey 4
VC 4
Angrybird 4
James 4
Noob 4
Dayzi 4
It's really fair. Well this episode was a break tbh, was supposed to feel chill and cute. Since it didn't include many plot elements, I decided to give the same amount of lines to everyone
1On 2024-04-15 at 00:55:29
Chapter 6 : Fall In Love Again
La la la la la, la la la la la
Fall in love again...
Common Hut
Alice : I will miss him...
Nudge : I understand, but we need to move on. He was no good for this group, at least anymore.
Alice I... agree. It is tough though.
Nudge : Oh, he isn't dead at least.
Lely : Anyways, do we have a day off ?
Max : Yeah, round 2 is at nighttime
Ben : Oh, I love round 2 at nighttime. Will definitively go harder this time.
Max : You could have gotten and you still can get kicked out if you are damaging the group. Please be careful.
Ben : Yeah. Sorry. I will try to change.
Lely : At nighttime ? I hope it doesn't involve swimming because swimming at night is one of my biggest fears
Nudge : Oh, you crybaby. What could happen ? A fish could bite you ?
Lely : Dunno but I am afraid. The scary part might also specifically be the fact that I don't know what I am scared of.
Max : Oh well, I agree with that.
Ben : But there is a crowd right ? How is the crowd gonna watch the round if it is nighttime swimming ?
Alice : Everything can happen and be used. A drone. A boat. A plane. Everything.
Choco : Yeah, well what should we do with our day off ?
Krazey : Maybe a killin-
VC : ABSOLUTELY NOT.
Krazey : You're no fun.
VC : No, I just had enough of seeing people die in front of my eyes. Enough violence has been given.
Choco : I agree
Krazey : Loser, lame, wannabe
VC : Totally !
Choco : That song died so quickly 💀
Angrybird : I guess going shopping could be cool
James : Tbh, good idea
Angrybird : But what could we get ?
Noob : Thigh highs
Dayzi : I think the whole point of shopping resides in the fact that we don't know what we are shopping for
Angrybird : Seems like a good point
James : Ermm... Let me think about it... Video game equipment maybe ?
Dayzi : Lame. What about food ?
Noob : That already sounds like a much better idea. But I still want clothing.
Dayzi : Fine by me
James : Me too
Noob : Well then, let's go.
MKPC Archlivel Mall
Angrybird, Noob, Dayzi and James headed into the mall. They roamed around for quite a while, then stopped at a clothing shop.
Angrybird : Should I get one of these red shirts ?
James : I think it does fit you in a way
Noob : Yea, basic clothes are good imo
Dayzi : Well I don't need clothes, but I will wait for you here
Angrybird ended up buying two red shirts, while James simply got one gamer shirt with Mario and Sonic on it. Noob was secretive about what he bought and it was all in a bag that he didn't show to anyone.
Main Hall of Archlivel Mall
Krazey : It's crazy how the mall is built. You can't believe you are actually on a rather small archipelago, this looks like we are on the mainland, in a big city.
Nudge : James is elsewhere, we don't need you to steal his vocabulary and phrasing.
VC : Tbh, what should we get ? Drinks, probably. I don't even feel like going shopping for some reason.
They eventually met with the other group and chatted at a cafe, all getting hot chocolate despite the weather being soft. After that, Noob and Nudge went to the bathroom, and the seven went back to the huts.
MKPC Archipel's main hut
Lely : The ambiance is so chill today. It feels good to not fight anymore.
Max : Tell me about it !
Ben : I feel bad for creating problems. But you know, I'm not a bad person. Sometimes I wish my reputation wasn't that bad...
Alice : I guess if you behave well for one day or two, people might see you as better. After all, it was mainly Eli.
Choco : About that, it feels so weird that he was just gone, like that. It is probably for the best, but something feels undone.
The five were chatting as the mood was chill. It was 5PM, and they were told to meet up at 10PM at the top of Shamrock Peak. Cameron initially wanted to make them walk, but Ster decided to offer them a ride at 9:30PM. They still had four hours in front of them. That is when the other seven went back to the huts. All of them were actually tired from all of this, so most just took a nap. When Lely woke up, sun was setting. It was 8:30PM. He liked the feeling of the sun lighting his cheeks through the blinds. He decided to tqke a shower and get ready. Eventually, everyone was ready and Ster brought them to Shamrock Peak for the next round of MKPC Archipel.
MKPC Archipel
2024 Season
The end
La la la la la, la la la la la
Fall in love again...
Common Hut
Alice : I will miss him...
Nudge : I understand, but we need to move on. He was no good for this group, at least anymore.
Alice I... agree. It is tough though.
Nudge : Oh, he isn't dead at least.
Lely : Anyways, do we have a day off ?
Max : Yeah, round 2 is at nighttime
Ben : Oh, I love round 2 at nighttime. Will definitively go harder this time.
Max : You could have gotten and you still can get kicked out if you are damaging the group. Please be careful.
Ben : Yeah. Sorry. I will try to change.
Lely : At nighttime ? I hope it doesn't involve swimming because swimming at night is one of my biggest fears
Nudge : Oh, you crybaby. What could happen ? A fish could bite you ?
Lely : Dunno but I am afraid. The scary part might also specifically be the fact that I don't know what I am scared of.
Max : Oh well, I agree with that.
Ben : But there is a crowd right ? How is the crowd gonna watch the round if it is nighttime swimming ?
Alice : Everything can happen and be used. A drone. A boat. A plane. Everything.
Choco : Yeah, well what should we do with our day off ?
Krazey : Maybe a killin-
VC : ABSOLUTELY NOT.
Krazey : You're no fun.
VC : No, I just had enough of seeing people die in front of my eyes. Enough violence has been given.
Choco : I agree
Krazey : Loser, lame, wannabe
VC : Totally !
Choco : That song died so quickly 💀
Angrybird : I guess going shopping could be cool
James : Tbh, good idea
Angrybird : But what could we get ?
Noob : Thigh highs
Dayzi : I think the whole point of shopping resides in the fact that we don't know what we are shopping for
Angrybird : Seems like a good point
James : Ermm... Let me think about it... Video game equipment maybe ?
Dayzi : Lame. What about food ?
Noob : That already sounds like a much better idea. But I still want clothing.
Dayzi : Fine by me
James : Me too
Noob : Well then, let's go.
MKPC Archlivel Mall
Angrybird, Noob, Dayzi and James headed into the mall. They roamed around for quite a while, then stopped at a clothing shop.
Angrybird : Should I get one of these red shirts ?
James : I think it does fit you in a way
Noob : Yea, basic clothes are good imo
Dayzi : Well I don't need clothes, but I will wait for you here
Angrybird ended up buying two red shirts, while James simply got one gamer shirt with Mario and Sonic on it. Noob was secretive about what he bought and it was all in a bag that he didn't show to anyone.
Main Hall of Archlivel Mall
Krazey : It's crazy how the mall is built. You can't believe you are actually on a rather small archipelago, this looks like we are on the mainland, in a big city.
Nudge : James is elsewhere, we don't need you to steal his vocabulary and phrasing.
VC : Tbh, what should we get ? Drinks, probably. I don't even feel like going shopping for some reason.
They eventually met with the other group and chatted at a cafe, all getting hot chocolate despite the weather being soft. After that, Noob and Nudge went to the bathroom, and the seven went back to the huts.
MKPC Archipel's main hut
Lely : The ambiance is so chill today. It feels good to not fight anymore.
Max : Tell me about it !
Ben : I feel bad for creating problems. But you know, I'm not a bad person. Sometimes I wish my reputation wasn't that bad...
Alice : I guess if you behave well for one day or two, people might see you as better. After all, it was mainly Eli.
Choco : About that, it feels so weird that he was just gone, like that. It is probably for the best, but something feels undone.
The five were chatting as the mood was chill. It was 5PM, and they were told to meet up at 10PM at the top of Shamrock Peak. Cameron initially wanted to make them walk, but Ster decided to offer them a ride at 9:30PM. They still had four hours in front of them. That is when the other seven went back to the huts. All of them were actually tired from all of this, so most just took a nap. When Lely woke up, sun was setting. It was 8:30PM. He liked the feeling of the sun lighting his cheeks through the blinds. He decided to tqke a shower and get ready. Eventually, everyone was ready and Ster brought them to Shamrock Peak for the next round of MKPC Archipel.
MKPC Archipel
2024 Season
The end
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3On 2024-04-08 at 03:17:50
Glad to see we're done with fighting! But I predict there's just going to be more fighting on the horizon...
There isn't.
It just took me more episodes to do the transition. Before, I would have said everything was fake and everyone was manipulated. But now I bothered making a transition because I was tired to produce fights. But I had to go through the hassle of making a transition episode. That's all the energy it took me to just stop the fighting. So now, no more of it for a longgggg while.
On 2024-04-08 at 00:38:01
Chapter 5 : Brave
On an exceptionally dark night,
The top of the world felt so lonely...
Lely : Then what do you want ? What do you want ! Let us be for a split second.
Eli : No. I will hunt you down.
Max : This is incomprehensible. We just wanted to give a shirt to Ben, and you are chasing us as if we killed someone in your family. It is too much.
Alice : Don't even mention the topic !
Eli : She's right ! It's hurtful !
Max : Oh please, you said much worse.
Lely : Agreed, quite hypocritical of you to cherrypick the sujects we can bring up. You brought up worse.
Alice : Well I was forever a girl who was mistreated, made fun of, I was the victim of a lot actually. I was a victim of homophobia, transphobia, and I was always rejected for who I was. So why would I not be able to choose the subjects ? My life was far worse than yours.
Max : You want to hear my perspective ? Victim of an ableist society, always being made fun of, always being the scapegoat of things. I have gone through a lot too. I was even called a simp by a girl who has dated like dozens of people in her teenage years alone !
Eli : Nobody cares about you ! Alice is more important. She always has been. So now we are making clear things that apparently weren't clear : we can do anything with your life if we ever want to. So watch your every step.
Lely : Oh my God a wolf pack ! What are you gonna do next ? Howl ?
Alice : That's definitively something Max's furry ass would do
Max : I don't howl. You when you get drunk, though...
Alice : At least I enjoy life and relieve stress in a good way ! You just take it out on others.
Lely : I think being tense and apologizing is better than drinking sake at 15 like it's water...
Eli : The same water that you have in your cunt when Max approaches you on the couch ?
And they kept on fighting. Lely tried to stop it several times, but Eli would never be satisfied. It led nowhere. Eventually, James and Ben were able to catch the trophy that Angrybird had trouble winning. Choco had dug a passage underground and had stolen the trophy from James and Ben. But in the end, right before giving the trophy to Ster, Nudgy stole it and his team won.
And Eli was still initiating bickering. It was so tiring. Exhausting. Fighting over nothing for a while is plainly exhausting.
Until the night came. Eli and Alice went into their dorms. However, Lely decided to go shopping for snacks to eat them on the beach that was lit up by the starry nighty sky and the seaside city lights. Max accompanied him.
Lely : It feels like we didn't even compete. We just fought. What can we do ? We should talk it out.
Max : Are you serious ? We have been trying but Eli is stupid. I know people are more honest at night, but still.
Lely : I am gonna call them. They might answer.
Lely called Alice and she texted him to come over to their hut. Lely was really scared to get killed. But he found her in front of the hut.
Alice : I was waiting for you, where are you and Max ?
Lely : We're over here by the bay.
They walked, Lely staying alert just in case. In 1 minute, they were back to Max's spot. The kitsune was waiting for them, not saying anything, his eyes filled with distrust.
Lely : So. Why are we fighting this much ?
Max : Yeah. I'm curious.
Alice : Oh, it's not about me.
Lely : Huh ? What ?
Max : You said terrible stuff to him, don't act innocent...
Alice : Oh... I am sorry. For me, it is all acting. I swear. A facade.
Lely : A facade for who ? Is there some kind of mastermind ?
Max : Who the hell asked you to be a bitch
Alice : Eli did. Well, he seems. To me, Ben is just awkward. But Eli wants to kill him. And I am afraid he will come for me if I don't play hateful.
Lely : Yeah but it has gone too far
Max : The extents he goes to when he feels something are crazy. We need to stop him, send him home or something.
Alice : I will confront him about that tomorrow. But, first... I wanted to tell you something.
Lely and Max nodded.
Alice : I have been feeling really bad for everything I said. Can we hug it out so that everything is finally cleared ? Because I am truly sorry to have brought up your adoption, insecurities... for me, it was acting, and I didn't care about the words I was spewing. But it seemed to make you cry. I could never do that again. Please forgive me...
Lely looked very hesitant. Max straight up refused. But Lely went forward and let himself fall in Alice's arms, probably with a little tear or two, but not with a sad expression this time. Max mumbled.
Max : Fine. Only because it gives me a chance to hug Lely...
And that was it. They ate the snacks they got at the mall. They looked at the sky and took pictures. Eventually, they went back at their huts, and Alice asked Lely and Max if she could sleep in their hut because she was scared of Eli.
And with that, the night passed.
Eli : Hmmm... good morning, Alice !
Nobody answers him.
Eli : Hmmm... Alice ? Wait... where is she ? OH THEY TOOK HER. IM GONNA KILL THEM !
Lely, Max and Alice were awake as Eli burst through the door. None of them seemed surprised. Alice had told them about the sleeping habits of Eli, and they planned such thing.
Eli seemed mad that she was here. Relieved that she was not killed. But angry because she was here.
Eli : Grr... what have you done to her !
Lely : Nothing. She chose not to go back to her hut after we talked on the bitch. We know everything. Quit acting like that, Eli.
Max : And I advise you to remain calm or else we are telling Chuck.
Eli : Tell him. And you ! You traitor. You dared to betray me. Come back here !
Alice : Absolutely not.
Eli : Oh yes you are.
Alice : I said no. You do not have my consent.
Lely : Get out, Eli. Enough is enough. You are a nuisance.
Eli : And you are too !!
Max : He tried to fix this. He was the one to go to Alice. If he hadn't do that, we would still be in a fight. And while he fixed things, you created problems. Don't see how he is the nuisance here. Get out of here.
Eli : I... WON'T !!! ARGHHH !
Alice : dodges him but hits the bed Ouch ! STOP THAT !
Eli : attacks Alice and chokes her You betrayed me... now come here !
Lely and Max : Both jump at Eli Let go of her, you asshole ! You are going to be out right now !
Eli : repeatedly punches Alice in the head NO ! THIS IS IT !
But Alice protected herself well. She got the bruises on the back of her head, where it wouldn't hurt her nose, lips or eyes. Eventually, Lely and Max managed to catch Eli and throw him out of the hut. He fell there, unconscious. Chuck, who had watched the whole scene unfold, quickly nodded at all three of them and carried Eli's unconscious body to the plane where he was sent home by a pilot. And he was then gone for well.
Lely : Shit, are you okay ?
Alice : Yea, my head hurts slightly though. I don't need a doctor, but some rest. I heard we had a day off today. Anyways, thanks for protecting me. I don't know what is going on with him.
Max : He is crazy... but let's join the common huts.
Common Hut
Nudge : Oh we got rid of him ? Good !
Angrybird : Chuck has told me. I will come to your hut and leave VC and Noob as two.
Alice : This is perfect... perfect.
Lely : And there we have it ! The solution to the problem. That is the good way to deal with this situation. Will this lead to a happy ending ?
Nudge : Oh you're so corny...
Angrybird : Nah, drama is finally done. And that's so good to hear.
Lely : I know, right ?
MKPC Archipel
2024 Season
The end
On an exceptionally dark night,
The top of the world felt so lonely...
Lely : Then what do you want ? What do you want ! Let us be for a split second.
Eli : No. I will hunt you down.
Max : This is incomprehensible. We just wanted to give a shirt to Ben, and you are chasing us as if we killed someone in your family. It is too much.
Alice : Don't even mention the topic !
Eli : She's right ! It's hurtful !
Max : Oh please, you said much worse.
Lely : Agreed, quite hypocritical of you to cherrypick the sujects we can bring up. You brought up worse.
Alice : Well I was forever a girl who was mistreated, made fun of, I was the victim of a lot actually. I was a victim of homophobia, transphobia, and I was always rejected for who I was. So why would I not be able to choose the subjects ? My life was far worse than yours.
Max : You want to hear my perspective ? Victim of an ableist society, always being made fun of, always being the scapegoat of things. I have gone through a lot too. I was even called a simp by a girl who has dated like dozens of people in her teenage years alone !
Eli : Nobody cares about you ! Alice is more important. She always has been. So now we are making clear things that apparently weren't clear : we can do anything with your life if we ever want to. So watch your every step.
Lely : Oh my God a wolf pack ! What are you gonna do next ? Howl ?
Alice : That's definitively something Max's furry ass would do
Max : I don't howl. You when you get drunk, though...
Alice : At least I enjoy life and relieve stress in a good way ! You just take it out on others.
Lely : I think being tense and apologizing is better than drinking sake at 15 like it's water...
Eli : The same water that you have in your cunt when Max approaches you on the couch ?
And they kept on fighting. Lely tried to stop it several times, but Eli would never be satisfied. It led nowhere. Eventually, James and Ben were able to catch the trophy that Angrybird had trouble winning. Choco had dug a passage underground and had stolen the trophy from James and Ben. But in the end, right before giving the trophy to Ster, Nudgy stole it and his team won.
And Eli was still initiating bickering. It was so tiring. Exhausting. Fighting over nothing for a while is plainly exhausting.
Until the night came. Eli and Alice went into their dorms. However, Lely decided to go shopping for snacks to eat them on the beach that was lit up by the starry nighty sky and the seaside city lights. Max accompanied him.
Lely : It feels like we didn't even compete. We just fought. What can we do ? We should talk it out.
Max : Are you serious ? We have been trying but Eli is stupid. I know people are more honest at night, but still.
Lely : I am gonna call them. They might answer.
Lely called Alice and she texted him to come over to their hut. Lely was really scared to get killed. But he found her in front of the hut.
Alice : I was waiting for you, where are you and Max ?
Lely : We're over here by the bay.
They walked, Lely staying alert just in case. In 1 minute, they were back to Max's spot. The kitsune was waiting for them, not saying anything, his eyes filled with distrust.
Lely : So. Why are we fighting this much ?
Max : Yeah. I'm curious.
Alice : Oh, it's not about me.
Lely : Huh ? What ?
Max : You said terrible stuff to him, don't act innocent...
Alice : Oh... I am sorry. For me, it is all acting. I swear. A facade.
Lely : A facade for who ? Is there some kind of mastermind ?
Max : Who the hell asked you to be a bitch
Alice : Eli did. Well, he seems. To me, Ben is just awkward. But Eli wants to kill him. And I am afraid he will come for me if I don't play hateful.
Lely : Yeah but it has gone too far
Max : The extents he goes to when he feels something are crazy. We need to stop him, send him home or something.
Alice : I will confront him about that tomorrow. But, first... I wanted to tell you something.
Lely and Max nodded.
Alice : I have been feeling really bad for everything I said. Can we hug it out so that everything is finally cleared ? Because I am truly sorry to have brought up your adoption, insecurities... for me, it was acting, and I didn't care about the words I was spewing. But it seemed to make you cry. I could never do that again. Please forgive me...
Lely looked very hesitant. Max straight up refused. But Lely went forward and let himself fall in Alice's arms, probably with a little tear or two, but not with a sad expression this time. Max mumbled.
Max : Fine. Only because it gives me a chance to hug Lely...
And that was it. They ate the snacks they got at the mall. They looked at the sky and took pictures. Eventually, they went back at their huts, and Alice asked Lely and Max if she could sleep in their hut because she was scared of Eli.
And with that, the night passed.
Eli : Hmmm... good morning, Alice !
Nobody answers him.
Eli : Hmmm... Alice ? Wait... where is she ? OH THEY TOOK HER. IM GONNA KILL THEM !
Lely, Max and Alice were awake as Eli burst through the door. None of them seemed surprised. Alice had told them about the sleeping habits of Eli, and they planned such thing.
Eli seemed mad that she was here. Relieved that she was not killed. But angry because she was here.
Eli : Grr... what have you done to her !
Lely : Nothing. She chose not to go back to her hut after we talked on the bitch. We know everything. Quit acting like that, Eli.
Max : And I advise you to remain calm or else we are telling Chuck.
Eli : Tell him. And you ! You traitor. You dared to betray me. Come back here !
Alice : Absolutely not.
Eli : Oh yes you are.
Alice : I said no. You do not have my consent.
Lely : Get out, Eli. Enough is enough. You are a nuisance.
Eli : And you are too !!
Max : He tried to fix this. He was the one to go to Alice. If he hadn't do that, we would still be in a fight. And while he fixed things, you created problems. Don't see how he is the nuisance here. Get out of here.
Eli : I... WON'T !!! ARGHHH !
Alice : dodges him but hits the bed Ouch ! STOP THAT !
Eli : attacks Alice and chokes her You betrayed me... now come here !
Lely and Max : Both jump at Eli Let go of her, you asshole ! You are going to be out right now !
Eli : repeatedly punches Alice in the head NO ! THIS IS IT !
But Alice protected herself well. She got the bruises on the back of her head, where it wouldn't hurt her nose, lips or eyes. Eventually, Lely and Max managed to catch Eli and throw him out of the hut. He fell there, unconscious. Chuck, who had watched the whole scene unfold, quickly nodded at all three of them and carried Eli's unconscious body to the plane where he was sent home by a pilot. And he was then gone for well.
Lely : Shit, are you okay ?
Alice : Yea, my head hurts slightly though. I don't need a doctor, but some rest. I heard we had a day off today. Anyways, thanks for protecting me. I don't know what is going on with him.
Max : He is crazy... but let's join the common huts.
Common Hut
Nudge : Oh we got rid of him ? Good !
Angrybird : Chuck has told me. I will come to your hut and leave VC and Noob as two.
Alice : This is perfect... perfect.
Lely : And there we have it ! The solution to the problem. That is the good way to deal with this situation. Will this lead to a happy ending ?
Nudge : Oh you're so corny...
Angrybird : Nah, drama is finally done. And that's so good to hear.
Lely : I know, right ?
MKPC Archipel
2024 Season
The end
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2On 2024-04-05 at 23:55:51
Another long episode just got deleted. At this point I'm gonna save them from now on because this is bullshit
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13On 2024-04-01 at 13:33:50
@NotThatKrazey oh no you're not. I am not asking anyone anytime soon and even if I did it would be everyone but you 💀
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33On 2024-03-31 at 23:57:13
Btw this is on hiatus cause my phone is broken and this one is small so for now no episode upcoming 
On 2024-03-31 at 17:27:33
ill join
name
oke
personelity: bassicly Zoink but better in every way at geometry dash, lanquid
gender:male
weight:250 pounds
species: roblox guy
freind: Ben, Eli, or Max
enemy: Chuck
color: red with black eyes and braces
name
okepersonelity: bassicly Zoink but better in every way at geometry dash, lanquid
gender:male
weight:250 pounds
species: roblox guy
freind: Ben, Eli, or Max
enemy: Chuck
color: red with black eyes and braces
You're giving me so much for your character yet none of it makes sense
tell me what i need to add for it to make more sense
Nothing, since I am adding you
fixed it!
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha so funny, so funny yhat i changed my mind, im adding you
this is your noseThis is your brain, and it is about as functional as a reheated frozen dino chicken nugget
2On 2024-03-31 at 00:25:33
ill join
nameoke
personelity: bassicly Zoink but better in every way at geometry dash, lanquid
gender:male
weight:250 pounds
species: roblox guy
freind: Ben, Eli, or Max
enemy: Chuck
color: red with black eyes and braces
name
okepersonelity: bassicly Zoink but better in every way at geometry dash, lanquid
gender:male
weight:250 pounds
species: roblox guy
freind: Ben, Eli, or Max
enemy: Chuck
color: red with black eyes and braces
You're giving me so much for your character yet none of it makes sense
tell me what i need to add for it to make more sense
Nothing, since I am adding you
fixed it!
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha so funny, still not adding you though
On 2024-03-31 at 00:22:33
ill join
nameoke
personelity: bassicly Zoink but better in every way at geometry dash, lanquid
gender:male
weight:250 pounds
species: roblox guy
freind: Ben, Eli, or Max
enemy: Chuck
color: red with black eyes and braces
name
okepersonelity: bassicly Zoink but better in every way at geometry dash, lanquid
gender:male
weight:250 pounds
species: roblox guy
freind: Ben, Eli, or Max
enemy: Chuck
color: red with black eyes and braces
You're giving me so much for your character yet none of it makes sense
tell me what i need to add for it to make more sense
Nothing, since I am not adding you
On 2024-03-31 at 00:12:49
ill join
nameoke
personelity: bassicly Zoink but better in every way at geometry dash, lanquid
gender:male
weight:250 pounds
species: roblox guy
freind: Ben, Eli, or Max
enemy: Chuck
color: red with black eyes and braces
name
okepersonelity: bassicly Zoink but better in every way at geometry dash, lanquid
gender:male
weight:250 pounds
species: roblox guy
freind: Ben, Eli, or Max
enemy: Chuck
color: red with black eyes and braces
You're giving me so much for your character yet none of it makes sense
On 2024-03-31 at 00:03:51
Neither of you is joining
On 2024-03-26 at 02:00:25
Eli : Hey ! Hey ! You ! You ! I don't like your boyfriend !
I like how Eli's go-to intimidation technique is quoting Avril Lavigne.
1On 2024-03-26 at 01:55:43
Eli 15
Lely 10
Max 10
James 8
Nudge 7
Ben 7
Krazey 7
Alice 6
VC 5
Noob 4
Dayzi 3
Choco 3
Angrybird 3
For a centric episode, I think it's great. The others' appearances were quite rushed, but that will evolve in the future.
Lely 10
Max 10
James 8
Nudge 7
Ben 7
Krazey 7
Alice 6
VC 5
Noob 4
Dayzi 3
Choco 3
Angrybird 3
For a centric episode, I think it's great. The others' appearances were quite rushed, but that will evolve in the future.
On 2024-03-24 at 22:59:20
Chapter 4 : Behind The Mask
You’re probably wet with tears,
Holding a heavy breath in your mouth,
While just looking at me...
The distance is disappearing...
As if by fate, twice again...
Chuck : I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR YOU ALL FOR SO LONG ! WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU !
Eli : Getting a shirt for Ben.
Chuck : Yeah well ya got on my bad side. Anyways. Go get the trophy high up there. And bring it down. You have to give it to the chuckster Pianta, but where is he ? Idk.
And with that, they began.
James : It's not fair ! They just threw us out there !
Max : Lely. What do we do ?
Lely was staring into eternity and not responding.
Max : Lely... Let's go.
No way to shake him. He was morally dead.
Ben : I don't know what to do honestly. Slowly climb and make our way up. These platforms might help us, but they look like the Ricco Harbor ones. Not trustworthy.
James : I don't know. Really.
Elsewhere...
Dayzi : You can just fly up. Nothing complicated.
Eli : That's cheating !
Alice : How do you want to win when there is no common ground ??
Noob : Oh my god stop complaining ! It slows you down ! And also, Paratroopas have both no stamina when they're going up,and they are going slow. It might seel super unfair, but I'd say that it might just be a tiny advantage.
Nudge : Is there an elevator or something ? This seems to be like a city, right ?
Nudge was right. Metal tubes were crossing a whole part of the stadium, while a small city/village was occupying the other.
Krazey : Well... I don't know, there might be. But I'd aim for the right wing of the stadium. Climbing on metal tubes can be quite easy, especially as a hampter.
Nudge : Oh you aren't as dumb as I thought
Lely : The metal tubes ? Sounds like something I could slip off. We should head to the city instead.
Max : Oh finally you woke up
Max and Lely started running towards the city, while Nudge and Krazey were heading to the metal tubes.
Choco : Against every expectation, I'd very much rather dig underground. My mate left me for the skies, can't really follow him there. Plus I'm pretty sure we can go underground, there has to be a way.
Choco started roaming around, searching for a way to an apparent underground.
Eli : With the platforms and the tubes, we might get to the top in no time !
Alice : I'd rather head for the city instead. Do you see how high is the trophy ? Going by the metal tube way is a death wish.
Eli : If you say so... but Lely and Max are already heading for the city.
Alice : That's a cool opportunity to teach them something... don't mess with the Elijahs
Eli : Damn right.
So Lely and Max were heading to the city, followed by Eli and Alice whose cruelty had just rised. Krazey and Nudgy went to the metal tubes to climb faster. Choco was roaming, trying to go below, while Dayzi was slowly making his way up.
Ben : James... let's just rest for this round.
James : Why ?? No.
Ben : We should hide ourselves... and steal the trophy right before the winner brings it down.
James : That is so foul !
Ben : Yeah, but it's easier.
James : ...
Ben and James were trying to find a good spot to hide and not be noticed.
VC : Wow, what are these two guys doing ? They seem like they are hiding...
Noob : They could have plotted to steal the trophy right when the winner brings it down. Everything can happen. We should head for the trophy and alert the others.
VC and Noob headed for the city as well.
Angrybird : Wait ! My mates left me !! Oh, but I am a bird. I will give some competition to Dayzi.
And with that, everyone was gone.
Lely and Max reached the city.
Lely : Now let's seek for an elevator
Max : Might we get something to eat first ?
Lely : I don't think we have the time.
Eli : Hey ! Hey ! You ! You ! I don't like your boyfriend !
Max : Why the fuck are you here ??
Eli : To teach you something. Never mess with the Elijahs.
Lely : You think you're scary ? You're just a bitch...
Alice : That's it. You want to mess with us ?
Lely : I can't mess with you, at least not with your mind. It's already enough of a mess by itself.
Eli : That is an horrible thing to say !!
Lely : You think you're better ??
Alice got mad and went straight for Lely's neck. The teenager was not taken aback, he expected that. He started kicking her until she finally gave up.
Once their physical fight was done, they looked at each other with a rage that can hardly be described.
Max : Why are you getting physical, Alice ?
Alice : He made fun of my mind. He should kill himself.
Lely : You deserved it. Don't act like you are a tough girl. And don't make fun of me. If you don't do either of these, I won't say these bitchy things again. But for now, you crossed the line.
Eli : *pulls out knife* This is what you want ? *cuts Lely on the arm*
Lely : Now what the fuck ? You're going to kill me ?
Eli : I told you to not mess with us.
Max : No you're not. *jumps on Eli and takes possession of the knife* I have the weapon now, so we are all listening to me.
Eli : You can't do shit with that !
Max : The only thing I'll do is a remodeling of your ugly face if you don't shut up. This is enough violence. Now you need to stop. Why are you so rude ?? We were friends two days ago ??
Eli : He sided with Ben !
Max : He was smarter than you were ! Swallow that shit real deep.
Eli : ... AHHHHH ! YOU WILL SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT !!
Eli jumps in fury. Max simply avoids him, and Eli falls on concrete. His face bruised and his nose bleeding, he looked to Max, who wasn't even flinching. Alice jumped on Max too, but this time Lely kicked in and he kicked her to the ground.
Lely : We didn't hit you. You did. Now we are defending ourselves. Oh but no I know what we hit. Your ego.
Eli : *breathes in and out* You'll PAY !
Eli jumps but this time Lely catches him and watches him. His glare has never been this scary. Eli, Max and Alice are taken aback. Lely just whispers "Oh no we won't. In fact, rent is due." Before letting go of him. Eli thought Lely would push him, but no. However, his glare was enough to make them comprehend what was happening.
But anyways, let's see how the others are doing...
Nudge : Krazey ! Jump !
Krazey : Are you like, blind or something ? If I jump I'll fall.
Nudge : The gap is small ! The most you can do is put under danger your future kids ! JUMP !
Krazey : *jumps and everything goes smoothly* Wow. That was close.
Nudge : Right. Anyways, let's climb higher up for now.
Krazey : No. Let's take a break first.
Nudge : You're so lazy !
Krazey : I know.
Dayzi was flying up... but he was getting tired.
Dayzi : Aahhhh ! I got a cramp *starts falling*
Dayzi screamed until he fell in a pond.
Dayzi : Well... I have to start everything over again. But anyways, where is Choco ?
Choco was still exploring, he had reached a small hill which he found suspicious but he had nothing to dig. So he seeked for something that could help him dig.
Choco : A shovel, is there any shovel ? Or maybe I can try to destroy it with a car ? It seems steep enough to be broken...
Meanwhile, Angrybird...
Angrybird : My wings are already tired but I think I made it quite high. Oh isn't that Nudge and Krazey ?
Krazey : Hey Nudge look at who is above us !
Angrybird : Hello !
Nudge : We should get going...
James and Ben...
James : What do we do ? Dayzi fell ! Nobody's reaching the top any soon !
Ben : Shhh ! I am writing a love letter.
James : Shouldn't we plan on making a trap instead ?
Ben : I said shush...
James : Tssk...
VC and Noob...
VC : Look at who fell from the skies ! We are going slowly but surely. But for now, let's take a break and see what we are doing later.
Noob : James and Ben are for sure hiding something either way. Nobody saw them since a while.
VC : Nudge, Krazey and Angrybird have reached quite a height in the metal tubes. Angrybird is with us for now. They are a little above us.
Noob : Lely, Max, Alice and Eli are in the city. I am pretty sure a fight's going on in there.
VC : I don't know. Tbh, I wouldn't even be surprised. Alice and Eli are way too agressive these days.
Noob : Right...
Choco was still searching.
Choco : Oh yeah, but you need a key for the cars. I don't know anymore.
Meanwhile, Eli...
Eli : This is not over...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 season
Chapter 4
The end
You’re probably wet with tears,
Holding a heavy breath in your mouth,
While just looking at me...
Lely's POV
We began walking towards Chuck. A song, behind the mask by twice, started playing in my head, and everything went mute. I couldn't hear the hubbub from others. Chuck seemed enraged that we left. He wanted us to come back and give the crowd what they came for. But my mind wasn't ready. It was as if my trust had been broken really hardly. Broken to the point that it's beyond broken. Broken to the point where I feel like I lost myself.
We began walking towards Chuck. A song, behind the mask by twice, started playing in my head, and everything went mute. I couldn't hear the hubbub from others. Chuck seemed enraged that we left. He wanted us to come back and give the crowd what they came for. But my mind wasn't ready. It was as if my trust had been broken really hardly. Broken to the point that it's beyond broken. Broken to the point where I feel like I lost myself.
Max's POV
When Alice said that, I felt something in Lely. He should have burst out crying, but his face was neutral. It was as if the blow either didn't hurt him, or on the opposite, hit him too hard to even respond. I hardly believe what is going on right now. Ben is an ongoing, provocative fire, and Alice keeps being so violent towards Lely every time he tried to fix the situation. I want to protect him from this.
When Alice said that, I felt something in Lely. He should have burst out crying, but his face was neutral. It was as if the blow either didn't hurt him, or on the opposite, hit him too hard to even respond. I hardly believe what is going on right now. Ben is an ongoing, provocative fire, and Alice keeps being so violent towards Lely every time he tried to fix the situation. I want to protect him from this.
Nudge's POV
As we are walking towards Chuck, I am questioning a lot. Would I have been this mean to Lely ? Maybe. But would have I said it in such a way ? No. My way is very clear, it is sarcasm all along. Alice ? It's almost as if she said violent and hurtful words in the most serious way possible to maliciously hurt the person as much as she can. I'm starting to consider, which is more toxic for the group. Ben or her ? In an oily fire, both the oil and the fire are faulty. So really. I don't know.
As we are walking towards Chuck, I am questioning a lot. Would I have been this mean to Lely ? Maybe. But would have I said it in such a way ? No. My way is very clear, it is sarcasm all along. Alice ? It's almost as if she said violent and hurtful words in the most serious way possible to maliciously hurt the person as much as she can. I'm starting to consider, which is more toxic for the group. Ben or her ? In an oily fire, both the oil and the fire are faulty. So really. I don't know.
Alice's POV
I should probably murder Ben at this point. We'll pretend he has been sent home, and we won't tell. I'm pretty sure everybody's willing to cover and help me. That guy is making everything so much worse. Lely is siding with him. I don't regret what I said. Side with assholes ? You are one too. Cry about it little dumbass.
I should probably murder Ben at this point. We'll pretend he has been sent home, and we won't tell. I'm pretty sure everybody's willing to cover and help me. That guy is making everything so much worse. Lely is siding with him. I don't regret what I said. Side with assholes ? You are one too. Cry about it little dumbass.
Ben's POV
Well, will I die or not ? I am pretty sure Alice will try to eliminate me. She's gone so far now. I need to build a legacy before she finally gets me. And then, I will be able to die in peace.
Well, will I die or not ? I am pretty sure Alice will try to eliminate me. She's gone so far now. I need to build a legacy before she finally gets me. And then, I will be able to die in peace.
VC's POV
Is there any hope now ? Every moment turns into a fight. This is a hellfire. How long can we last like that ? Shouldn't we talk it out peacefully ? Because I feel like even if Alice said something really horrible, things aren't done. And the sooner we get rid of the tension, the smallest it'll be. If we wait, someone might die. I will never let that happen.
Is there any hope now ? Every moment turns into a fight. This is a hellfire. How long can we last like that ? Shouldn't we talk it out peacefully ? Because I feel like even if Alice said something really horrible, things aren't done. And the sooner we get rid of the tension, the smallest it'll be. If we wait, someone might die. I will never let that happen.
Krazey's POV
Wow. Alice went hard. Not as hard as... erm. Shh for now.
Wow. Alice went hard. Not as hard as... erm. Shh for now.
The distance is disappearing...
As if by fate, twice again...
Chuck : I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR YOU ALL FOR SO LONG ! WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU !
Eli : Getting a shirt for Ben.
Chuck : Yeah well ya got on my bad side. Anyways. Go get the trophy high up there. And bring it down. You have to give it to the chuckster Pianta, but where is he ? Idk.
And with that, they began.
James : It's not fair ! They just threw us out there !
Max : Lely. What do we do ?
Lely was staring into eternity and not responding.
Max : Lely... Let's go.
No way to shake him. He was morally dead.
Ben : I don't know what to do honestly. Slowly climb and make our way up. These platforms might help us, but they look like the Ricco Harbor ones. Not trustworthy.
James : I don't know. Really.
Elsewhere...
Dayzi : You can just fly up. Nothing complicated.
Eli : That's cheating !
Alice : How do you want to win when there is no common ground ??
Noob : Oh my god stop complaining ! It slows you down ! And also, Paratroopas have both no stamina when they're going up,and they are going slow. It might seel super unfair, but I'd say that it might just be a tiny advantage.
Nudge : Is there an elevator or something ? This seems to be like a city, right ?
Nudge was right. Metal tubes were crossing a whole part of the stadium, while a small city/village was occupying the other.
Krazey : Well... I don't know, there might be. But I'd aim for the right wing of the stadium. Climbing on metal tubes can be quite easy, especially as a hampter.
Nudge : Oh you aren't as dumb as I thought
Lely : The metal tubes ? Sounds like something I could slip off. We should head to the city instead.
Max : Oh finally you woke up
Max and Lely started running towards the city, while Nudge and Krazey were heading to the metal tubes.
Choco : Against every expectation, I'd very much rather dig underground. My mate left me for the skies, can't really follow him there. Plus I'm pretty sure we can go underground, there has to be a way.
Choco started roaming around, searching for a way to an apparent underground.
Eli : With the platforms and the tubes, we might get to the top in no time !
Alice : I'd rather head for the city instead. Do you see how high is the trophy ? Going by the metal tube way is a death wish.
Eli : If you say so... but Lely and Max are already heading for the city.
Alice : That's a cool opportunity to teach them something... don't mess with the Elijahs
Eli : Damn right.
So Lely and Max were heading to the city, followed by Eli and Alice whose cruelty had just rised. Krazey and Nudgy went to the metal tubes to climb faster. Choco was roaming, trying to go below, while Dayzi was slowly making his way up.
Ben : James... let's just rest for this round.
James : Why ?? No.
Ben : We should hide ourselves... and steal the trophy right before the winner brings it down.
James : That is so foul !
Ben : Yeah, but it's easier.
James : ...
Ben and James were trying to find a good spot to hide and not be noticed.
VC : Wow, what are these two guys doing ? They seem like they are hiding...
Noob : They could have plotted to steal the trophy right when the winner brings it down. Everything can happen. We should head for the trophy and alert the others.
VC and Noob headed for the city as well.
Angrybird : Wait ! My mates left me !! Oh, but I am a bird. I will give some competition to Dayzi.
And with that, everyone was gone.
Lely and Max reached the city.
Lely : Now let's seek for an elevator
Max : Might we get something to eat first ?
Lely : I don't think we have the time.
Eli : Hey ! Hey ! You ! You ! I don't like your boyfriend !
Max : Why the fuck are you here ??
Eli : To teach you something. Never mess with the Elijahs.
Lely : You think you're scary ? You're just a bitch...
Alice : That's it. You want to mess with us ?
Lely : I can't mess with you, at least not with your mind. It's already enough of a mess by itself.
Eli : That is an horrible thing to say !!
Lely : You think you're better ??
Alice got mad and went straight for Lely's neck. The teenager was not taken aback, he expected that. He started kicking her until she finally gave up.
Once their physical fight was done, they looked at each other with a rage that can hardly be described.
Max : Why are you getting physical, Alice ?
Alice : He made fun of my mind. He should kill himself.
Lely : You deserved it. Don't act like you are a tough girl. And don't make fun of me. If you don't do either of these, I won't say these bitchy things again. But for now, you crossed the line.
Eli : *pulls out knife* This is what you want ? *cuts Lely on the arm*
Lely : Now what the fuck ? You're going to kill me ?
Eli : I told you to not mess with us.
Max : No you're not. *jumps on Eli and takes possession of the knife* I have the weapon now, so we are all listening to me.
Eli : You can't do shit with that !
Max : The only thing I'll do is a remodeling of your ugly face if you don't shut up. This is enough violence. Now you need to stop. Why are you so rude ?? We were friends two days ago ??
Eli : He sided with Ben !
Max : He was smarter than you were ! Swallow that shit real deep.
Eli : ... AHHHHH ! YOU WILL SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT !!
Eli jumps in fury. Max simply avoids him, and Eli falls on concrete. His face bruised and his nose bleeding, he looked to Max, who wasn't even flinching. Alice jumped on Max too, but this time Lely kicked in and he kicked her to the ground.
Lely : We didn't hit you. You did. Now we are defending ourselves. Oh but no I know what we hit. Your ego.
Eli : *breathes in and out* You'll PAY !
Eli jumps but this time Lely catches him and watches him. His glare has never been this scary. Eli, Max and Alice are taken aback. Lely just whispers "Oh no we won't. In fact, rent is due." Before letting go of him. Eli thought Lely would push him, but no. However, his glare was enough to make them comprehend what was happening.
But anyways, let's see how the others are doing...
Nudge : Krazey ! Jump !
Krazey : Are you like, blind or something ? If I jump I'll fall.
Nudge : The gap is small ! The most you can do is put under danger your future kids ! JUMP !
Krazey : *jumps and everything goes smoothly* Wow. That was close.
Nudge : Right. Anyways, let's climb higher up for now.
Krazey : No. Let's take a break first.
Nudge : You're so lazy !
Krazey : I know.
Dayzi was flying up... but he was getting tired.
Dayzi : Aahhhh ! I got a cramp *starts falling*
Dayzi screamed until he fell in a pond.
Dayzi : Well... I have to start everything over again. But anyways, where is Choco ?
Choco was still exploring, he had reached a small hill which he found suspicious but he had nothing to dig. So he seeked for something that could help him dig.
Choco : A shovel, is there any shovel ? Or maybe I can try to destroy it with a car ? It seems steep enough to be broken...
Meanwhile, Angrybird...
Angrybird : My wings are already tired but I think I made it quite high. Oh isn't that Nudge and Krazey ?
Krazey : Hey Nudge look at who is above us !
Angrybird : Hello !
Nudge : We should get going...
James and Ben...
James : What do we do ? Dayzi fell ! Nobody's reaching the top any soon !
Ben : Shhh ! I am writing a love letter.
James : Shouldn't we plan on making a trap instead ?
Ben : I said shush...
James : Tssk...
VC and Noob...
VC : Look at who fell from the skies ! We are going slowly but surely. But for now, let's take a break and see what we are doing later.
Noob : James and Ben are for sure hiding something either way. Nobody saw them since a while.
VC : Nudge, Krazey and Angrybird have reached quite a height in the metal tubes. Angrybird is with us for now. They are a little above us.
Noob : Lely, Max, Alice and Eli are in the city. I am pretty sure a fight's going on in there.
VC : I don't know. Tbh, I wouldn't even be surprised. Alice and Eli are way too agressive these days.
Noob : Right...
Choco was still searching.
Choco : Oh yeah, but you need a key for the cars. I don't know anymore.
Meanwhile, Eli...
Eli : This is not over...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 season
Chapter 4
The end
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311On 2024-03-21 at 08:02:56
Lely 11
Nudge 8
Eli 7
Alice 6
Max 5
Ben 5
Krazey 4
Noob 4
VC 2
Dayzi 1
Choco 1
James 1
Angrybird 1
That line distribution was a bit tougher. But anyways this means the fanfic is restarting !!
Nudge 8
Eli 7
Alice 6
Max 5
Ben 5
Krazey 4
Noob 4
VC 2
Dayzi 1
Choco 1
James 1
Angrybird 1
That line distribution was a bit tougher. But anyways this means the fanfic is restarting !!
Restarting? Man, somebody has to keep count of how many reboots we've had from Lels by this point.
Ah no I just meant I would start writing for this again. Dw it's steady for now.
Emphasis on "for now", right?
Nah, I really think that this fanfic has a lot of potential. I think there is too much fighting though, I should probably reduce it a bit
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1On 2024-03-21 at 01:37:21
Lely 11
Nudge 8
Eli 7
Alice 6
Max 5
Ben 5
Krazey 4
Noob 4
VC 2
Dayzi 1
Choco 1
James 1
Angrybird 1
That line distribution was a bit tougher. But anyways this means the fanfic is restarting !!
Nudge 8
Eli 7
Alice 6
Max 5
Ben 5
Krazey 4
Noob 4
VC 2
Dayzi 1
Choco 1
James 1
Angrybird 1
That line distribution was a bit tougher. But anyways this means the fanfic is restarting !!
Restarting? Man, somebody has to keep count of how many reboots we've had from Lels by this point.
Ah no I just meant I would start writing for this again. Dw it's steady for now.
1On 2024-03-21 at 01:01:24
Lely 11
Nudge 8
Eli 7
Alice 6
Max 5
Ben 5
Krazey 4
Noob 4
VC 2
Dayzi 1
Choco 1
James 1
Angrybird 1
That line distribution was a bit tougher. But anyways this means the fanfic is restarting !!
Nudge 8
Eli 7
Alice 6
Max 5
Ben 5
Krazey 4
Noob 4
VC 2
Dayzi 1
Choco 1
James 1
Angrybird 1
That line distribution was a bit tougher. But anyways this means the fanfic is restarting !!