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fanfic: Piggy x Forsaken x Frozen Soul Crossover[PROLOUGE PART 2]
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5000 pts ★ NoviceOn 2025-07-10 at 01:57:23
Prologue part 2:
Nash: *wakes up* where the hell am I-
Zizzy: WHO ARE YOU, AND WHY ARE YOU HERE!?
Nash: uh I’m Nasha-
Pony: How did you get here.
Nash: you didn’t let me me finish my sentence but okey, I just woke up in this world.
All: *bursts out laughing*
George:
You really expect us to believe that?*continues laughing*
Giraffy: you just woke up here? LOL *continues laughing*
Pony: So you wake up for no reason? HAHAHAHAH
Nash: it’s not funny.
*world glitches*
Zizzy: huh, nothing happened.
Mimi: *looks out the window* who’s this red guy laying face-flat outside our building.
OUTSIDE OF SAFE PLACE:
c00lkid: *wakes up* what the what is going on!
CHAPTER 1 SOON
Nash: *wakes up* where the hell am I-
Zizzy: WHO ARE YOU, AND WHY ARE YOU HERE!?
Nash: uh I’m Nasha-
Pony: How did you get here.
Nash: you didn’t let me me finish my sentence but okey, I just woke up in this world.
All: *bursts out laughing*
George:
You really expect us to believe that?*continues laughing*Giraffy: you just woke up here? LOL *continues laughing*
Pony: So you wake up for no reason? HAHAHAHAH
Nash: it’s not funny.
*world glitches*
Zizzy: huh, nothing happened.
Mimi: *looks out the window* who’s this red guy laying face-flat outside our building.
OUTSIDE OF SAFE PLACE:
c00lkid: *wakes up* what the what is going on!
CHAPTER 1 SOON
Man I sure hope some 10 year old that has been probably influenced by The Spectre doesn’t kill me.
On 2025-07-06 at 00:30:54
The title isn't very descriptive. I don't know what any of those are, further than the basic knowledge of them being roblox games.
Piggy is basically a ripoff of "Granny" which is a mobile game, and inspired from the famous Peppa Pig cartoon.Forsaken is a "Survive the killer" type game which features infamous Roblox Hackers. You have to solve basic puzzles in order to survive.
I have no idea of what the last game is.
Ah yes, my favorite hacker. Jason frickin’ Voorhees.
On 2025-07-06 at 00:29:50
The title isn't very descriptive. I don't know what any of those are, further than the basic knowledge of them being roblox games.
I got u man.
Piggy is a game based off of Granny. Basically it’s… Well, Piggy. uhhi cant rlly say much bc its been a while since i played it, but its basically an asymmetrical horror game.
Forsaken is another asymmetrical horror/survival game. This is something I can talk about (YAP SESSION INCOMING PLEASE READ IT I SPENT WAY TO LONG THINKING AND TYPING).
Asymmetrical horror games have been on the platform ever since one of the first of its kind called “Survive and Kill the Killers in Area 51” became popular. Just for a rundown for Piggy and Forsaken, asymmetrical games have 1 killer, with the rest being survivors. The survivors must survive until the time runs out (Forsaken) or do some kind of objective first, then escape (Piggy). The killers job is to… well, kill them all. The survivors always have some kind of advantage, and for both games its items. However, the killer also gets something to help. For Piggy the killer (and to an extent, the players if the gamemode is Traitor) gets traps. In Forsaken, the killers get +10 more stamina and have aura reading abilities to see where the survivors are (minus c00lkidd, who must rely on his Pizza Delivery to find players).
Dream Game is a Yume Nikki-esque game. If you don’t know what Yume Nikki is, it’s basically a horror walking sim-ish about a girl named Madotsuki who can go to sleep to go to this place called the “Dreamverse (me thinks bc i also havent played Yume Nikki in a while)”. In the dream verse, she can go though her dreams to find items. I’m not gonna spoil anymore, because I really reccomend it for those games that feel like a fever dream. Seriously, go check it out on Steam or on a YT gameplay video or smh.
But back to Dream Game. It’s basically about a girl named Nashatra Bealdhild (AKA me =D) who… Man, it’s just Yume Nikki but changed a bit, who am I even kidding (its also more complex)?
So yeah, hope this helps!
Side note: @notgeorge, Dream Game has been renamed to “Frozen Soul”, so you might wanna change the title or smh.
1Camp MKPC News Central & Discussions
On 2025-06-05 at 02:16:36
Not really a question but I really like where this is going, can’t wait to see the Pilot in full!
FANFIC: STAYING AT THE WORST HOTEL KNOWN TO MAN
On 2025-07-07 at 07:18:10
hi mister plz let me in or else>
Name: Nashatra (or Nash for short)
Color: Maroon
Personality: She’s the only sane person of the group. She’s mostly a down-to-earth and soft person, but can get pretty cynical. She’s also likely to watch stuff from afar and occasionally comment on whatever is happening (mostly with snark or sarcasm, but sometimes praise whenever someone does something smart for once). She won’t hesitate to swear.
Name: Nashatra (or Nash for short)
Color: Maroon
Personality: She’s the only sane person of the group. She’s mostly a down-to-earth and soft person, but can get pretty cynical. She’s also likely to watch stuff from afar and occasionally comment on whatever is happening (mostly with snark or sarcasm, but sometimes praise whenever someone does something smart for once). She won’t hesitate to swear.
1FANFIC: Battle for Dream Island, MKPC edition!
On 2025-07-09 at 02:58:21
This is supposed to be a joke fanfic, so take it with a grain of salt.
oh shit mb
On 2025-07-08 at 22:36:26
tbh this was a total waste of time and a scam.
DryBones, I humbly ask you to please relax -_-
This is basically Jelly’s first time doing this, so he doesn’t rlly know what to do. Not everyone straight away writes absolute bangers.
2On 2025-07-08 at 21:36:58
Episode 1: Revealations
Lakitu: Im bored
Nudgy: Me 2
Lakitu: Hey I haz idea
Nudgy: Whatg is idea
Lakitu: Lets make object show
Nudgy: Be our host pls
Me: SURE
Your first challenge is to find the pinecones
Neptuno: Can I have one
ME: Sure
GamerJax: Oh! Look! I Found Pinecone!
ME: So Neptuno and gamerjax pick teams, episodes daily
Episode 2 is 7/9?
Lakitu: Im bored
Nudgy: Me 2
Lakitu: Hey I haz idea
Nudgy: Whatg is idea
Lakitu: Lets make object show
Nudgy: Be our host pls
Me: SURE
Your first challenge is to find the pinecones
Neptuno: Can I have one
ME: Sure
GamerJax: Oh! Look! I Found Pinecone!
ME: So Neptuno and gamerjax pick teams, episodes daily
Episode 2 is 7/9?
I hope you don't take this in a very offending way... It's not AWESOME like Camp MKPC Ep. 1, but it's better than nothing. I kinda did better in other fanfics... not to brag. I hope you don't find this offending.
This is basically what I said when I graded this thing. It’s not the best, but also not the worst.
On 2025-07-08 at 11:23:31
My first fanfic wasn’t even this bad💀💀💀💀
Bro chill out ur taking a step too far
On 2025-07-08 at 09:14:51
bro rushed art.
To be fair, Jelly kinda did. It’s like trying to paint the Mona Lisa but instead you ge5 a stickman.
It’s kind of like Inanimate Insanity. It started off as a generic object show, but eventually grew to cinema. I can see JG making this into a cool object show with enough time and effort.
On 2025-07-08 at 09:03:54
Episode 1: Revealations
Lakitu: Im bored
Nudgy: Me 2
Lakitu: Hey I haz idea
Nudgy: Whatg is idea
Lakitu: Lets make object show
Nudgy: Be our host pls
Me: SURE
Your first challenge is to find the pinecones
Neptuno: Can I have one
ME: Sure
GamerJax: Oh! Look! I Found Pinecone!
ME: So Neptuno and gamerjax pick teams, episodes daily
Episode 2 is 7/9?
Lakitu: Im bored
Nudgy: Me 2
Lakitu: Hey I haz idea
Nudgy: Whatg is idea
Lakitu: Lets make object show
Nudgy: Be our host pls
Me: SURE
Your first challenge is to find the pinecones
Neptuno: Can I have one
ME: Sure
GamerJax: Oh! Look! I Found Pinecone!
ME: So Neptuno and gamerjax pick teams, episodes daily
Episode 2 is 7/9?
…Ok, so, I… Er…
This isn’t the worst thing I’ve seen… But it’s also not the best.
Introducing another episode of… NASHATRA’S CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM CORNER!!!
Ok, so, lemme just summarized what happened in my own words:
-We are introduced to absolutely no one.
-Lakitu and Nudgey come up with an idea to host a show.
-First-ish challenge: Find a pinecone.
-Neptuno and GamerJax simply cheese it.
The end.
So, for the pros… There’s literally none I can give (sorry). There’s absolutely no context to what happened before this, only, like a handful of characters are introduced (which never happens to every other object show, the viewers get a taste of their personalities before the host appears and the show starts), and the challenge was probably simple just for times sake.
Some other problems are:
-There’s literally no plot whatsoever.
-The pacing is really quick.
But most importantly…
-A 4-year-old could come up with this (and the “episode”, if I were to animate it, would be, like, 12 seconds long).
Overall, I grade this episode…
D+ (kinda terrible).
Now, I know this was probably your first fic, which I totally understand, but the writing process takes time. You have to find a good plotline people can follow easily, not too complex, and not too rushed (you did the latter), try to take your time (maybe not make it daily?) and just what I do, but might help you: make a rough draft of said episode you’re going to make. After that, revise it a bit, ask ppl for opinions, and when ur confident in ur work, give out a release date (preferably 2-3 days after said release date is given) and touch the episode up a little bit. And then once that date hits, release it.
I really see potential in you, so maybe give some effort, will ya?
Thanks for listening, Nashatra Bealdhild tuning out, be good people ^_^
1On 2025-06-22 at 03:02:51
SIGN ME UP!
Squashy Grapes plz
Squashy Grapes plz
sorry guys
On 2025-07-01 at 10:42:54
XP
Can you not, please?
Edit: Shoot, I didn’t know. Sorry for the confusion.
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2MKPC Stupid Feature Suggestions
On 2025-07-07 at 05:08:41
They should add MKDD, 3DS, and Wii tracks trust
I agree but that’s a good update suggestion, not a stupid update suggestion
You see, the stupid part is how many people beg for them to add.
They’re never happening, it’s why track maker exists.
On 2025-07-07 at 05:05:28
They should add MKDD, 3DS, and Wii tracks trust
Yoshi LOVER Kart Wonder
On 2025-07-01 at 19:05:53
I agree with @SuperSwimmer. Overrides would be cool, maybe it changes the entire track layout or some parts of it.
3let's talk about our favorite youtubers!! yay
On 2025-07-01 at 20:11:25
I really like Caddicarus, Kam Sandwich, Party Crashers, and Dead Meat :3
Chuck Norris Topic
On 2025-06-30 at 21:19:07
Chuck Norris gives paralysis to his paralysis demon.
On 2025-05-24 at 23:16:53
Chuck Norris doesn’t owe everybody anything, everybody owes Chuck Norris something.
Very sorry 😔
On 2025-07-02 at 21:55:06
Hi guys if y'all are here I sorry for being annoying I shouldn't have been to mkpc so I,m leaving mkpc
NO PLEASE DON'T LEAVE IF YOU DO LEAVE, WE WILL HAVE NOTHING
who tf is "we"
I'm meaning all of us.
Some of us (Me and Saph included) has never even heard of this guy’s existence before.
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