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Episode #3 The Siege

Dietsoda; So, everyone listen up. The others, mayflies, losers, and psychos all, are still stuck in the cave at Toad’s Riverside Park track. You need to get them out. I’m going to go find whoever rigged that trap.
Popplio; Huh?
Xrunner48; He said we have to rescue the others while he goes alone to find whoever blew up the official track’s entrance and trapped the others.  
Popplio; Oh no you don’t! *he grabs Dietsoda’s collar* We’re going to need everyone to get our friends out of that cave, and you’re not going to go off on your own, d’you hear me?! And you will not be so rude to MKPCians, got it?!
Dietsoda; O-o-ok.
Noob; Nice work, Popplio!
Popplio; Was it? It feels so weird. I was mad just now.
Xrunner48; Aaand that’s settled, so let’s figure out how we’re going to get our friends out. Popplio, can you go get K and Oskar? We might be able to use their explosives to break open the cave and confuse those water-creatures.
Popplio; I think I can do that.

Popplio left to find K and Oskar.

Noob; Popplio’s been gone awhile now. Maybe we should go after him.
Dietsoda; Alright, let’s go find the yelling mayfly.
Noob; Enough!
Dietsoda; Alright alright! Let’s go.
Knoah; Yes, quickly, hurry

At GBA Riverside Park by Toadboiiiii

Sorbet; OK, does everyone know what they have to do? As soon as we’re out, we head across the track and into the trees.
Fiery; I’m terrified.
Nudge; Ya, you go ahead and be terrified. Let’s just get this done.
Sorbet; Alright. Melee, Dark, can you start breaking the barricade?
Melee; Hoho yaaa!

Melee and and Dark blast away at the wall of collapsed rock,  Melee with lasers, while Dark touches them and they melt and fall away.

Melee; Here it comes!
Fiery; Outta the way quick quick!
IlluZhion; *cough, cough* The dust! Whoah! Look at that!
Toad99; What are those things?
Toad; No time to figure it out. Get to the trees!

Everyone runs out of the cave toward the trees. The blue-green creatures swarm up the track toward them. Melee fired laser shots into the mob, and some of the monsters fell with black-edged holes in them.

Toad99; We’re almost there! Let’s go through that gap in the trees!
StarSplizz; Yes! We’re here! Are they close behind us?
MisterCringeh; Yes, and there are only about thirty of them.
Nudge; Well then let’s have some fun! I found a nice sharp stick over here.
MisterCringeh; Can you only think of killing right now?
Nudge; Yes.
Dark; Guys, they’re here!
StarSplizz; It was nice knowing you guys. 😢
Nudge; HAHAHAA! *thwack* Take that, funny guy! Get your hands off me, slimebrain! *smack, squelch* creatures die.
Toad; Let’s go help! I’ve got a stick! *smack* creature dies
A moment later
IlluZhion; These are not good fighters. We seem to have laid them all out already.
Dark; Well, there’s enough of them to whoop our-
StarSplizz; to beat us in a fight.
Dark; Ok, There’s enough to beat us in a fight. It doesn’t matter if they’re not very good fighters, there are just so many.
MisterCringeh; He’s right. We need a plan, and quickly. The rest of those monsters are coming now.
Fiery; S-save us… WHAT’LL WE DO?

Xrunner48, Dietsoda, Noob, and Knoah are searching the official tracks entrance.

Dietsoda; There was a fight, something big. Look at these paw-prints. K and Oskar aren’t here. What is this metal box thing?
Xrunner48; It’s a tracking device. Gimme. Hmmm, it’s damaged. I’ll need to fix this and we can see what it is tracking.
Noob; Well, we need to go help the others escape from Riverside Park. We’ll figure this out later.
Knoah; We need to find out what’s up here though.
Xrunner48; No time now, come on!

In the trees at the racetrack, the MKPCians have built a barricade to keep the attackers away.

Nudge; Never thought I’d say this, but I don’t think I can hold these things back anymore!
Dark; We need to get out of here!
StarSplizz; We can’t.
Fiery; WE”RE GONNA DIEEEE!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
MisterCringeh; Stay calm, there has to be a way out of this.
Melee; Die, foul fiends! *shoots lasers* creatures die
IlluZhion; If I could get a moment without distractions, I could help. Can you all try to keep them away?
Fiery; Everyone give him some room! Please please please!!! Hurry it up lads!
MisterCringeh; Yes, make some room. IlluZhion, I hope you can help with this. We’ll hold these things off.

Fiery; They’re coming through! HELP!
IlluhZhion; Not yet they aren’t.

IlluhZhion pointed at the swarm of water-creatures, and a group of wraiths rose out of the ground. Shimmering silver-white, they attacked the enemy and drove them back, flickering as they warped from one place to another.

IlluhZhion; That will buy us some time. Dead people are so... helpful.
Xrunner48; Well hurry up and use it!

Explosions blew through the larger groups of enemies, and the MKPCians charged again. The creatures fled back to the water, and the MKPCians made it through and escaped the track.

Fiery; Whew. Thanks IlluZhion, that helped. And thanks Xrunner48, Dietsoda, Noob, Popplio, Knoah, I thought we were gonna die in there!
Popplio; *blows bubbles happily* I’m so happy you all survived!
Dark; Well, that ‘parting gift’ you gave those monsters helped a lot!
StarSplizz; Now we just need to track down whoever is responsible for all of this.
Noob; Where is Toad99?
Popplio; *stops blowing bubbles*

Meanwhile, at another track…

Oskar; What are you doing?! You can’t kill us!
???; Really? And who will stop me? You and K have gotten in the way of my plans, you and all your friends must die. You first.
K; Whatever your “plans” are, our friends will stop you.
???; But you don’t understand, I am in their group. I am one of your “friends.” No one will suspect me. You poor peace-loving MKPCians are about to get a rude awakening. Oskar dies now, K will die soon. His skill with technology will be useful to me before I remove him.

Then the person threw Oskar over a cliff, where he landed on a pile of dirt, rocks, and thorny bushes. Then he boarded an armored flying vehicle with K and flew away.


"Nudge; HAHAHAA! *thwack* Take that, funny guy! Get your hands off me, slimebrain! *smack, squelch*"... I think I've been reading too much Brian Jacques

Sorry, it's a bit difficult to find lines for everyone in every episode.

Ep#2 Nasty Surprises

At the entrance to the quick mode tracks;

Fiery; The tracks lead through the entrance. Something was dragged through here.
Nudge; So we follow them. Who’s with me?
Illuzhion; Okay, let’s go.
Melee; Alright. The marks are leading toward the portal leading to the track called ‘GBA Riverside Park.’ It looks like the one Toad made.
Toad; Oh you guys are gonna looove this track. We should stop for a race!
Popplio; Did you install a waterslide? Cuz I’ll totally go!
Knoah; HERE WE GO!!!
Nudge; What the… Why are you yelling so loud, you idiot? If someone involved with that bomber is at this track, now they know we’re here.
Knoah; Uh, sorry.
Illuzhion; Well, let’s just go in and get it over with.

StarSplizz; There’s no one here, as far as I can tell.
Sorbet; There’s some sort of pounding noise coming from the tunnel. We should go see what’s up.

Everyone goes to the cave.

Dark; Well then, here we are.
MisterCringeh; Wow, that pounding is very loud. What's going on in there?
Knoah; Go on, we’ve got to go look.
Everyone goes in. Knoah creates a clone and sends it in. He waits outside.

Noob; AAAHHH! Thwomps! Everyone get out of the way!
Xrunner48; Move!
Toad; What are these things doing here? I didn’t bring them! YOWCH!!!
StarSplizz; Toad’s been crushed!
Nudge; He’s half vampire, he’ll be fine.
Noob; What? OOF.
MisterCringeh; Noob, are you okay?
Fiery; He’s just unconscious. Let’s get out of here.
Xrunner48; I’ll carry Noob out. StarSplizz, can you get Toad?
Melee; I’ve got him.

Then the thwomps at near the entrances started hitting the ceiling instead.

MisterCringeh; Aaaand the ceiling is coming down.
Illuzhion; Great, just perfect.

The entrances collapsed, trapping many of the MKPCians inside. Xrunner48 managed to get out with Noob. Popplio slipped out through a gap before it closed.

Knoah; What happened in there? Are you alright?
Dietsoda; No time for that. We need to get out of here. There’s some sort of army coming out of the water.
Noob; Ooow. Wait, what about the others?
Dietsoda; We’ll come back for them. Now move, shorty.

A mob of green-blue creatures walking on two legs approached from the water. Their eyes were pale white and their huge hands held clubs. The MKPCians ran toward the portal, but some of the creatures reached it first.

Dietsoda; We’ll have to fight our way through.
Popplio; Uuuh, I don’t know about this.
Xrunner48; EEEYAAAH!

Xrunner48 charged and killed the creatures before they could capture the MKPCians. Dietsoda fired an arrow and hit a distant one between the eyes.

Xrunner48; Let’s go. We’ll get K and Oskar and they can help us free the others.

They went through the portal. Behind them, Knoah looked at the creatures bodies and snarled angrily. Then he followed.

Meanwhile, at the entrance to the official tracks;

K; We’re almost through. If we can just repair the control mechanism we can reactivate the portal.
Oskar; It’s kinda late, can we just go to sleep and finish in the morning?
???; You’re never going to finish this job. No one must see what is on the other side of the portal!
Oskar; Huh? Who’s talking?

A cloaked figure appeared out of the shadows, leading something that looked like a huge, hairless dog.
K; What is that thing!? Aaargh!

The dog attacked them, pulling them down and dragging them away. K dropped a small metal box on the ground before the dog beat him.

???; Quickly, we need to get these two to ‘Bowser Catwalk.’ We will dispose of them there…

Inside the cave, the MKPCians are confused and worried.

Dark; At least the thwomps have stopped. We need to get out of here. Anyone got a plan?
Sorbet;I've got an idea. Listen, here's what we need to do...

What in the name of Wargor is going on in MKPC?! Who is this person to control particularly ugly mutant dog-monsters? Will the trapped MKPCians be able to escape the cave? And what is up with Knoah?

So since the vote was very much in favor of not changing the colors, all colors are the same, except for when people wanted their own colors changed. Hope you liked this episode, #3 should be a bit better. Right now I'm sorta just getting the plot moving.

Alright, big reveal here. I'm planning to use actual tracks, official and custom, as locations in this fanfic. If you want one of your tracks or arenas to be in the story, plz DM me a link to the creation.

Sorry to anyone who is annoyed by the potential promotion here, Ima try not to advertise them too much.

And that is a hilarious fact. Can you give me a chance with him?

Ummm let's see ... I could do that. The characters chose their own colors though , so let's do a vote. Everyone plz react with up arrow if you want colors darker, down if you want them the same.

Got it. Sorry it's taking so long, I haven't had many opportunities to write this past week. Next episode should be here in a couple days.

Ya that's fine. You good if I leave the first episode colors the way they are for now?

Um I think I'm gonna stop accepting character applications at the end of today because I already have too many characters. @Ssg-132 your character is accepted.

Oh shoot I kinda wish I'd noticed it was @68bits birthday when I posted that episode. Happy birthday!

Maybe there are similar colors?

It's finally here! Episode #1; Unofficial Officials

MKPC members are chilling out at the MKPC Peach Gardens.

Popplio: Hey look! Sixteen bubbles in five seconds!
Toad: Yaaaaaaa…
K: OK, that’s cool.

MisterCringeh, Illuzhion, and Fiery are playing mariokart a little ways away.

MisterCringeh; Battery… dying… must, get, first! NOOOOOOO!
Illuzhion; HAHA!
Fiery; Ah good game, Illuzhion. If only my blue shell had been a little faster… Wait, why does it say MisterCringeh won?
MisterCringeh; I time travelled back to this morning when I was in my house and I plugged in the battery charger so my computer wouldn't die in the middle of this race.
Fiery; No fair!
Illuzhion; While I can’t say I approve of your strategy to win that race, I think that together we can defeat you in the next, right Fiery? Or I can defeat him alone if you give up.
Fiery; Oh, it’s on.

An explosion sounds in the distance.

K; What was that?
Popplio; No idea, we should go see.


They go in the direction of the sound and and arrive at the  entrance to  the official tracks.  A crowd is grouped around the entrance.
Toad99; The portal has been blown up!
Noob; How did it happen? And what’s that black thing over there?
Melee; I’ll go check it out.
Dark; (Flies down from another part of the city) Wow, that’s a toadal disaster.
StarSplizz; Oh my head.
Dark: That wasn’t a very good joke was it
Xrunner48; Melee is coming back. I wonder what he found.
Melee: That black thing is a burned body. It looks like some guy was trying to get away from the portal as it exploded.
Xrunner48; Ooooh, that's really bad.
Toad99; So what was this person doing near the portal anyway? We need to figure out who they were.
Dietsoda: (drops out of a tree and pokes Toad99 on top of his head) He set the bomb off, that’s what he was doing here.
StarSplizz; How do you know that?
Dietsoda: I heard a sound and came here to see what was going on. No one ever goes to the tracks at this hour. I’ve already searched the area. There are prints of something being dragged away from the entrance, you muggles have probably wiped the tracks out by now stomping around the way you’ve been.
Toad: Whoa whoa whoa. That wasn’t very nice!
Nudge; But it was pretty funny!
Knoah: But whatever. It’s a clue. Where did the tracks lead?
Dietsoda: Toward the custom tracks portal area, but-
Toad: LET’S GOOO!!!
Nudge; HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA
Oskar: What about the official tracks entrance?
K: Stay behind with me, we’ll start repairing it. Dietsoda, can you follow the others? They’ll need help.
Dietsoda: Oh, young mayfly, I don’t do well with other people, I’m gonna follow these tracks alone. I am, officially, a loner.

Alrighty then, go ahead and give me some feedback, that was a little rough (I suddenly realized I had to introduce like 15 people simultaneously). Hope you enjoyed this!

Search failed ):0. please post personality or link. You've got lines, but for now I have no idea how well they match up to your personality.

Guess what! You will be! I have even designed a character for you. No hassle!

Name: Knoah
Color: white
Species: human
Personality: quiet but makes random funny comments.
Ability: can make clones of himself that last for a short time.

Well this is a pretty good number I will start writing the first episode today.

Ok, just plz send me the required info so I can use your character.

EDIT; are you another @Knoah alt?

Alright, some updates. First, on the disclaimer, mild violence, yes it will be there, mainly done to a collection of bots and myself. It won't be much worse than anything in other fanfics. I can put a synopsis of each episode after the episode is published, omitting details of 'injuries'.

First episode may be a little delayed due to Christmas coming up, or it may be early! I'm still waiting to see if anyone else wants to join before episode 1. Even after it's started, you can still join anytime. Might ping a couple people ( I apologize in advance).

Wait did I steal someone else's fanfic name? 💀

Honestly have no idea what to call this fanfic.

Anyways this'll be my first fanfic. It'll be about MKPC users banding together to try and stop someone from destroying the MKPC world. Sooo... yah. If you want to join, I would like:

your name,
color (I'll try to get them all right, this is my first time),
species,
personality,
skills/abilities,
anything else you wanna put.

DISCLAIMER
This fanfic may will contain some, mild?, violence. Probably nothing too gory.

People who have joined:
Dark
Dietsoda
xrunner48 (vibri)
Popplio
K (That is me)
Oskar
Toad99
Fiery
StarSplizz
Melee
Noob
Toad
MisterCringeh
IlluZhion
sorbet
Nudge
TJ
...



Knoah